1、鄂尔多斯市中考作文评分标准第五档(910分):很好地完成了规定的写作任务。包含所有内容要点,紧扣主题,结构完整,条理清晰,能恰当使用连接词表示各种逻辑关系;语句流畅,表达清楚准确;使用较为丰富的语法结构和词汇,且错误极少;书写规范,字数符合要求。第四档(78分):较好地完成了规定的写作任务。基本上包含所有要点,紧扣主题,结构较为完整,条理清晰,能使用正确的连接词;语句完整,意思清楚;语法和词汇方面错误较少且不妨碍理解;书写较为规范,字数符合要求。第三档(56分):基本上完成了写作任务。包含主要内容要点,结构欠完整,但不影响文章整体效果;少数语句不通顺,意思基本清楚;语法和词汇方面存在一些错误;
2、书写基本规范,字数基本符合要求。第二档(34分):未能按要求完成规定的写作任务。能写出一些关键句子,但句式单调,词汇有限;写作内容缺少连贯性,影响理解;语法结构和词汇错误较多;书写欠规范,字数过少。第一档(12分):未完成规定的写作任务。能写出与写作内容相关的个别句子,但语句不完整,语法和词汇错误很多,书写不规范。不得分(0分):写作内容与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清;写作中抄袭阅读篇章中与作文话题无关的句子或段落。1请根据以下提示用英语介绍一位你的好友。要求词数不少于60词,可适当发挥。提示:1.姓名、性别、年龄; 2.兴趣爱好; 3.家庭成员Li Ming is my good fri
3、end. He is twelve years old. He is a nice boy.He likes football, basketball and table tennis. He plays them on Saturday and Sunday. He likes reading too. He reads books after school.This is Li Mings mother. She likes table tennis. And this is Li Mings father. His favourite sport is football. Li Ming
4、 likes to play sports with his parents.2假设你们班刚来了一位新同学,请根据以下表格的内容,写一篇不少于60词的短文介绍你的新同学。NameLi HuanhuanEnglish nameHelenFromShanghaiHow old11years oldFavourite sportTable tennisFavourite colourWhite I have a new classmate. Her name is Li Huanhuan. And her English name is Helen. She is a nice girl. She
5、is from Shanghai. It is a very big city in China. She is eleven years old. Her favourite sport is table tennis and white is her favourite colour. I like table tennis too. We often play it after school. 3假如你叫Jenny,请根据下表提供的信息,用英语介绍自己及家人。成员爸爸妈妈哥哥妹妹我职业老师护士学生/学生爱好踢足球打网球打篮球画画读书I am Jenny. There are five p
6、eople in my family. They are my parents, my brother, my sister and I. My father is a teacher at a school. He likes playing football. My mother is a nurse at a hospital. She likes playing tennis. Tom is my brother. He is a student. He likes playing basketball. My sister is five years old. She likes d
7、rawing. I am a student too. I like reading. I love my family very much.4假如张红是你的同班同学。请结合以下提示信息,写一篇英语短文介绍张红。不少于60词,可适当发挥。提示:1.13岁,长头发,大眼睛;2.来自上海,父亲是酒店经理,母亲是英语教师;3.家在学校附近,喜欢早上在学校操场打篮球。Zhang Hong is my classmate. She is thirteen years old with long hairs and two big eyes. She is from Shanghai. Shanghai
8、is a very big city. There are three people in her family: her father, her mother and she. Her father is the manager of a hotel and her mother is an English teacher at a school. Her home is near our school. She likes playing basketball on the playground in the morning. This is my classmate and we are
9、 good friends.5你的学校漂亮吗?你喜欢它吗?你的学校有哪些建筑物?请根据Module3所学的词汇、短语及句型,写一篇60词左右的短文向大家介绍你的校园。My school is very beautiful. I like it very much. There is a classroom building, a library, a playground, a science building, an office building and a dining hall in my school. The classroom building is between the of
10、fice building and the library. There are many books in the library. The science building is near library. On the left of the science building, there is a dining hall. The playground is behind the dining hall.6操场餐厅图书馆实验楼教学楼花园办公楼大门提示:1.注意there be句型及方位介词的使用;2.短文开头已给出,不计入总数;3.词语提示:garden 花园假如你是王勇,右图为你学校
11、的地图,请根据下面提示,写一篇不少于60词的英语短文,介绍你的学校。Hello. Im Wang Yong. This is a map of our school. There are five buildings in our school: a library, a classroom building, an office building, a dining hall and a lab building.There is a small garden near the gate. On the left of the garden, there is an office build
12、ing. Behind the office building is the classroom building with 24 classrooms. And there is a library behind it. Next to the library is a dining hall. There is a lab building in front of the dining hall. The playground is on the right of the school. It is very large. Our school is nice and big. Welco
