基础写作3.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,王平方,广州大学附属中学,硕士毕业于华南师范大学,Tell me,and Ill forget;,Show me,and I may remember;,Involve me,and Ill understand.,The,Point,and,Clue,Strategy,in Basic Writing,广州大学附属中学,王平方,Step1,2009,年广东高考英语基础写作,Last weekend,I had an interview with Professor Wang,an eye-doctor,concerning the issue of short-sightedness of school children in China.,According to Professor Wang,slightly more than half of the school children in our country are short-sighted,ranking the first in the world.,He also pointed out that the causes for short-sightedness are so complicated that no medicine can cure short-sightedness.,He suggested that school children avoid overuse of their eyes and do more outdoor activities.,He particularly reminded us that how to hold a pen is also related to short-sightedness.,_,_,_,_,_,short-sightedness,short-sighted,eyes,short-sightedness,short-sightedness,short-sightedness,2010,年广东高考英语基础写作,以下是一则关于中国政府决定禁烟的报道的主要内容。,内容：公共场所禁烟,实施时间：,2011,年,1,月,1,日起,实施范围：全国,目标：所有室内公共场所无烟,措 施：张贴禁烟标志,相关数据：,（,1,）吸烟人数：约,3 5,亿,（,2,）分布：男性,75,；女性,25,（,3,）受二手烟影响人数：约,5 4,亿,(,二手烟：,second-hand smoke),（,4,）因二手烟死亡人数：超过,10,万年,写作内容,请根据以上内容给学校英语墙报写一篇通讯，内容包括：,1.,禁烟决定的内容及实施的时间和范围；,2.,目标和措施,3.,相关数据。,写作要求,只能用,5,个句子表达全部内容。,评分标准,句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。,smoking,smoke-free,no-smoking,smokers,non-smokers,smoking area,second-hand smoke,Step 2,2009 NMET Basic Writing:,the issue,ranking,causes,suggested,particularly reminded,problem,situation,explanation,suggestion,/solution,2010 NMET Basic Writing:,Sentence 1:,内容,+,实施范围,Sentence 2,：实施时间,+,目标,Sentence 3,：措施,Sentence 4,：吸烟人数,+,男女分布,Sentence 5,：受二手烟影响人数,+,因二手烟死亡人数,what-,-where/when-why-how-,detail information,step 3,2010,年广东高考英语基础写作,The Chinese government has decided that,smoking,be banned in indoor public places all over the country.,This decision,which will be carried out from January 1st,2011,aims to bring a complete,smoke-free,indoor environment.,In order to achieve this goal,no-smoking,signs will be put up in all indoor public places.,Statistics show that China has approximately 350,000,000,smokers,among whom 75%are men and 25%are women.,Around 540,000,000 people are affected by,second-hand smoke,causing 100,000 deaths a year.,Sentence,：,Object clause+Passive voice,Sentence,：,Non restrictive attributive clause,Sentence,：,The infinitive as adverbial+Passive voice,Sentence,：,Object clause+Attributive clause,Sentence,：,Passive voice+V-,ing,as adverbial,Step 4,2011,年广东 基础写作以下是一本图书的基本信息及相关报道,*耶鲁：,Yale *,哈佛：,Harvard,写作内容,根据以上信息写一篇图书介绍，内容包括：,1.,图书的基本信息,2.,图书的相关报道,写作要求,只能用,5,个句子表达全部内容,评分标准,句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯,基本信息：书名：,Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother,作者：,Amy Chua,，美籍华人，耶鲁*大学教授出版时间：,2010,年内容：作者用中国传统方式教育两个女儿的故事效应：引发中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论相关报道：中文版：,2011,年初开始在中国销售意外反应：多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做法最新消息：,17,岁的大女儿已被哈佛*和耶鲁录取,book,author,publish,tells,name,edition,author,start a debate,2011 NMET Basic Writing:,基本信息,Sentence 1:,书名,+,作者,+,出版时间,(V-ed;Passive voice),Sentence 2,：内容,(Object clause),Sentence 3,：效应,(Object clause),相关报道,Sentence 4,：中文版,(It is reported that),Sentence 5,：意外反应,+,最新消息,(Adverbial clause;Passive voice),【,参考范文,】,A book entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother by Amy Chua was published in 2010.,It tells how the author,a Chinese American and professor at Yale University,educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way.,Its publication has started a debate as to which way of parenting is superior,the traditional Chinese way or the American way.,It is reported that the Chinese version of the book began to sell in China early 2011.,u,nexpectedly,the majority of mothers in China disagree with the author though her 17-year-old elder daughter was lately reported to have got offers from both Harvard and Yale.,_,_,_,_,_,_,Summary,What we learn during this lesson,基础写作,解题步骤,1.审题,2.信息归类、排列及定句型,3.连句成篇、加以润色,4.检查修改,高考写作高分策略,养兵千日,用兵一时,多读、多记、多写,积累高级词汇、短语和句型,，,并熟练掌握其用法,冷静细心,切忌写错单词,不留“余”地,切忌“留白”,书写工整,切忌潦草,Thank you,for your listening!,