写作课-美丽临高.ppt

,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,Unit 2,Writing,:T,ourist guide,speech,教师：周卓玲 班级：高二10 班,Have you been to some,places,of interests,(,风景点,)?,Would you like to share one that impressed(,使.深刻)you most?,The ends of the earth,Nanshan Temple,Yalong Bay,T,he East China Sea,How much do you know about Sanya?,1.Where is Sanya located(位于)?,Sanya,is located in,the south of Hainan province.,2.What is the population of Sanya?,The population of,Sanya is nearly 700,000.,三亚市在海南省的地理位置,Coconut,椰子,Too many fruits,Starfruit,Mango,Banana,菠萝蜜,Jackfruit,Fill-cold,清补凉,If you were a tourist guide,you need to introduce Sanya to your tourists,what information can you give?,1.location,2.history,3.population,4.climate,5.food,6.fruits,7.,activities,.,假如你是李华，是一名英语导游，要带一批来自美国游客旅游观光，请根据以下提供的信息写一篇导游词。,三亚位于海南省的南端，以,“,东方夏威夷,”,而出名，人口近70万人。,三亚旅游景点很多，如天涯海角，亚龙湾和鹿回头公园等。,3.,你不仅可以欣赏美丽的椰子树，干净的海水和沙滩，观看海底世界。,Writing task,The outline,(大纲),of the writing:,Ending,(Para.3),:,B,eginning,(Para.1),:,Body,(Para.2),:Introduce,Welcome and greeting,Location,Beautiful places,Interesting activities,Thanks to your tourists,show your best wishes to them.,Population,First paragragh:Welcome&greeting,Welcome to.and I feel greatly honored to be your guide.,欢迎光临我很荣幸成为你的导游。,I am more than glad to be your English guide and I will show you around.,我很高兴成为你的英语导游，我将带你参观这里。,Useful sentence patterns for introduction,.is located in.,It lies in.,.位于.,It is a beautiful city with a population of,这是一个有着.人口美丽的城市,It is famous/well-known as.,作为.而闻名,4.There are many fascinating places of interests,such as.,这里有很多迷人的名胜古迹，比如.,5.You can appreciate.,which has a high reputation both at home and abroad.,你可以欣赏，它在国内外享有极高的声誉。,6.is well worth visiting.,.很值得游览,7.People are interested in in their spare time.,在业余时间，人们在.很感兴趣。,9.It is the most beautiful.I have ever seen.,那是我所见过的最漂亮的.,Last paragragh:Best wishes,1.During the trip,I hope we can care for each other and pay attention to safety.,在旅途中，我希望我们能互相关心，注意安全.,2.I sincerely hope all of you will spend a good time here.,我真诚地希望你们在这里度过一段美好的时光。,A,ssessment(评估),S,tructure,（结构）,Is the essay divided into,parts,?,Does each part have,a topic sentence,?,C,ontent,（内容）,Are,all the details,included?,Is everything,to the point(,切题,),?,Language,（语言）,Does the writer use any,linking words,（连接词,?,Are there any,spelling mistakes,（拼写错误）,?,Is there any,advanced vocabulary,（,高级词汇,?,Are there any,good sentence patterns,（句式）,?,Lets improve it:,假如你是李华，是一名英语导游，要带一批来自美国游客旅游观光，请根据以下提供的信息写一篇导游词。,三亚位于海南省的南端，以,“,东方夏威夷,”,而出名，人口近70万人。,三亚旅游景点很多，如天涯海角，亚龙湾和鹿回头公园等。,3.,你不仅可以欣赏美丽的椰子树，干净的海水和沙滩，观看海底世界。,Writing task,Polish,your,writing,by,yourself,after class and,re,write it as your homework.,Homework,Thank You!,