复习课：英语书面表达.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,nglish,E,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,威远一初中 龚仕容,English writing,The ways to improve your writing,中考英语书面表达评分标准,1,.,总体评分原则：,要点+语言表达+语篇+词数+卷面；,2.,内容要点,(1,4,分),、应用,词汇,和,语法,的,准确性,(,10,分),和,上下文的,语篇连贯性,(,2,分),。,3,.,词数:,1,00,词左右,少于,80,词,扣,2,分,。,4.,如果,书写较差,以致影响交际,将分数降低,一个档次。（卷面不整洁,扣,2,分,）,书面表达六步法,牛刀小试,在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。,1.,审,(search),travel,stay at home,visit friends or parents,work,文体,:,要点,:,人称:,时态,:,调查报告,一般现在时,第三人称,四个,(,一个都不能少,),范例,stay at home,work,visit friends or parents,travel,2.,列,(list),1.,_,people travel.,2.,_,people stay at home.,3.,_,people visit friends or parents.,4.,_,people go to work.,5.,_,your vacation,!,Most,Some,A small number of,A few,Enjoy,根据以下,关键词,及,图表,用,简单的句子,列出文章的,要点,。,How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here,s,the result,.,（the beginning）,A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf the internet.A small number of people visit friends or parents.A few people work.,Come and enjoy your vacation.,People who relax well work well.,（the ending）,3.,扩(add),加首尾,，使结构完整。,可以采取,总分总,结构,开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。,How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here,s,the result,.,According to it,a lot of people travel.,Then,some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf the Internet.,Also,a small number of people visit friends or parents.,However,a few people work.,Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.,4.,连,(connect),恰当运用,关联词,使文章,结构紧凑,衔接自然,According to it,most people,choose to travel to,get away from the busy,life,during the holidays,.,Then,some people like to stay at home,watching TV,or surfing the Internet to have a good rest,.,However,a few people,have to,work.,As the saying goes,“All work and no play makes,Jack a dull boy.”,Come and enjoy your vacation.People,who relax well work well.,5.,改(correct),And,visiting friends or parents,also,makes people relaxed,.,saying,（,谚语）,修改词句,美化文章。在有把握的情况下改,变句式或添加语句,展示自己的语言功底。,How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.,According to it,most people,choose to travel to get away from the busy life during the holidays,.,Then,some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest,.,And,visiting friends or parents,also,makes people relaxed,.,However,a few people,have to,work.,As the saying goes,“All work and no play makes,Jack a dull boy.”,Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.,检查,:,段落分明,;,拼写正确,;,语法无误,;,要点全,书写规范,卷面整洁。,6.,抄,(copy),写字好了人待见,高分首先看卷面,!,写作注意的几个问题：,1.,多,用简单句,牢记,“,避繁就简,”,原则,别,出现单词拼写和语法错误,。,2.,尽量,用,使用频率高,的短语和句型。,3.把握,要点,避免遗漏,发挥适度,不多写也不少写。,4,.句与句之间、段与段之间过渡自然,行文连贯,适当使用关联词,如,:,first of all,and,then,besides,also,at last,so,but,however,whats more,in a word,all in all,等,。,5.,字体一定要,工整漂亮,。,Challenge,Yourself!,开始吧！,假如你是李明,你的朋友彼得,(Peter),即将面临中考,然而他却深感压力巨大,寝食不安,情绪低落,学习效率低下。请你写一封信给他提一些有益的建议,帮助他调整心态,提高学习效率,轻松迎考。,要点如下：,1,学会放松,(,体育锻炼,听音乐,),2,健康饮食,3,充足睡眠,4,学会沟通,注意,:,内容完整,;,书写美观；,100,词左右；文章的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。,中考模拟作文,审,:,文体,:,人称,:,时态,:,书信,一般现在时,第二人称,要点,:,四个,根据要点,提建议,:,1,学会,放松,(,体育锻炼,听音乐,),2,健康,饮食,3,充足,睡眠,4,学会,沟通,审,(search),Four pieces of advice:,Learn to relax.,Have healthy eating habits.,Get enough sleep.,Learn to communicate.,列,(list),提建议常用句型,:,You should do sth.,Youre supposed to do sth.,Youd better do sth.,Its a good way to do sth.,Its necessary to do sth.,Why dont you do sth?,Please do sth.,.,要点全,;,多用使用频率高的短语及句型,;,妙用关联词,;,文章层次清晰,;,书写工整漂亮,。,温馨,提示,:,1.,红笔,圈,出文中所用的,关联词,2.,用,波浪线,划出,使用频率高的,短语,和,句型,3.,改正,词汇和语法,错误,互评,First of all,exercise/sports,relaxed,much,energetic,be full of energy,dont,22,要点+语言表达+语篇+词数+卷面,And,Besides,At last,14,要点+语言表达+语篇+词数+卷面,27,要点+语言表达+语篇+词数+卷面,We must pay attention to our handwriting,it can help us get a high grade.,Dear Peter,Im sorry to hear that you have so many worries.But dont worry about your study too much.,Here are my suggestions.,First of all,you should,learn how to relax yourself.I think doing more sports is good for your health.Listening to music is,范文展示,also,a good,way to relax.,Besides,its necessary,to have healthy eating habits.Please remember to have breakfast every morning.It can give you enough energy to study for the whole morning.,Whats more,youd better go to bed early and get enough sleep.It will keep you active during the day.,At last,why not,have more communication with your parents,teachers or friends.You are supposed to share your happiness and sadness with them.Please try to get help from them.,I hope my advice can help you out.,Im looking forward to your good news.,Yours,Li Ming,