英语写作课件.ppt

课前播放课前播放Guessthenameofthesong猜歌名猜歌名2021/10/101迁西二中迁西二中 高一英语组高一英语组WritingWriting 写作写作写作写作Welcome！2021/10/102My aim is to go to the university I like!我的目标是考上我喜欢的大学！我的目标是考上我喜欢的大学！I can try my best to learn English well!我会尽全力把英语学好！我会尽全力把英语学好！Slogan 班号班号2021/10/103反思反思总结总结小测小测答疑答疑解惑解惑巩固巩固提升提升WritingWriting写写 作作找找三三个个错错误误送送三三个个小小贴贴士士？最佳？最佳小组小组2021/10/1041.1.1.1.寺庙寺庙寺庙寺庙 _2.2.2.2.大学大学大学大学 _3.3.3.3.发展发展发展发展 _4.4.4.4.比赛比赛比赛比赛 _5.5.5.5.奖品、颁奖奖品、颁奖奖品、颁奖奖品、颁奖 _6.6.6.6.滑雪滑雪滑雪滑雪 _7.7.7.7.参军参军参军参军 _8.8.8.8.从从从从毕业毕业毕业毕业 _9.9.9.9.使某人想起使某人想起使某人想起使某人想起_ _10.10.10.10.被被被被录取录取录取录取_ join the armygo skiinggraduate from remind sb of be admitted intodeveloptemple university/collegeawardcompetitionStep:a quiz小测小测2021/10/1051过程与方法过程与方法情感态度与价值观情感态度与价值观知识与技能知识与技能32a.(a.(重点重点)熟练掌握熟练掌握汉译英的基本技巧汉译英的基本技巧。b.(b.(难点难点)熟练应用常用结构熟练应用常用结构 ,扩写要点扩写要点。自主学习，合作探究，成果展示，答疑解惑，教师点拨。自主学习，合作探究，成果展示，答疑解惑，教师点拨。a.a.树立信心，可以写好作文！树立信心，可以写好作文！b.b.培养信念培养信念，人生就是坚持奋斗！，人生就是坚持奋斗！Learning aims学习目标学习目标2021/10/106 Step:Leading-in 导入导入Who is the boy?2021/10/107Step Presentation 重点问题重点问题 答疑解惑答疑解惑 Task 1：写作中，如何摆脱写作中，如何摆脱“汉式英语汉式英语”，正确翻译句子？正确翻译句子？2021/10/1081.小学(primaryschool)毕业后，他在少林寺习武(Kungfu)4年。Afterhegraduatedfromtheprimaryschool,helearnedKungfufor4yearsintheShaolinTemple.自主学习：补全句子自主学习：补全句子2021/10/1092.由于自己的刻苦努力和老师的细心帮助，他于2012年被河北师范大学(HebeiNormalUniversity)录取。Becauseofhishardworkandteacherscarefulhelp,hewasadmittedintoHebeiNormalUniversityin2012.2021/10/1010自我归纳：自我归纳：翻译句子基本技巧翻译句子基本技巧“先中间，后两边先中间，后两边”写作中，英语常用句式结构：写作中，英语常用句式结构：_+_+谓语动词谓语动词+_+_+状语状语。（主句和从句都一样）（主句和从句都一样）第一步第一步:“先中间先中间 ”是指先确定是指先确定_第二步第二步:“后两边后两边 ”再填再填_、_ 、_._.状语状语宾语宾语主句谓语主句谓语V V主语主语主语主语宾语宾语（组内（组内7 7、8 8号背诵）号背诵）2021/10/10111.大学期间，他仍然认真学习，刻苦训练。Duringtheuniversity,hestillstudiedhardandtrainhard._trained（组内（组内7 7、8 8号改错）号改错）即学即练即学即练2021/10/10122.大学期间，他积极参加各种比赛并多次获奖。Duringtheuniversity,hetookanactivepartinmanycompetitionsandwonawards.2021/10/10133.2014年，他获学校一等奖学金(scholarship)。In2014,heawardedthefirstprizescholarshipoftheschool.was（组内（组内5、6号改错）号改错）2021/10/10144.寒假期间，他和朋友一起去张家口滑雪。Duringthewinterholiday,hewentskiingwithhisfriendsinZhangjiakou.2021/10/10155.实习期间（internship），红色的校服让他想起了在迁西二中的日子。Duringtheintership,theredschooluniformremindedhimofthedaysinNo.2SeniorHighSchoolofQianxi.2021/10/1016Afterhegraduatefromuniversity,hedecidedtojointhearmytodevelophimselfbetter.6.大学毕业后，他决定参军更好的发展自己。（组内（组内7、8号改错）号改错）_graduated2021/10/1017Tip 1：Struggle is our life!人生就是奋斗人生就是奋斗!2021/10/1018要求：要求：1.先选定其中任何一个话题，写先选定其中任何一个话题，写一个主题句一个主题句！2.再再扩写扩写3句句相关内容。相关内容。Step Consolidation 巩固提升巩固提升Task 2:writing&discussion：十年后，我的家庭、工作和业余生活十年后，我的家庭、工作和业余生活 If we keep on struggle from now on,what will our life be like in ten years?如果从现在起我们坚持奋斗，如果从现在起我们坚持奋斗，十年后我们的生活会是什么样？十年后我们的生活会是什么样？2021/10/1019Task 3:Showing time&assessment 展示与评价展示与评价过程评分过程评分:小老师声音洪亮，解析到位，得小老师声音洪亮，解析到位，得3分；分；其它学生质疑一个问题，得其它学生质疑一个问题，得2分。分。2021/10/1020Task 3:Showing time&assessment 展示与评价展示与评价Tip 2:howtodevelopthemainpoint:examples&details如何扩写要点：举例、细节描写2021/10/1021（）一家英语报社向中学生征文）一家英语报社向中学生征文,主主题是题是“十年后的我十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。成短文。1.1.家庭家庭;2.;2.工作工作;3.;3.业余生活。业余生活。注意注意:1.:1.词数词数100100左右左右;2.;2.可以适当增加细节可以适当增加细节,以使行文以使行文连贯连贯;3.;3.开头语已为你写好。开头语已为你写好。I often imagine what my life will be like in the I often imagine what my life will be like in the future._future._Tip 3:You can achieve,when you believe.