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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,书面表达专题,图表式作文,图表式作文写作要求学生通过对,数据和文字内容进行分析和讨,论,系统准确地表达内容,并得,出令人心服的结论。,一是以表格形式,将统计的数据或说明的事物直接用表格形式体现出来,即统计表。,图表式作文有以下几种形式:,二是以图形形式,可分为以曲线形式表示数据变化的线形图;以条形方式表示数据的大小或数量之间的差异的条形图;以圆内扇形的大小表示总体内部结构变化的圆形图。,(1),开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题,经常用的词汇有:,table,,,chart,figure,graph,,,describe,,,tell,,,show,,,represent,等等。,图表式作文写作分三步:,在描写数据间变化及总趋势特征时,可采用分类式或对比式以支持主题,并阐明必要的理由。要注意层次清楚。,(2),分析数据间的主要差异及趋势,然后描写,经常使用的词汇有:,rise,,,drop,,,reduce,,,increase,,,decrease,,,fall,,,while,,,but,,,on the contrary,,,however,,,compareto/with,,,in contrast to,,,asas,,,the same as,,,similar to,,,different from,,,difference between,,,among,,,more than,,,less than,等等。,(3),归纳总结或发表评论。有时第三步可省略,经常使用的词汇有:,in a word,,,in short,,,generally speaking,,,It is clear from the chart that,,,We can draw the conclusion that,,,We can learn/know,等等。,(例析,1,)请你根据下表提供的信息写一篇题为,Changes in Chinese Peoples Diet,的短文,短文可分为三小节:,1,),state the changes in peoples diet in the past five years;,2,),give possible reasons for the changes;,3,),draw your own conclusions.,注意,:,尽可能少引用数据;词数,100,左右。,1998,1999,2000,2001,2002,Grain,43%,42%,41%,41%,40%,Milk,13%,14%,14.5%,14.5%,15%,Meat,25%,25%,26%,26.5%,27.5%,Fruit&Vegetable,19%,19%,18.5%,18%,17.5%,Total,100%,100%,100%,100%,100%,分析:本统计表描述中国人民从,1998,年至,2002,年饮食结构的变化。,There have been,some changes in the diet,of the Chinese people.,第一步:点明主题。,第二步:观察图表中数据的增减总趋势,分类式阐明,并说明原因。,Grain,the main food of the most people in China,is now playing a less important role.The amount of,fruit and vegetable,in the average persons diet has also,dropped by,1.5 percent from 1998 to 2002.The amount of,milk and meat,has increased.,The,changes,in diet can be,explained,by several reasons.,For one thing,with the development of the economy,people can afford to buy better foods.,For another,people have realized the importance of a balanced diet.,In a word,the changes are the signs of the improvement in peoples lives.,There is no doubt that,there will be greater changes in peoples diet in the future.,第三步:归纳总结并得出结论。,Food,&,18%,Drink,25%,Housing,Other,(a),Food,&,22%,Drink,32%,Housing,Other,(b),(例析,2,)根据下面所给两幅图,完成,100,词左右的一篇短文(首句已给出)。,%of average family expense in 1997,%of average family expense in 2002,分析:,第一步:点明本圆形图所表明的主题。,The average family income in the US has increased.The way the average family spends its incomes has also changed.,The average family income in the US has increased.,In 1997,25%of the income was spent on,housing,and 18%on,food and drink,.57%was used to meet all,other expenses,.,第二步;描述两个圆形内数据间的变化。,In 2002,32%was spent on,housing,a big increase.,Food and drink,consumed 22%.The,remaining expenses,amount to 46%.,第三步:总结。,Its clear from the charts that,as incomes increase people can afford to live more comfortable and eat more.,激活练习:,根据所给图表,写一篇题为电影与电视的短文。短文须包括以下要求:,1,电影观众人数呈逐年下降趋势,;,2,电视观众人数越来越多,(原因:方便、经济、选择范围);,3,然而还是有人喜欢看电影,(原因:气氛、娱乐)。,参考词汇,:decrease v.,下降,atmosphere n.,氛围,entertainment n.,娱乐,film goers/TV watcher,电影,/,电视观众,注意:(,1,)短文须包括主要内容,可适当增减,使内容连贯;,(,2,)词数,100,左右;,(,3,)开头语已写好。,(a)Number of TV watchers,(b)Number of film goers,1992,1994,1996,1998,2000,2002,10,20,30,40,50,60,70,80,90,100,(b),(a),Number of people,From the table,we can see that film is giving way to TV in our city.,第一步:点明主题。,第二步:观察图表中数据的增减总趋势,分类式阐明,并说明原因。,For example,in 1992,there were less than 10 thousand TV watches,more than 80 thousand film goers,while in 2002,we had about 1 million TV watchers but only about 10 thousand film goers.The number of film goers is decreasing and that of TV watchers is increasing.Televisions are quite common nowadays and so more and more people turn to TV because it is convenient and cheap and watchers have a wide range of programs for them to choose from.At the same time,there are still some people who prefer films because they like the atmosphere in the cinema as well as the entertainment,For example,in 1992,there were less than 10 thousand TV watchers,more than 80 thousand film goers,while,in 2002,we had about 1 million TV watchers but only about 10 thousand film goers.,The number of film goers is decreasing,and,that of TV watchers is increasing.,Televisions are quite common nowadays and so more and more people turn to TV because it is convenient and cheap and watchers have a wide range of programs for them to choose from.,第三步:归纳总结并得出结论。,(,可略,),At the same time,there are still some people who prefer films because they like the atmosphere in the cinema as well as the entertainment.,
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