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高一英语短文改错专项练习（一） 命题人：右臂 审题人：左膀 2016.11.8 高老师的左膀右臂祝大家期中考顺利假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。ANearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I plantedsome cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden. Since then for all these year we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!B It is three years now since I graduate from Xinhua High School. Last Sunday, the class that I was on held a get-together, which took us a long time prepare. It was indeed not easy to get in the touch with everybody and set a well time for all of us. We all enjoyed a precious day greatly, remember the time we spent together and the people they were familiar with. It was a pity which some of us were not present as they had gone to abroad for further studies, but they called back or sent greeting card from different places.C Im an Australian boy aging 17 and Im crazy about music. It is one of the most important thing in my life. I listen music whenever I can. I have a minidisk player, with it I can have access to music whether walking in the street or ride on the bus. At home, there has a CD player in my room, and the music is on all the time. I like rock music best of all. My favorite band is Rolling Stones, which had produced 40 albums since 1966. It so happened that there was a living concert of Rolling Stones last Sunday. I decided to go. It was a great fun. I am also fond of classical music. I especially enjoy playing Beethoven once I am doing my homework. D In my view,the Internet is helpful.It is known to all,the Internet is playing a important part in our daily life.On the Internet,we can read news home and abroad and got as much information as we can,we can also attend to the net school and read many books.We can even do shopping online.Beside,our ability to operate the computer can be improved great.So we should not be addicted to the Internet,or we will get our life and study destroying.In addition,we should keep off the harmful website.Anyhow,this doesnt prevent the Internet from becoming our friend E Time fly like an arrow. Im already in the second half of Senior Grade 3 beforeI realized it. It is only a little more than three months before I graduate middle school.At the present, Im busy review my lessons in order to take the College EntranceExamination. I hope to go to Beijing University, that is one of the best universities notonly in China but also in the world. Ill try my best turn my dream to reality. Most of my classmates are also studying very hard to realize their dreams. I do wish everyone willbe able to enter an university or college.FIn order to promote participation in outdoor exercise, our school had organized an activity to climb the West Mountain on April 10. The moment we arrived at the foot of a mountain, we set out for the top in high spirit. We supported each other to pass the rocky areas on the course of the climb. Laughing and cheering, we eventually reached the summit, there we were greeted by the bright sunshine and fresh air. Viewing from the top, the city was extremely beautiful This event was very benefit, for not only we take a break from our heavy school workload, but we also learned what to cooperate. Therefore, we strongly suggest that similar events are held every year!答案and解析：A1:beforeago. ago “从现在起的若干时间以前”；时间段+ago与一般过去时连用。before泛指“从过去起的若干时间以前”，意思是 “距过去某时以前”“与其（毋宁）”，常和完成时连用，这里谓语动词planted用的是过去式，故用ago。2:在的帮助下用固定搭配with the help of。所以把by改成of。