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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Communication,Workshop,Events in My life,Appreciate the compositions and think about the following aspects while reading,.,Think about how the writer:,attracts the attention of the reader.,shows the order of events.,shares feelings with the reader.,uses vivid language to make the writing more interesting.,How the writer attracts the attention of the reader,May 24,th,was a bad day.,The day everything went wrong,was may 24,th,.,May 24,th,2005 will,live in my,mind,forever.,How the writer s,hows,the order of events,Because the school bus did not,First,I had to wait 30 minutes for the school bus,The day started to go wrong,the instant,I left home,.,At school,Mr.fan,The,next,problem happened when,I arrived at school.,But the trouble was only just,beginning,.,When,I got into bed that night,I,The,last,problem of this terrible,day happened when I got into,Even,then,my troubles were not,over.As I got into bed,How the writer s,hares feelings with the reader,This was a big mistake!,and you can imagine how I felt,by the time.,What a,clumsy,end to an awful day!,How the writer used vivid language to make the writing more interesting,It was hot and tiresome.,The day was hot and tiring.,The sun was already,boiling hot,Mr.fan,the English teacher,reminded me of the This surprised,me,Mr.fan,the English teacher,a large,but friendly,man,gave me a,nasty,surprise.He reminded me in his loud,voice that,As I climbed up the stairs to the,classroom,I heard a,booming,voice behind me.,I felt,awkward,and had to look,down at my book during the,competition.There was only a,little applause when I left,the stage.,There was no time to practice at,lunch time and I read from my,book instead of reciting the,poems.As I left the stage,there,was only some,quiet applause,.I,was not surprised when I came,last in the competition.,I tried,and failed to practice,during the lunch break.The result?,I couldnt remember any of the,poems and had to keep looking,down at my book.,The more,I,looked down,the redder,my face,became.,I felt,tense and dizzy,.When I left,the stage people didnt applaud very,loudly and,it,came,as no surprise,that I was last in the competition.,layout,introduction,beginning of the narrative,conclusion,development of the narrative,Write about a memorable day or event in your life.,
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