高考写作1.ppt

Click to edit Master title style,Click to edit Master text styles,Second level,Third level,Fourth level,Fifth level,*,Welcome to Writing world,By Tina,Self-introduction,My name,中文名：陈哲,English name:Tina,My major,translation,My hobbies,Reading books,English poem,泰戈尔：爱情诗,Stray Birds,飞鸟集,If you shed tears when you miss the sun,youll also miss the stars.,如果你因失去了太阳而流泪，那么你也将失去群星了。,Let life be beautiful like summer flowers and death like autumn leaves.,使生如夏花之绚烂，死如秋叶之静美。,My hobbies,Music:,Yannie,Secret garden,Westlife,Seasons in the sun,再见了,我忠实的朋友,.,我们从孩提时就已相识,相知,.,我们一起爬山,爬树,.,Goodbye to you my trusted friends.,Weve known each other since we were nine or ten,Together weve climbed,hills and trees,the lyrics,写作学习方法,1.,永远不要忽略背诵的作用。,西班牙语,2.,与母语语法进行对比,3.,与日常英语相结合，灵活变通,Make it two.,Part 1,高考写作简介,最新英语教学大纲对写作的要求,2010,年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试大纲,(,英语,),要求考生根据题示进行书面表达。考生应能：,（,1,）准确使用语法和词汇；（,2,）使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。,（,3,）能用书写体清楚地书写，格式、拼写、标点等正确；,（,4,）能写简单的书信、便条和通知，填写简单的个人履历表，会写记叙文、说明、议论文等。要求在书写格式、行文及礼貌用语等方面明显无错误；,（,5,）能用书面形式造句，在有提示词语的条件下，能写,80-120,个单词的短文。在基本语法和常用句型等方面无明显错误，意思表达清楚。,2007,年高考全国卷,书面表达,(,满分,25,分,),真题再现（应用文）,假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师,Peter,找一个英语笔友。请写一封短信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括：,1.,年龄；,2.,性别；,3.,爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）。,注意：,1,词数,100,左右；,2,可以适当,（必须）,增加细节，以使行文连贯；,3,开头语已为你写好（不计入总字数）。,DearPeter,Iamwritingtoaskwhetheryouareabletodomeafavor._,_,_,_,_,Bestregards,Li,Hua,1,、审题,1.,时态,一般现在时和一般将来时,2.,人称,第一人称,3.,分段意识,要点包括开头语,写信目的,及描述理想,笔友的条件、选择这种朋友的理由,结尾用语,4.,补充细节思考,理想中的笔友什么样？年龄，性别，爱好,年龄与我相仿，同性，爱好旅游、运动、养宠物等；,为什么选择这样的笔友？,1,、有共同语言，可以沟通交流相互的旅游经历等；,2,、期望可以通过写信提高英语；,补充什么样的细节？,最好是与众不同的、用词在能力范围之内的、合乎逻辑的,2,、词汇思考,外籍教师,foreign teacher,a teacher from a foreign country,笔友,pen friend,pen pal,理想中的,ideal,不要犯错误,!,技巧一：转义,合适的,proper,suitable,appropriate,perfect,条件,requirements,factor,技巧二,:,从词到句型,I wish to find a suitable friend like this,This is what I think my pen friend is like,爱好宠物,hobby,pet,keeping/raising pets,3,、连词成句,Im writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.,1.,我想找一位跟我年龄相仿的笔友，你能帮忙找一个吗？,Id like to have a pen friend of my age,and can you kindly find one for me,please?,Id like you to find a pen friend of my age for me,please.,2.,我希望她是一个女孩并且跟我有相似的兴趣爱好，例如喜欢旅行和做运动等。,Hopefully,shell be a girl having similar interests with me,such as,traveling,doing sports etc.,In my mind,she is someone,who is interested in traveling and doing sports.,3.,另外，我还希望她也喜欢养宠物，因为这也是我的爱好之一。,Whats more,itll be better if she,is keen on,keeping pets,for I love cute animals very much.,4.,同时，我认为，我们也可以一起分享旅游的经历或是任何我们共同感兴趣的东西。,And I believe,we can share with each other our traveling experiences or whatever we have in common.,这样，我可以改进我的英语水平，同时可以了解更多关于他们国家的情况。,Of course,Ill improve my English by doing so and learn more about her country.,期盼你的来信并祝你一切如意。,I look forward to hearing from you and all the best!,满分作文,Dear Peter,Im writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.Id like to have a pen friend of my age,and can you,kindly,find one for me,please?,Hopefully,shell be a girl,having,similar interests with me,such as,traveling,doing sports.,Whats more,itll be better if she,is keen on,keeping pets,for I love cute animals very much.,（条件）,Thus,well have a lot in common.,（过渡句）,And I believe,we can share with each other our traveling experiences.This will be great fun.,Of course,Ill improve my English by doing so and learn more about her country.,I look forward to hearing from you.,Best Regards,Li,Hua,2006,年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试,卷书面表达,假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。