13、me to our school! 7假如你是Tom,来自美国。请根据下表提示写一篇英语短文介绍你的一日三餐。提示:Breakfastone egg, some breadLunchvegetables, rice, meatDinnerchicken, vegetables, fruit注意:内容可适当拓展,60词左右。Hello! My name is Tom. Im from America. Here is my food and drink.I eat one egg and some bread for breakfast at home. I have lunch at scho
14、ol with my classmates. There are vegetables, rice and meat for lunch in the dining hall. The lunch is good. I have dinner at home with my parents. We have chicken, vegetables and after dinner we have some fruit.8请以“How to keep healthy”为题,用英语写一篇70词左右的短文,介绍你保持健康的方法。Everybody wants to be healthy. We al
15、l know food is very important. There are many healthy foods. You can have more bananas, apples, oranges, tomatoes and carrots, because fruit and vegetables are good for you. But dont eat too much chocolate. It is not healthy food. Healthy food can make you strong and happy. Remember there is a sayin
16、g“An apple a day keeps the doctor away”. Sports can also keep you healthy. Get up early and do some sports every day. Dont be lazy. You will be healthy and happy.9 6:30 am起床7:30 am上学8:00 am开始上课4:20 pm放学5:00 pm回家6:00 pm吃晚饭9:20 pm上床睡觉某英文报正在以My school day 为题向中学生展开征文活动。假如你叫Jeeny,请根据表格中的内容,写一篇英文小短文参加活动。内
17、容可以适当扩展,词数不少于70词。My school dayIm Jenny. I get up at half past six in the morning and then I have my breakfast. I go to school at half past seven and I start work at eight oclock. We have seven lessons a day. I finish school at twenty past four and then I go home at five oclock. I have dinner with my
18、 family at six oclock. At seven oclock I do my homework. I go to bed at twenty past nine. What a busy day!10ActivitiesTimeGet up6:00Go to school7:00Lessons start7:40Have a break9:30Have lunch12:00Lessons start2:00Go home5:20Have dinner6:30Do homework7:00-9:00Go to bed9:30假如你叫李浩,右面是你一天的活动,请根据表格内容写一篇题
19、为“My school day”的小短文。词数:80词左右。My school day Hello! Im Li Hao. I get up at six oclock in the morning. I go to school by bike at seven oclock. Lessons start at twenty to eight. There are four lessons in the morning. We have a break at half past nine. I have lunch at school at twelve oclock. Lessons st
20、art at two oclock in the afternoon. I go home at five twenty. In the evening, I have dinner at half past six. I do my homework from seven to nine. Then I go to bed at half past nine. This is my school day. Can you tell me about your school day?11假如你叫Lisa,来自英国,现住北京。请用英语介绍自己喜欢的蔬菜、饮料和水果,并说明他们的健康情况。内容可适
21、当拓展,词数不少于70.Im Lisa and Im twelve years old. I come from England. Im in Beijing with my parents now. I like China very much. I eat rice and vegetables every day. Sometimes I eat noodles with beef and potatoes. They are healthy food. My favourite vegetables are carrots and tomatoes. Cola is my favour
22、ite drink but it isnt healthy. Too much sugar is bad for us. I dont like tea, but my parents like it very much. I like fruit. Apples are my favourite . I eat two apples a day.12假设一家英文报社正在以“My good friend”为题征集作品。请根据提示内容用英文介绍你的好朋友,踊跃投稿。内容可以适当扩展,词数不少于70。提示: 1.好朋友名字叫Alice,来自英国,现在北京教学; 2.九点钟上课,周一和周五上午两节课
23、; 3.最喜欢中国饺子; 4.认为北京市一座美丽的城市。My good friendI have a good friend. Her name is Alice. She comes from England. She teaches English in Beijing now. She starts work at nine oclock and she gives two lessons on Monday and Friday mornings. She likes starting lessons with English songs. And she is kind to her
24、 students. They like her very much. Dumplings are her favourite Chinese food. She can eat them in the school dining hall. She thinks Beijing is big and beautiful.13请根据下面的提示内容,用英语写一篇短文,介绍两种你喜欢的动物。可以适当扩展,不少于70词。提示: 1.有一个动物园,我喜欢那里的老虎和大象; 2.老虎大约两岁,来自哈尔滨,很强壮; 3.大象是亚洲象,高大且性格温和。 There is a zoo near my home
