非谓语动词在写作中的运用.ppt

Non-finite Verbs in writing非非谓语动词在写作中的在写作中的应用用1.Our Spring Outing National College Entrance Examination is coming.To relax ourselves,our class had a meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing.Having a barbecue is our choice.The next day,we set off early in the morning.We climbed the mountain,talking and laughing.When we arrived,we began to barbecue.Having had a big dinner,we enjoyed the warm sunshine and the beautiful view.We were tired but happy.What do you think of it?2011年浙江省高考考年浙江省高考考试说明明(写作写作)考生考生应能能 (1)清楚、清楚、连贯地地传递信息，表达意思；信息，表达意思；(2)有效有效应用所学用所学语言知言知识。2.Our Spring Outing National College Entrance Examination is coming.To relax ourselves,our class had a meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing.Having a barbecue is our choice.The next day,we set off early in the morning.We climbed the mountain,talking and laughing.When we arrived,we began to barbecue.Having had a big dinner,we enjoyed the warm sunshine and the beautiful view.We were tired but happy.3.1.Making our city greener is everyones duty.2.The government is determined to continue the green program.3.I find my hometown changed so much.4.Having fresh air,trees can reduce air pollution.5.Every effort to make the program makes a difference.5.5.定定语2.2.宾语4.4.状状语3.3.宾补1.1.主主语找出非谓语动词，并判断成分4.1.Looking from the top of mountain,the city is beautiful.2.In my opinion,climb mountain is an enjoyable thing.3.Which team is good at cooking?A team called itself the supper cook.Correction5.写作中非写作中非谓语动词常常见的的错误1、状、状语动作行作行为者与主句主者与主句主语不一致不一致Looking from the top of mountain,the city is beautiful.Looked from the top of mountain,the city is beautiful.6.写作中非写作中非谓语动词常常见的的错误2、用、用动词短短语充当主充当主语、表、表语和和宾语2.In my opinion,climb mountain is an enjoyable thing.In my opinion,climbing mountain is an enjoyable thing.7.写作中非写作中非谓语动词常常见的的错误3、主、主动、被、被动含含义混淆混淆 A team calling itself the supper cook.3.Which team is good at cooking?A team called itself the supper cook.A team called the supper cook.8.1.It is high time we took part in some activities.We want to make ourselves more healthy.2.A girl climbed so hard that she lost her temper.She complained about the long walk.3.The monitor has set a good example for us.Therefore,the monitor deserves the honor and we should learn from her.Connection9.It is high time we took part in some activities.We want to make ourselves more healthy.It is high time we took part in some activities to make ourselves more healthy.+目的状目的状语 10.Wangqi climbed so hard that she lost her temper.She complained about the long walk.Wangqi got so angry that she lost her temper,complaining about the long walk.伴随状伴随状语 +11.The monitor has set a good example for us.Therefore,the monitor deserves the honor and we should learn from her.Having set a good example for us,the monitor deserves the honor and we should learn from her.原因状原因状语 +12.高考高考临近，保持良好的心近，保持良好的心态有助于减有助于减轻焦焦虑，还能增能增强克服困克服困难的勇气的勇气。Step1：拆分成几个：拆分成几个简单句句(中文中文)高考高考临近。近。保持良好的心保持良好的心态很重要。很重要。它有助于减它有助于减轻焦焦虑（relax）和勇敢地克服困和勇敢地克服困难。Step2：分：分别翻翻译这几个几个简单句句National College Entrance Examination is coming.It is important to have a right attitude.It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.13.Step3：合并句子：合并句子 With National College Entrance Examination coming,it is important to have a right attitude to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.National College Entrance Examination is coming.It is important to have a right attitude.It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.Sentence1:14.Step3：合并句子：合并句子 With College Entrance Examination coming,it is important to have a right attitude which helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.College Entrance Examination is coming.It is important to have a right attitude.It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.Sentence2:Tip:Try to use differentways to express.15.建建议 有足有足够的睡眠是必要的。的睡眠是必要的。原因原因1.它能有效的改善我它能有效的改善我们的的课堂学堂学习。2.保持健康的身体是保持健康的身体是进一步学一步学习及工作及工作的基的基础。（20112011高考模高考模拟）要求：要求：1.1.用用2-32-3句句话表达表格内容表达表格内容 2.2-32.2-3句句话要有要有连贯性性Having a try16.建建议 有足有足够的睡眠是必要的。的睡眠是必要的。原因原因1.它能有效的改善我它能有效的改善我们的的课堂学堂学习。2.保持健康的身体是保持健康的身体是进一步学一步学习及工作及工作的基的基础。Having a tryIt is necessary to have enough sleep.Having enough sleep is necessary.It will be an effective way to improve our learning in the class.Keeping healthy is the base for our further study and work.To Keep healthy is the base for our further study and work.17.Passage：Having enough sleep is necessary,because it will be an effective way to improve our learning in the class.Moreover,to keep healthy is the base for our further study and work.Tip:Never ignore the conjunction.18.1.beggar,lie,sleep2.Mr.Li,hurry,pay no attention to3.stick out，trip over(绊倒倒),angry A beggar19.A beggarWriting2.Mr Li hurried home,paying no attention to a beggar.1.The beggar lay on the ground,sleeping.3.Suddenly,the beggar stuck out his legs,tripping over Mr Li,which made him very angry.Make an ending20.Exchange and discuss your partners composition,following the criteria.Criteria（标准）准）Content（内容）（内容）Language（语语言）言）Coherence（连贯连贯）Pair work21.A beggar One day,hurrying home,Mr.Li paid no attention to the beggar who lay on the ground,sleeping.Suddenly,the beggar stuck out his legs,tripping Mr.Li over,which made him very angry.Realizing the beggar was a disabled person,Mr.Li began to search for some money in his pocket to give him.He took out a 100-yuan note,which was suddenly blown into the air by the wind.Seeing this,the beggar jumped quickly to run after the note,making Mr.Li so surprised that he stood there with his mouth open.22.Rewrite the composition and hand it in.Homework23.