内容应包括：,1.,个人情况：年龄，性别，学历,2.,个人条件：英语好，爱好体育，善于交际，乐于助人，熟悉本地情况,3.,承诺：提供最佳服务,注意：,词数,100,左右，开头语已为你写好,可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯,生词：申请,apply(,v,.),application(,n,.,),志愿者,volunteer,Dear Sir/Madam:,My name is,Lihua,.I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games._ _,内容要点,1.,年龄、性别,2.,学历及英语水平,3.,爱好体育、熟悉本地,4.,善于交往、乐于助人,5.,承诺,6.,合适的结尾,【,同学范文,1】,Dear Sir or Madam,My name is,Lihua,.I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.,I am an 18 girl,.As,a,local,people,I know the roads and,Buildings,very clear.I like sports very much.,By several years training,I am almost good at,every sports,.,Now I am a student.,In,school,my English is good,I am also a,K,ind girl.When I know someone is in difficulty,I will give him or her to,defeat it,.,The Games will be held in the city where I am,live,.I would like,to a,volunteer,if the dream comes true,I will try my best to improve,the level of my service,.,As,a volunteer is my,gloary,.I wish I can become one.,Best wishes for you.,第一档（很差）,1-6,分,1.,基本语法错误太多,2.,结构混乱,3.,要点介绍不全,4.,句子之间缺乏连接,【,同学范文,2】,Dear Sir or Madam,My name is,Lihua,.I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.,I am a 17 years old girl.And I am a senior 2,students,in NO.1,Senior School,of.My English is good and I am good at,PE,.I like to do things for others.Because I think helping others is helping myself.,When someone has,difficult,in doing things,I am always ready to help him.And I like to,communication,is the bridge of the world.Because the world is a big family.,I hear that the Games will be held in this place where I,lives,.I hope to be a volunteer.,Because by this,I can lean about the world and,take exercise,.I can provide the best service for the Games.I know the situation here.I believe I can do well.,第二档（较差）,7-12,分,点评：,要点安排混乱，部分要点理解错误；,拼写、语法错误较多，部分句型结构有问题,【,同学范文,3】,Dear Sir or Madam,My name is,Lihua,.I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.,I am a brave boy of 16 years old.I can speak English,fluently,.Besides,I do well in getting,on well(,用词重复,),with other students.I am glad to help others.I know all interesting places here.,If I become a member of volunteers,I will try my best to introduce my hometown to visitors.I will take them to taste all kinds of food and let them know our Chinese culture.I am sure that none of them would leave feeling disappointed.,（这部分不错）,On the other hand,I wish the Games,had,a happy end.,I apply for being a volunteer,I hope you can allow me to be a volunteer.I will do well in it and it and try my best to work.Thank you.,第三档（适当）,13-18,分,点评：,缺少部分要点，如爱好体育、熟悉本地、善于交往、乐于助人等；,承诺部分比较精彩,【,同学范文,4,】,Dear Sir or Madam,My name is Lihua,I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Acian Games.,I am a warm-hearted boy of 17,who is still studying in Middle School.I want to be a member of them.,English is what I am good at,as well as sports.I have no difficulty in communicating with,foreigner,because I can speak English fluently and do well in communication.It is my duty to help others and as a local,one,I know quite well about our district.,If I am a volunteer,I will try my best to serve others.For me,a volunteer is not only a glorious job,but a good way to get close to sports.If I can be one of the members,I will be very happy and honorable.,Please accept my application for being a volunteer,and I have been ready to make contribution to the Games.,第四档（好）,19-24,分,点评：能通过使用多变的句式和高级的词组增强文章表现力，英语功底比较扎实。,【,同学范文,5】,My name is Li,Hua,.I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.Im a boy of 17 years old and right now Im studying in the No.2 Senior High School.,There are several reasons why I want to apply.First of all,I take great interest in sports and do well in English,especially spoken English.This can help me communicate with foreigners smoothly.Secondly,Im very familiar with our city.And its quite easy for me to show the way to strangers.Most important of all,I like to make friends with people and try my best to help them.,If I can become a volunteer,I promise that Ill provide the best service with foreign guests.And I will do a good job.,第五档（很好）,25-30,分,结构安排合理；内容非常连贯；用词准确，能用到一定复杂语法结构。,