25、. There are many kinds of animals in the zoo, such as bears, zebras and giraffes. They come from different countries and they eat different food. I like tigers and elephants there. There are two tigers and they are from Harbin. They are about two years old and they are strong. They are a little dang
26、erous so I stay away from them. The elephants are from Asia. They are big and tall and they are kind. So I usually stand near them. The elephants like eating the grass in my hands. Whats your favourite animal?14请根据表格中内容提示,以“A visit to the zoo”为题介绍一下动物园里新来的两只动物。词数:60词左右。animalnamefromfoodcharacterage
27、pandaFeifeiChinaBambooLovely, shy2lionKarlAfricaMeatStrong,dangerous3A visit to the zooThere are two new animals in the zoo. The pandas name is Feifei. She is from China. She likes eating bamboo. She is lovely and shy. She is two years old. The other animal is a lion. His name is Karl. He is from Af
28、rica. He likes eating meat. He is very strong and dangerous. He is three years old. I love them very much.15假设李敏是你的好朋友。请根据下面提示用英语写一篇短文介绍李敏的学习和生活。内容可适当拓展,不少于70词。提示: 1.13岁,在武汉上学; 2.每天早上八点开始上课,四节课,下午上三节课,五点半放学; 3.最喜欢计算机课,善用计算机做事情; 4.周末通常玩电脑游戏或者打篮球。 Li Min is my good friend. She is a thirteen-year-old g
29、irl, and she studies in Wuhan. In the morning, she starts work at eight oclock and she has four lessons. There are three lessons in the afternoon. She finishes school at half past five in the afternoon. Her favourite subject is computer. She is good at using the computer. She can write her homework
30、and talk with her friends on the computer. At weekends she usually plays computer games or plays basketball with her friends. This is my good friend. Who is your friend?16姓名Jenny年龄15籍贯英国伦敦市学校Apple Tree School家庭情况父亲是老师,母亲是经理,两个哥哥是工人,一个妹妹是学生爱好爱吃米饭、肉和蔬菜;喜欢读书、上网聊天(chat)假如你在网上结识了一个名叫Jenny 的网友,请根据她发的有关信息,
31、向你的同学简单的介绍一下她。I have a net friend. Her name is Jenny. She is from London, England. She is fifteen years old and studies at Apple Tree School. There are six people in her family. Her father is a teacher and her mother is a manager. She has got two brothers. They are workers. She has also got a sister
32、. She is a student too. She likes to eat meat, rice and vegetables. In her free time, she likes reading and chatting on the Internet with her friends. I like my net friend very much.17爸爸一台电脑妈妈一个蛋糕妹妹一首歌朋友们花、钢笔和贺卡等假如你叫李航,今天是你十二岁的生日,收到了很多生日礼物。请根据表格中的信息,用英语写一篇短文介绍你收到的礼物。内容可适当拓展,不少于70词。My name is Li Hang
33、. Im twelve years old. Today is my birthday. My parents have a birthday party for me at home. At the party, I get a lot of presents. My father gives me a new computer. My mother makes a big birthday cake for me. My little sister sings Happy Birthday to me. My friends give me flowers, pens, cards and
34、 so on. I am very happy today and I love them.18WhopresentwhyYour father一件漂亮的连衣裙妈妈喜欢漂亮的衣服Your sister一个大蛋糕给妈妈带来好运You自己制作一张贺卡这份礼物很特殊假如你是周杰,这个周日是你妈妈的生日。你和爸爸、妹妹都想给她一份特别的礼物。请根据表格提示,以“Special Presents for Mother ”为题,写一篇不少于60词的英语短文。参考词汇:bring good luck 带来好运Special presents for motherHi, my name is Zhou Jie
35、. This Sunday is my mothers birthday. My father, my sister and I give her some special presents. My mother likes going shopping and always buys expensive clothes. So my father gives her a beautiful dress. My sister makes a big birthday cake for my mother and she thinks the big cake can bring good lu
