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(完整word)托福满分作文范文托福写作辅导:托福考试满分作文欣赏（）Whichonedoyouprefer，tosolveproblemsonyourownexperienceandknowledge，ortoaskothersforadvice?Asknowledgeandexperienceserveastwimtowersinproblem-solving,oneisoftenpresentedwithtwomajorpathsthatpavethewayforfinalfulfillment，eitthertowrackhisbrain,justlikewhathappenedtoNeuton,siitingformanyyearsunderanappletreeandeventuallyfiguringoutondofthegreatestuniversalrulesthatgovernthewholeglobe,ortoseekforotherswidsomethroughtheiradvice，justasinthecaseofBenjininFranklin,gatheringgreatmindsunder oneroofandthenestablishingamostworldrenownlibray.Bothwayswork.Whenapracticalgoalisinvolved,however，BenjiminFranklinmaybestberegarededasarolemodelinthisrespectandaskingpeopleforadviceoftenturnouttobetheprimealternative。Experienceandknowledgeborrowedorlearnedfromothersadvicecontributegreatlytoeffectivenessandeffeciencyforagoalaccomplishment.Notallexperienceandknowledgerelatedtoproblemsolvingcanbeobtainedbypersonaleffortaloneduetolimitationsofmindandcapabilitiesofeachindividual。Asinglethoughtinsomeonesmindis,moreoftenthannot，farlessshiningcomparedwithgroupswisdom。Thatexplainsthefamousoldsayingthatoneseesfurtherwhenstandingupontheshouldersofpastgreatgiants;thatexplainswhyagreatleaderisalwayswithgreaterminds;thatalsoexplainswhyteamworkincorperationishighlyemphasizedinthe21stcentury。Brainstormandexchangeofideasbetweendifferentthoughtsneverfailtoenhancecapabilitiesofeachindividulainvolved,ateam,acompany,aninstitution,acountry，oreventheentireglobalvillage.Askingothersadviceinsteadofgettingeverythingdoneononesownpromotesdemocracyandcommunicationtoo.Intermsofdemocracy，itisnecessarytogiveothersrightsandchancestospeaksincetheproblemmayconcernthemindifferentways，andtheirsayinginturnreflectsourrespecttowardfreedomofspeechaswellastheirwisdom.Intermsofcommunication,ideaexchangesometimesfocusesmorethansolutions,andherebybettermutualunderstandingaboutperspectives，principles，praticalitiesandpersonalitiesofeachother.Admittelyturningtoothersforhelpandsuggestionbynomeansreferstoabsoluteandirresponsibledependence.Considerationupondifferentthoughtsandideasbroadensourmind,enlargesourvision,furthersunderstanding,enhancesmoreeffectiveandefficientbrainstorm,andstressesmutualrespectingroupsandcommunities,whichundoubtedlygivesrisetobetter，ifnotthebestsolutions.AsisparaphrasedfromJohnFKenedy，brainstormed，thereislittlewecannotdowhiledivided,thereislittlewecando.托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏（2)CaseofBenjininFranklin，gatheringgreatmindsunderoneroofandthenestablishingamostworldrenownlibray。Bothwayswork。Whenapracticalgoalisinvolved，however，BenjiminFranklinmaybestberegarededasarolemodelinthisrespectandaskingpeopleforadviceoftenturnouttobetheprimealternative.Experienceandknowledgeborrowedorlearnedfromothersadvicecontributegreatlytoeffectivenessandeffeciencyforagoal-accomplishment.Notallexperienceandknowledgerelatedtoproblemsolvingcanbeobtainedbypersonaleffortaloneduetolimitationsofmindandcapabilitiesofeachindividual.Asinglethoughtinsomeonesmindis,moreoftenthannot，farlessshiningcomparedwithgroupswisdom。Thatexplainsthefamousoldsayingthatoneseesfurtherwhenstandingupontheshouldersofpastgreatgiants；thatexplainswhyagreatleaderisalwayswithgreaterminds；thatalsoexplainswhyteamworkincorperationishighlyemphasizedinthe21stcentury.Brainstormandexchangeofideasbetweendifferentthoughtsneverfailtoenhancecapabilitiesofeachindividulainvolved,ateam,acompany,aninstitution，acountry，oreventheentireglobalvillage。Askingothersadviceinsteadofgettingeverythingdoneononesownpromotesdemocracyandcommunicationtoo.Intermsofdemocracy,itisnecessarytogiveothersrightsandchancestospeaksincetheproblemmayconcernthemindifferentways,andtheirsayinginturnreflectsourrespecttowardfreedomofspeechaswellastheirwisdom。