Task-writing.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,Task-writing,How to develop a narrative,On April 13th,2007,The writing template of the description article,(,叙述类文章写作模板,),：,1.Title (,2,分,),2.Sum,upAbout,the,original passage,(30words or so)(,5,分,),3.,A transitional sentence or paragraph,(,3,分,),4.,A narrative,(About the same topic),(,10,分,),5.,An ending paragraph,(Point out the main idea),(,5,分,),The results of the first task-writing:,Items,Average scores,The title(2),1.5,The summary(5),3.3,A,trasitional,sentence/paragraph(3),2.3,A narrative(10),6.2,An ending paragraph(5),3.4,The whole writing(25),16.8,A guide to task-writing(,一,):,1.What style of the,original passage,:,Narrative.,2.Ask us to write what style of a story:,Narrative,too.,3.Whats the title that we should use?,1.,Patience,Is the Secret of,Success,2.Patience Is,Important,3.The,Importance,of Patience,10.Patience Is Necessary,4.The Key to Success Patience,5.How Important Patience Is!,6.Patience Leads to/Results in Success,7.Our Life Needs Patience,8.Be/Keep,Patient,9.Do Everything,Patiently,All of the above are chosen from your writings.,Suggestions:,What should you pay attention to,when writing a title?,We should use,a noun phrase or a sentence,as a title.,2.The,first letter,of every word in a title should be written in,a capital letter,except articles,prepositions and conjunctions.,3.The number of a title had better not be more than,12,words.,4.How to summarize a story:,Skill:Combination of five elements,要素串联法,What,Who,When,Where,What to learn,was taught a lesson by an old man,the writer and an old man,when going fishing,on the bank of the lake,Patience is important.,Patience is the secret of success.,You may begin like these:,1.The passage is about,the writers unforgettable lesson from an old man.,2.The writer tells us about,his unforgettable lesson from an old man.,3.The story is about,the writer who was taught an unforgettable lesson by an old man.,4.The author tells us that,he was,taught an unforgettable lesson by an old man.,故事性阅读材料，应该用,最简练的语言,来说明故事,讲述,了什么，不能拖泥带水，而且,最好讲述该故事给你的启示或其中的一个道理,。,1.The passage mainly tells us a story,that the writer realized the importance of patience,when meeting,an old man fishing many fish,and at last got a lot of fish,after waiting,patiently.(34 words,谭燕梅）,.This passage mainly tells us that,the writer realized,that,the key to success was nothing but patience,after,he talked with an old man,when,he gave up going on fishing,preparing to go back home last Sunday.,(39 words,叶水亮）,Show good summaries:,3.The writer said,he had an experience of fishing on the bank of a lake.During the first two hours,he got nothing,but asking an old man,he knew importance of patience and got some fish.(39 words,吕睿）,Summary:,The story is about,an unforgettable lesson of the writer from an old man,while,fishing on the bank of the lake,through which,the writer realized patience was very important,and that,it was the secret of success.(39 words),Possible version,1.,Mainly use the words and phrases in the,original passage.,Do not,include your own opinion,but be sure to,use our own words.,2.,Write it in the,third,person.,（,第三人称）,3.Control the number of words,between 20 and 40,.,Suggestions:,What should you pay attention to,when writing a summary?,5.How to write a transitional sentence or paragraph,1.There is a story about me realizing the importance of,patience.,Take,me for example.,2.I,had a,similar,experience at one time,too.,3.As,far as I am concerned,I have a,similar,experience.,4.I,have,such a similar,experience.,5.I,have a similar experience,to,the writers.,6.I,also have a,similar,experience.,You may write like these:,Show good transitional sentences or,paragraphs:,1.It occurs to me that,a,similar,story of mine happened 3,years ago,and taught me a lesson.(19 words,谭燕梅）,2.Like the writer,I,also,have an unforgettable experience,that,taught me to keep patient.(15 words,杨玲玉）,.As we all know,patience is very important to everybody.,Here is a story of mine about patience,.(18 words,莫国维）,.I also have a story about patience.,Would you like to share it with me?,(15 words,罗铭华）,5.To myself,I also have an experience,that,told me the importance of patience.,(14 words,张龙君）,6.Make up your similar story:,Skill:Combination of five elements,要素串联法,What,Who,When,Where,What to learn,Take waiting for a bus for example:,waited for a bus,I,when going to school,at the bus stop,Patience is important,I have a similar experience.,Once,I,waited for the bus,at the stop,for 30 minutes,no bus came.I couldnt wait any longer and decided to,walk to school,.But no sooner had I left than the bus arrived.I thought if I had waited for one more minute,I would have caught it.If I wanted to take the next bus,I would have to wait for another 30 minutes.Only then did I,realize the importance of patience,.Being impatient will waste all the efforts that we have made.Patience also plays an important part in our study and work.With it we can achieve greater.(110 words),7.How to write an ending paragraph,.All in all,patience is very important.Everyone should have patience to do everything.(,words),莫国维）,1.In my opinion,without patience,we may miss a lot of successful chances in our life.So we should try our best to build the good of patience.(29 words,黎秋平）,(Point out the main idea),Show good,ending paragraphs:,Possible version:,Now,whenever I am to lose my patience,Ill think of the experience of waiting for a bus.(18 words),3.From my own experience,I think patience can help us overcome the difficulties in our lives and studies.So we should be patient whatever we do.,(26 words,吴锦镖）,Lets enjoy three good task-writings!,Possible version:,Patience is the secret of success,The story is about,an unforgettable lesson of the writer from an old man while fishing on the bank of the lake,through which the writer realized patience was very important and that it was the secret of success.(39 words),I have a similar experience.,Once I waited for the bus at the stop for 30 minutes,no bus came.I couldnt wait any longer and decided to walk to school.But no sooner had I left than the bus arrived.I thought if I had waited for one more minute,I would have caught it.If I wanted to take the next bus,I would have to wait for another 30 minutes.Only then did I realize the importance of patience.Being impatient will waste all the efforts that we have made.Patience also plays an important part in our study and work.With it we can achieve greater.(110 words),Now,whenever I am to lose my patience,Ill think of the experience of waiting for a bus.(18 words),(167 words),Thanks,