只要你相信只要你相信,你就可以你就可以!2014高考新课标高考新课标2021/10/1022情感情感态度态度知识知识技能技能过程过程方法方法Whathaveyoulearntinthisperiod?Step Self-reflection&summary 反思与总结反思与总结2021/10/1023底数底数指数对数真数幂值例1：例2：小结：例3 优胜组为优胜组为第第 组组8 7 6 5 4 3212021/10/1024Congratulations!Thereisasurpriseforyouintheclassroom!2021/10/10251.（必做）Finishthewritingindividually.2.（选做）WriteanEnglishdiaryaboutChenShuai.Step:Homework 作业作业 Is there any question left in this period?(填好学习互动填好学习互动 卡，我的学习我做主！卡，我的学习我做主！)2021/10/10262021/10/1027I I o of ft te en n i imma ag gi in ne e w wh ha at t mmy y l li if fe e w wi il ll l b be e l li ik ke e i in n t th he e f fu ut tu ur re e.I I t th hi in nk k mmy y l li if fe e w wi il ll l b be e v ve er ry y d di if ff fe er re en nt t i in n t te en n y ye ea ar rs s.I I w wi il ll l b be e t tw we en nt ty y-e ei ig gh ht t y ye ea ar rs s o ol ld d b by y t th he en n.I I w wi il ll l h ha av ve e mmy y o ow wn n f fa ammi il ly y,p pr ro ob ba ab bl ly y w wi it th h a a l lo ov ve el ly y c ch hi il ld d.I I h ho op pe e I I l ll l w wo or rk k i in n a a c co ommp pu ut te er r c co ommp pa an ny y a as s a a p pr ro og gr ra amm d de es si ig gn ne er r.I I l ll l e en nj jo oy y mmy y w wo or rk k a an nd d g ge et t a al lo on ng g w we el ll l w wi it th h mmy y c co ol ll le ea ag gu ue es s.I I l ll l d do o a a g go oo od d j jo ob b i in n w wh ha at te ev ve er r I I d do o.I In n mmy y f fr re ee e t ti imme e,I I l ll l c co on nt ti in nu ue e t to o t ta ak ke e r re eg gu ul la ar r e ex xe er rc ci is se e,s su uc ch h a as s s sw wi immmmi in ng g,r ru un nn ni in ng g a an nd d v va ar ri io ou us s b ba al ll l g ga amme es s.OOn n mmy y h ho ol li id da ay ys s,I I l ll l t tr ra av ve el l a ar ro ou un nd d t th he e w wo or rl ld d.I In n a a w wo or rd d,mmy y l li if fe e w wi il ll l b be e mmu uc ch h r ri ic ch he er r a an nd d mmo or re e c co ol lo or rf fu ul l.高考作文范文高考作文范文2021/10/1028In ten years,I think Ill be a reporter.Ill live in In ten years,I think Ill be a reporter.Ill live in Shanghai,because I went to Shanghai last year and fell Shanghai,because I went to Shanghai last year and fell in love with it.I think its really a beautiful city.As a in love with it.I think its really a beautiful city.As a reporter,I think I will meet lots of interesting people.I think reporter,I think I will meet lots of interesting people.I think Ill live in an apartment with my best friends,because I Ill live in an apartment with my best friends,because I dont like living alone.dont like living alone.Ill have pets.I cant have any pets now because my Ill have pets.I cant have any pets now because my mother hates them and our apartment is too small.So in mother hates them and our apartment is too small.So in ten years,Ill have many different pets.I might even keep ten years,Ill have many different pets.I might even keep a pet parrot!Ill probably go skating and swimming every a pet parrot!Ill probably go skating and swimming every day.During the week Ill look smart,and probably will day.During the week Ill look smart,and probably will wear a suit.wear a suit.On the weekends,Ill be able to dress more casually.I On the weekends,Ill be able to dress more casually.I think Ill go to Hong Kong on vacation,and one day I think Ill go to Hong Kong on vacation,and one day I might even visit Australia.might even visit Australia.高考作文范文高考作文范文2021/10/1029