A-good-heart-to-lean-on.pptx

AGoodHearttoLeanon1 12 23 34 4 ToKnow the Meaning of the TitleToExplore the Text StructureTo Improve Your Writing by ParallelismToUnderstand the EssenceObjectivesWarm-upStructure AnalysisReflectionsAssignmentsTasksThe third Sunday of JuneFather in our eyescaring babysitterFather in our eyesbest playmateFather in our eyesgreat helperFather in our eyesA man to lean onIf your father wasseverely disabledshortA Good Heart to Lean ondepend on for support&encouragementWhat does“a good heart”meanWho has a good heart?The Journey to Seek for a Good HeartType of Writing:Type of Writing:“Good Heart”;Father;Life;Plot:NarrationCharacters:father son&Place:Brooklyn,N.Y.Time:When the son grew upStructure AnalysisThe recalling of the fathers experienceThe reflection on the fathers life principleThe reflection on what a“good heart”isSection 1 Section 1(para1-4)(para1-4)Section 2 Section 2 (para 5-7)(para 5-7)Section 3 Section 3 (para 8-13)(para 8-13)Structure AnalysisThe recalling of the fathers experienceThe reflection on the fathers life principleThe reflection on what a“good heart”isSection 1 Section 1(para1-4)(para1-4)Section 2 Section 2 (para 5-7)(para 5-7)Section 3 Section 3 (para 8-13)(para 8-13)Section One Task 1:Read Para 1 and Para 2 quickly and answer the following two questions.1.Whenthesonwasgrowingup,howdidheandhisfatherfeelwhentheywerestaredatbyothers?(Para1)2.Whywasitdifficulttocoordinatethefathersstepsandthesons?(Para2)Section One steps embarrassednever let onwhen stared atsonfatherLet on:make known;tell someone somethinge.g.Dontletonanythingaboutyoursalary.别透露你的工资。Section Onesteps What the son discovers in his father:impatienthaltingembarrassednever let onstrong willcouragewhen stared atsonfatherStructure AnalysisThe recalling of the fathers experienceThe reflection on the fathers life principleThe reflection on what a“good heart”isSection 1 Section 1(para1-4)(para1-4)Section 2 Section 2 (para 5-7)(para 5-7)Section 3 Section 3 (para 8-13)(para 8-13)Section Twocourage1.Thesonisamazedathowmuchitmusthavetakenforhisfathertosubjecthimselftosuchshameandstresswithoutor.(Para5)2.Thefathernevertalkedabouthimselfasanobjectoforshowedanyofthemorefortunateorable.Whathelookedforinotherswas.(Para6)bitternesscomplaintpityenvy“a good heart”Task 2:Fill in the blanks with words you find in Para 5 and Para 6.Section TwoTask 2:Fill in the blanks with words you find in Para 5 and Para 6.embarrassment&stresswithoutcomplaintothers fortunenoenvyfatherWhat the son discovers in his father:“agoodheart”What the son discovers in himself:“notagoodheart”Structure AnalysisThe recalling of the fathers experienceThe reflection on the fathers life principleThe reflection on what a“good heart”isSection 1 Section 1(para1-4)(para1-4)Section 2 Section 2 (para 5-7)(para 5-7)Section 3 Section 3 (para 8-13)(para 8-13)Section ThreeIthinkofhimwhenIcomplainabouttrifles,whenIamenviousofanothersgoodfortune,whenIdonthavea“goodheart”.(Para12)What rhetorical device(修修辞辞手手法法)is used in this sentence?Writing DeviceParallelism is a balance of two or moresimilarwords,phrases,orclauses.Revise the following sentence into parallel structure.Wejudgeourfriendsbothbywhattheysayandactions.Now Its Your Turn bywhattheydowordsSection ThreeThe sons reflection on what a“good heart”is:IthinkofhimwhenIcomplainabouttrifles,whenIamenviousofanothersgoodfortune,whenIdonthavea“goodheart”.(Para12)triflescomplaintothers fortuneenvioussonContrastcourage,patience,strong-will personality,positive attitude towards lifewithoutcomplaintnoenvyfatherA Gift for ParentsA Gift for ParentsWhen you were still youngthey spent lots of time teaching you to eat with spoons and chopsticks,to dress,to tie up shoelaces,to button,to wash your face,to comb your hair,So,when they grow old someday,when they begin to forget to button or tie up shoelaces,when their combing hands begin to tremble unstoppably,please dont urge them,because you are growing up and they are growing old.Their hearts will be warmedif you are around.If one day they cannot even hold up steady or walk,please hold their hands tight and walk beside them slowly just like.just like.they held yours years ago.SummarySummary AReviewof“FatherinourEyes”TextStructureParallelismContrast“AGoodHeart”ReflectionAssignmentsWrite a composition describing the“good heart”of a person you know with no less than 100 words.Develop your writing with parallelism.Further ReadingRead Read the the story story of of“The“The Sight Sight of of Fathers Fathers Back”Back”written written by by Zhu Zhu Ziqing,Ziqing,compare compare images images of of the the father father in in both both stories stories and and share share your your ideas ideas with with your your classmates.classmates.Thank You!E-mail:E-mail:yousheng_yousheng_