36、ck to mother. I make a birthday card for her. I think it is special. My mother is happy to see these presents.19假如你叫王红,家里有一台电脑,你常用电脑做以下事情:做作业;与朋友交谈;听音乐;上网查列车时刻表等。请根据以上内容写一篇英语小短文,谈谈你用电脑做的情况。内容可适当扩展,词数不少于70。My name is Wang Hong. There is a computer at my home. I can use it to do many things. I often u
37、se the computer to do my homework and get some information for my homework. I often talk with my friends and listen to music on the Internet. Sometimes I send emails to my friends. I also go on the Internet to check the times of trains. I like the computer very much. It is my good friend.20人物活动一个女孩拍
38、照一个男孩吃冰激凌一个年轻人湖边画画一些妇女跳舞一些男孩有的踢足球,有的晒太阳、交谈今天是星期天,天气很好,公园里有许多人。他们在干什么呢?请根据表格内容写一篇英文小短文。词数不少于70词。Today is Sunday. The weather is very good. There are a lot of people in the park. What are they doing? Look! A girl is taking photos with her parents. A boy is eating an ice cream and a young man is drawin
39、g near the lake. Some women are dancing under the big tree. There are some boys on the grass. Some of them are playing football and the others are lying in the sun and talking.How happy they are!21成员活动爸爸和弟弟打扫房子妈妈和妹妹购物爷爷做灯笼奶奶和我包饺子假设春节快到了,你和家人正在为春节做准备。请根据表格内容写一篇70词左右的英文短文,给大家介绍你们的准备活动。注意:1.可以适当发挥; 2.用
40、上现在进行时态。Spring festival is coming. My family members are getting ready for it. Look! My father and my little brother are cleaning our house and sweeping away bad luck. My mother is doing some shopping with my little sister. They buy a lot of presents. My grandfather is making red lanterns. They look
41、 very beautiful. My grandmother is making jiaozi in the kitchen. Im helping her there. We are all happy.22人物活动李阳唱歌王红弹钢琴李华和赵燕跳舞英语老师与一些学生交谈汤姆制作生日卡片我和杰克制作生日蛋糕今天周六,是王林的生日,但他父母不在身边。作为他的同学和老师,你们正在给他准备一场生日聚会。请根据表格内容,写一篇描述准备活动的英语短文。注意:用上现在进行时;词数不少于80.It is Saturday. But we are all in the classroom. We are g
42、etting ready for Wang Lins birthday party. Look! Li Yang is singing an English song. Who is playing the piano? It is Wang Hong. She plays very well. What are Li Hua and Zhao Yan doing? They are dancing. Where is our English teacher? Oh, she is talking with some students. Tom is making some birthday
43、cards and I am making a birthday cake with Jack. We are all very busy but happy.23假如你是Ann,正和父母在海德公园(Hyde Park)度假。现在是星期一上午十点,请给你的祖母寄一张明信片,告诉她你们正在做的事情:妈妈正坐在椅子上看书,爸爸正和一位来自美国的叔叔打网球。要求:书写认真,可适当发挥。Dear Grandma,Greeting from Hyde Park!Im enjoying myself in Hyde Park with my parents. The park is big and bea
44、utiful. My mother is sitting on a chair and reading a book. My father is playing tennis with an uncle from America. They are enjoying themselves. What are you doing? Please tell me. See you! Yours, Ann24假如你是王力,春节到了,你想给你的国外朋友Jim写一封信。心中要表达你的祝福,告诉Jim你正在做的事情,并询问他正在做什么。Dear Jim,The Spring Festival is com
45、ing. And we are getting ready for it. MY mother is cooking food for the festival. My father and I are decorating the house. Parents dont need to go to work and I dont need to go to school. We usually make dumplings together, and we usually get new clothes and presents. What are you doing now? Are yo
46、u getting ready for the coming New Year? Tell me about the things you are doing.Best wishes. Yours,Wang Li25请根据以下内容写一篇小短文,介绍你的朋友Tom.Tom 是美国人,今年13岁,在北京市第12中学学习。他英语很好,汉语说的也不错。他喜欢球类运动,经常放学后和同学们在操场踢足球。要求:内容可适当扩展,词数不少于70。提示词语:No.12 Middle SchoolHello, everyone. I have a good friend. His name is Tom. He i
47、s from America. He is thirteen years old this year. He likes China very much. He is studying in No.12 Middle School of Beijing now. He is good at English and he speaks Chinese well too. Tom likes ball games very much. His favourite sport is football. He often plays football with his classmates in the playground after school.26假如你所在的学校将