3:根据句意和前面的all these 可知，用可数名词year的复数形式years。all these years 的意思是这么多年。4:根据时间状语Since then可知，本句用现在完成进行时。所以把 had 变成have。5:as a result 是固定搭配。所以在As和 result之间加a。6:因为哪里落了种子就在哪里长，所以这种植物长得到处是。所以把somewhere（某地）改成everywhere（到处）。7:这种果子个头小，但是汁多、味道好。这里放在are后面，应该用形容词。所以把taste改成tasty。8:根据后面的them可知，这里用many表示可数名词的许多，而much修饰不可数名词。所以把much 改成many。9:英语中although是连词，but是并列连词。所以不能同时用。所以把but改成yet或去掉but。10:tomatoes 是名词，应该用形容词来修饰。副词常常修饰动词。所以把wonderfully改为wonderful。B1:graduate graduated 毕业是一个过去发生的事情，使用过去时2:on in 在具体的哪个班级使用介词in3:time后加to 固定句型it takes sb some time to do sth4:well good time是名词，应该使用形容词修饰5:athe 冠词错用。根据句意，此处特指：“聚会的那一天”，应该用定冠词the6:remember remembering remember与we构成主动关系，用现在分词7:they we与上文一致，是我们熟悉的人8:which that that引导起真正的主语从句9:to去掉 多介词。abroad为副词，表示“到国外；在国外”用go abroad，无需再加介词to10:card cards根据上下文可知这里应该使用复数形式C1. aging-aged aged作形容词，意为.岁的，后跟数词，只能作后置定语，这是aged的特殊 用法2. thing-things one of+形容词最高级+可数名词复数3. listen后加to listen为不及物动词，在加宾语时必须借助介词to4. it-which本句为定语从句，此处指代minidisk player，且在下半句中作with的宾语，所以应用关系代词which来引导。It不能引导定语从句5. ride-riding此处whether.or.连接两个并列结构，形式需与walking保持一致,表示两种状态6. has-is there be句型7. had-has 时间状语为1996，其谓语动词应该用现在完成时8. living-live living用作adj作前置定语一般表示活着的，现存的；而此处表示 非录音的，现场直播的，应该用形容词live9. a great fun 中的a去掉 fun作名词时，为不可数名词10. once- when此处表示当.的时候，once表示一旦.，不符合语境DIn my view, the Internet is helpful. It（改为As） is known to all, the Internet is playing a(改为an) important part in our daily life. On the Internet, we can read news（加介词at） home and abroad and got（改为get） as much information as we can. We can also attend to(去掉to) the net school and read many books. We can even do shopping online. Beside（改为besides）, our ability to operate the computer can be improved great（改为greatly）.So（But） we should not be addicted to the Internet, or well get our life and study destroying（destroyed）. In addition, we should keep off the harmful website（websites）. Anyhow, this doesnt prevent the Internet from becoming our friend.ETimeflylike an arrow. Im already in the second half of Senior Grade 3 before 1. fliesIrealizedit. It is only a little more than three months before I graduate2. realize 3. frommiddle school. Atthepresent, Im busyreviewmy lessons in order to take 4. 去掉5 . reviewingthe College Entrance Examination. I hope to go to Beijing University,thatis one 6. whichof the best universities not only in China but also in the world. Ill try my best turn 7. tomy dreamtoreality. Most of my classmates are also studying very hard to realize 8. intotheirwishes. I do wish everyone will be able to enteranuniversity or college. 9.hope 10. aF本文讲述了作者参加的学校组织的一次爬山活动，简单描述了当时的情景以及过后的体会。【小题1】去掉had 考查时态。本文主要讲述了作者的学校组织的一次活动，故用一般过去时。把had organized改成organized，句意为：我们学校在4月10日组织了一次爬西山的活动。【小题2】athe 考查冠词。根据上文可知学校组织了爬西山这一活动，本句再次提到这座山，是特指，故把a改成the。句意为：我们一到达山脚。【小题3】spiritspirits 考查名词。考查了固定搭配：in high spirits，句意为：情绪高涨、兴高采烈。故把spirit改成spirits。句意为：我们兴高采烈地开始向山顶出发。【小题4】onin/during 考查介词。根据下文的course，可知是在爬山的过程中大家互相鼓励。故把on改成in或during。【小题5】therewhere或者在there前加上and 考查定语从句或并列句。there之前是一个逗号，故之后不可以是一个完整的句子。改正方法一：把there改成where，构成定语从句，先行词为the summit，代入从句中担当地点状语。改正方法二：在there前加上and，形成并列句即可。【小题6】ViewingViewed 考查非谓语动词。本句考查非谓语动词担当状语，主句主语为the city，和动词view之间存在被动关系，故把viewing改成viewed，形成被动关系。句意为：从山顶看，城市尤其美丽。【小题7】benefitbeneficial 考查形容词担当表语。本句考查形容词担当表语，故把benefit改成beneficial，句意为：这次事件非常有好处。【小题8】only后加上did 考查倒装。本句考查not only放在句首前，句子需要部分倒装这一用法，故在only后加上did，构成部分倒装。句意为：因为我们不仅从繁忙的学业中得到了休息，。【小题9】whathow 考查疑问词。根据下文的cooperate可知，此处指的是如何合作而非合作什么。故把what改成how，句意为：我们也学会了该如何合作。【小题10】arebe 考查虚拟语气。此处考查suggest表示建议时，如果其后接宾语从句，从句中使用虚拟语气：should+动词原形且should可以省略这一用法，故把are改成should be，同时should可省这一用法。