Intermsofcommunication，ideaexchangesometimesfocusesmorethansolutions，andherebybettermutualunderstandingaboutperspectives,principles,praticalitiesandpersonalitiesofeachother。Admittelyturningtoothersforhelpandsuggestionbynomeansreferstoabsoluteandirresponsibledependence.Considerationupondifferentthoughtsandideasbroadensourmind，enlargesourvision,furthersunderstanding,enhancesmoreeffectiveandefficientbrainstorm,andstressesmutualrespectingroupsandcommunities,whichundoubtedlygivesrisetobetter,ifnotthebestsolutions.AsisparaphrasedfromJohnFKenedy，brainstormed,thereislittlewecannotdowhiledivided，thereislittlewecando。托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏（3）Aftertheycompletetheiruniversitystudies，somestudentsliveintheirhometowns.Othersliveindifferenttownsandcities。Whichdoyouthinkisbeterr？Givereasonsforyouranswer。Aftertheycompletetheiruniverrsitystudies，somestudentspreferrtoliveintheirhometownswhileotherschoosetoliveindifferenttownsorcities.Everybodyhashisownreasonsforhispreference。Aftermygraduation,Iwillgobackandliveinmyhomecity。Ihavemadethisdecisionbecauseofthefollowingreasons。Firstly,myhomecityisabigcitythatcanofferalot.Thereareplentyofopportunitiesforwork,manybiglibrariesforstudies,severaldifferrentmusiumsforvisit，andnumerouscinemas,theatersandcentersforentertainment.WhenIgobackthere,IwillhavenodifficultyinfindingajobsuitableformeandIcanmakeuseofallthefacilitiesavailablethere.Secondly，ifIgobacktomyhomecity，Icanlookaftermyparents。ItakethisintoconsiderationbecauseIamtheironlychildandtheyarenowweakandgettingoninage。IfIliveinthesamecitywiththem，Icanvisitthemveryoftenandhelpthemwheneveritisnecessary.Thirdly,ifIliveinmyhomecity,Iwillhavealotoffriends，schoolmatesandrelativestovisitandtoturntoforhelpwhenIneed.Ofcourse,IcouldgetacquaintedwithmanypeopleandmakemanyfriendsifIweretogotoliveinastrangeplace，butthattakestime.IfIgobacktomyhomecity，everybodywillbewaitingformeandIwillbeabletosettledowncomfortablywithoutanytroubleandwasteoftime.Inshort，mychoiseisbasedonacarefulconsiderationofmyhomecityandmyfamily.Ithinkitisabetterorsensiblechoice;inacertainsense，itisamust。托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏(4）Neighborsarethepeoplewholivenearus.Inyouropinion,whatarethequalitiesofagoodneighbor？Usespecificdetailsandexamplesinyouranswer。Ifyouhaveagoodneighbor,youarealuckyperson.Youhavesomeonewhocaresaboutyourneedsandyourproperty,whoishelpfulinthelittleday-to-daysituationsthatcomeup,andwhoissupportiveintimesofcrisis。Agoodneighborissomeonewho,forinstance，understandsthatyourchildrenmayoccasionallyrunacrosshislawn,-eventhoughyoutellthemnotto。Hellrealizethatchildrencanbecarelessaboutthingslikethat,andhewontmakeabigfussaboutitunlessitbecomesaregularthing。Inthesamevein，heknowsthatyoullunderstandifsomeofthetrashfromhistrashcansblowsacrossintoyouryard.Inotherwords，heissensitivetotheunintentionalthingsthatcanhappen.Hedoesntmakeabigdealaboutthem。Agoodneighborisalsorespectfulofyourproperty。Forexample，sheasksyourpermissionbeforedoinganythingthatinterfereswithwhatsyours.Thismeansshewouldntplantahugetreeinbetweenyourhouseswithoutaskinghowyoufeltaboutit。Ifshewantedtoputupafence，shewouldletyouknowfirst。Shemightworkwithyoutodecidewhereitshouldbeplaced。Maybethetwoofyouwouldevensplitthecost.Agoodneighborwouldlendyousomemilkifyouranout。Shedgiveyouaridetoworkifyourcarwasbroken，andletyourchildrenstayatherhouseintheeveningifyougotstuckworkingovertime.Youwoulddothesameforher.Bothofyouwouldhelpmaketheotherslifeeasier.Whensomethingreallyawfulhappenstoyou，likeadeathinthefamily，agoodneighborwillvolunteertohelpinanywayhecan.Thiscouldmeansomethingsmall，likemakingsomecasserolestoputinyourfreezertofeedvisitingrelatives.Oritcouldmeansomethingbig,likehelpingyougetthroughthesadnessofthefuneral.Ithinkonlysomeonewhohasexperiencedabadneighborcanreallyappreciateagoodone!Agoodneighborcanbeagoodfriend.Heorshecanmakeallthedifferenceintheworldtoyourlife。