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,Task,Writing a letter to a friend,Period Two,Revision,Skills building 1:writing down the answers,Skills building 2:agreeing and disagreeing,New friends,New area,how to adapt,calling,Teen Talk,friendship,personal problems,Skills building 3:proofreading,Read the letter you wrote to your friend aloud,and the other students listen carefully and write down the mistakes.,Have you found,any mistakes?,What careless mistakes do we often,make in our compositions,?,facts,grammar,handwriting,punctuation,vocabulary,spelling,style,handwriting,Tips,To insert a missing word,To cross out an extra word,Underline a wrong word and write the correct,15 Apirl,Today,I found out something about my brother could get him into a lot,of trouble.Im not sure if to tell Mum and Dad.,April,that,whether,Practice,Although William and I are almost 18,but Mum and Dad are still quite stricte with us.Recently,William has begun wearing some strange clothes.He always wear big boot and a leather jacket,and he looks quiet different from before.,strict,boots,quite,The other day I saw him smoked in his room,with two of his friends,Jack and Sean.I know Mum and Dad would be extreme angry if they knew about it.Theyd also be angry me if they knew,that I had kept this secret for them.Maybe I should tell them,so they wont blame me for,keep a secret.,smoking,extremely,with,him,keeping,However,I dont think William will live at home for much longer as hes planning to go to university soon,his grades are still good.It seems that his behaviour hasnt had some effect on his schoolwork.Maybe I should just keep my month shut.What should I,do?,hes,any,mouth,.,personal problems,Skills building 1:writing down the answers,Proofread the composition you have written recently.,And it was nice of you to be so friend to a new comer.,school.,Just as you do not want to lose their friendship,they will not want to lose yours neither.,Skills building 3:proofreading,At an appropriate time,tell them you are sorry and give them an explaination for your actions.,Have you found,At an appropriate time,tell them you are sorry and give them an explaination for your actions.,What careless mistakes do we often,Have you found,so they wont blame me for,so they wont blame me for,proofread your composition by yourself.,Writing a letter to a friend,proofread your composition by yourself.,What should I,This is one of the most exciting game,that I have ever watched.,2.The monkeys climbed the trees quick,3.After locked the door,I hurried to,school.,4.You should listen carefully,when you are speaking to.,5.Fish cant live with water.,games,quickly,locking,spoken,without,More practice,6.Every time I look at the old photo.,I will think of my old friends.,7.Usually mum makes me stop chating,at about 10 p.m.,8.He is so kind I like him very much.,.,chatting,that,More practice,After reading your letter,I know that you are worry about losing your friends.You used to have lot of friends,but you,stopped talking to him after you make friends with Li Hua,a newcomer who join your class a few weeks ago.Now Li Hua has moved to other city,and you have no friends cause your old friends think you were mean to them.You feel very sad.,worried,a,them,joined,another,because,Proofread the composition you have written recently.,Skills building 1:writing down the answers,New friends,handwriting,What should I,More practice,After reading your letter,I know that you are worry about losing your friends.,Usually mum makes me stop chating,At an appropriate time,tell them you are sorry and give them an explaination for your actions.,Skills building 1:writing down the answers,Skills building 1:writing down the answers,However,it was not such a good idea for you to stop talking to your old friends.,Skills building 3:proofreading,Exchange your composition with your deskmate,proofread his/her composition.,What should I,You did the write thing when you made friends with Li Hua.And it was nice of you to be so friend to a new comer.However,it was not such a good idea for you to stop talking to your old friends.I suggest that you talk to your old friends first instead of waiting them to talk to,you.At an appropriate time,tell them you are sorry and give them an explaination for your actions.,right,friendly,for,explanation,Just as you do not want to lose their friendship,they will not want to lose yours neither.They will happy to see that you still value them.,You have learned a valuable lesson in life:make new friends but keep the elder ones.,either,be,old,proofread your composition by yourself.,Exchange your composition with your deskmate,proofread his/her composition.,consolidation,Presentation,Homework,Proofread the composition you have written recently.,Finish the relevant exercises in,Unit Revision,.,
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