高二第一、二、三次作文范文.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Born into a wealthy family in Poland in 1473,Nicolaus,Copernicus lived in a time when people still believed everything moved around the earth.,At the age of 18,Copernicus went to college,and,in 1496,he went to Italy,where,he,spent the,following/next,ten years studying law and medicine and some other subjects in several universities,until,he came back to his homeland in 1506,.He,later,worked for the,church,till,he died,The first writing assignment,（按照时间顺序组织内容）,请注意体现时间顺序的词、短语,（引导定语从句）,（并列句）,in 1543.,Through his years of,observations and mathematical calculations,he completed his great book,On the Revolutions of the Heavenly Bodies,.,In the book,he put forward the view,that the planets move around the sun,.,The first writing assignment,（按照时间顺序组织内容）,（同位语）,（同位从句）,（承上）,Because Guangzhou lies on the foreign trading port,the exchange,between,Chinese,and,western cultures makes it form its unique culture.,The second writing assignment,（介绍广州）,（信息点,5.,由于地处外贸口岸，中西文化交流使其形成独特的文化）,People there,prefer,(,偏爱,)a light,diet,.,The,diet,is rich in nutrition.,合句（使用定语从句）：,People there,prefer,(,偏爱,)a light,diet(,which,is)rich in nutrition.,The second writing assignment,（介绍广州）,（信息点,6.,饮食清淡，营养丰富）,Located,in the south of China,near,both,Hongkong,and Macao,Guangzhou,a city,where flowers bloom all the year round,is called,“the City of Flowers”.Guangzhou is,not only,a city with a long history,but also,the birthplace of the ancient“Silk Road on the Sea”.,As is known to all,Guangzhou has many places,The second writing assignment,（介绍广州）,（分词和形容词做状语）,（主语）,（同位语）,（定语从句,译为“那里一年四季繁华似锦”）,（谓语）,（体现连贯）,of interest,for tourists to visit,such as,the“Eight Scenes of Guangzhou”.,As a main trading port,Guangzhou has its unique culture,because it is where the native and foreign cultures meet(,因为它是中西文化交汇的地方,),.People in Guangzhou favor(,喜欢,),the light diet,with,good nutrition(,含丰富营养的清谈饮食,),.,The second writing assignment,（介绍广州）,信息点：,The second writing assignment,（寻找寄宿家庭）,要求：离伯明翰大学不远，单人间，住宿价格不超过,300,英镑,/,月,I hope that,it is not far away from University of Birmingham.,Besides,I prefer a single room,whose price,is not over 300 pounds a month.,The second writing assignment,（寻找寄宿家庭）,信息点顺序：租房原因,住宿时间,兴趣和特长,要求（后两者可以调换）,I am a nineteen-year-old student.My name is Li,Hua,.,I am looking for a host family,because,I,am going,to study in the University of Birmingham for three years.I,am arriving,at Birmingham on August 5,2011.,I,am fond of(,喜欢,),music,reading and,The second writing assignment,（寻找寄宿家庭）,信息点顺序：租房原因,住宿时间,兴趣和特长,要求（后两者可以调换）,foreign culture and good at sports and making friends.,I hope that,the host family is not far from the University of Birmingham,so that,it is convenient for me to go to university every day.,I would like to live in a single room,for which,I can pay 300 pounds a month at most,.,（定语从句）,Because of water pollution and population increase,we are now on the edge of water shortages.,The writer thinks that we,as well as the governments,should take measures to value water as much as oil.,以约,30,个单词概括短文的内容要点,文中提到水资源短缺的原因以及作者认为个人和政府都应采取措施保护水资源,（同意文中观点）,I cant agree more with the writer.(,为什么,)There is an English saying,“Easy come,easy go.”Nobody seems to value water which is thought to be limitless and could be used for free.,Therefore,water waste is very common.Water taps could be seen on everywhere,but nobody bothers to extend a hand to turn them off.As the price for running water is comparatively low,most people can afford such waste.,So far,there has never been a water crisis to teach people a lesson on water saving.,（,1,）你对文中的观点有什么看法？为什么？,（主题句，提出要采取措施）,To protect the water resource,I think that some measures should be taken as soon as possible.,（列举第一项措施）,At first,water saving education should be carried out among people.(,第二项,),In addition,related departments of the government could raise the running water price to reduce water waste.(,总结归纳,)Lets make efforts to ensure that we will not be short of water supplies.,（,2,）你觉得人们应当如何保护水资源？,