高考英语 写作教学课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,高考英语作文评分细则,第一档是极优档，,30,分。,标准为：书写规范；覆盖所有要点，内容充实；词汇丰富，运用多种语法结构，有修辞意识。,第二档是优秀，,26,分至,29,分。,标准为：,1.,完全完成了试题规定的任务。,2.,覆盖所有内容要点。,3.,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。,4.,语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。,5.,有效地使用了,语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。,6.,完全达到了预期的写作目的。语言小错不超过,4,个。,第三档是良好，,22,分至,25,分。,标准为：,1.,完全完成了试题规定的任务。,2.,虽漏掉,1,、,2,个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。,3.,应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。,4.,语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。,5.,应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。,6.,达到了预期的写作目的。,第四档是一般，,18,分至,21,分。,标准为：紧扣主题，基本覆盖所有要点，能够表达基本内容；语言错误已影响了部分意思的表达，但多数句子基本正确。,第五档是较差，,13,分至,17,分。,标准为：内容不完成，要点不全，行文不连贯，语言错误较多，多数句子基本正确。,第六档是差，,6,分至,12,分。,标准为：内容混乱或主要内容偏离主题，能够写出少数与内容相关的可读句。,注：,评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次 的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。,2.,词数少于,80,和多于,120,的，从总分中减去,2,分。,3.,评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。,4.,拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影 响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写汉词汇用法均可接受。,5.,如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。,6.,内容要点可用不同方式表达，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。,书面表达如何写？,五个,步骤,1,、审题,文字信息,图画信息,题材、人称、时态、要点,2,、以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句 话的细节要点。,3,、联词成句：用联词成句的方法将上述要点 的词语扩展成句子。,4,、联句成文：,注意：,主语和谓语,背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等）,逻辑关系,开头与结尾,语篇衔接,5,、检查修改，规范抄写,写作中一些技巧：,1,、,审题：,审题是切题的第一步,首先要看清题意，,确定文章的中心思想,并围绕中心思想组织材料,同时要,看清要点,确定人称和时态。,2,、进行,构思，列出简单的提纲，打造文章之骨架,：审好题、立好意后，就要写提纲，打造文章的骨架。文章布局要做好几件事：安排好层次段落，铺设好过渡，处理好开头和结尾。,3,、,扩展成文：,根据字数多少扩展成篇。扩展的内容,一定要紧扣主题，不写与主题无关的内容。,4,、检查修改：要,检查复核，规范书写,.,英语写作技巧总结,:,中心突出，主题明确；层次清楚，条理清晰；语句通顺，句型多变；过渡自然，衔接紧凑；字迹清楚，卷面整洁。,在英语写作过程中扩展成文是最为重要的特别注意,:,1,）,确保提纲中段落结构的思路与各段主题句的一致性,。只有这样，才能保证所写段落不 偏题、不跑题。,2,）要综合考虑各个,段落的内容安排，避免段落内容的重复。,3,）,用好连接词，注意段落间、句子间的连贯性。,要使层次分明，思路清晰，文字连贯，就需要在句与句之间、段与段之间架起一座座桥梁，而连接词起的正是桥梁作用。,4,）在整篇文章中，,避免只是用一两个句式或重复用同一词语,。英语中存在着丰富的同义词，准确地使用同义词可以给读者清新的感觉。同时要灵活运用各种句式，如,:,倒装句、强调句、省略句、主从复合句、对比句、分词短语、介词短语等,，从而增加文章的可读性。,5,）,使用不同长度的句子。,如果一个意思用一句话写不清楚的话，通过分句和合句或用两句、三句来表达，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。,6,）,改变句子的开头方式，,不要总是以主、谓、宾、状的次序。,可以把状语至于句首，或用分词,等。,7,）学会使用过渡词。,（,1),递进,:,furthermore,，,moreover,，,besides,，,in addition,，,then,，,whats more,，,what was worse,，,once more,etc,（,2),转折,:,however,，,but,，,nevertheless,，,afterwards,，,etc,（,3),总结,:,finally,，,at last,，,in brief,，,to conclude,，,in a word,in general,generally speaking,in short,as you know,in the end,etc,（,4),强调,:,really,，,indeed,，,certainly,，,surely,，,above all,，,etc,（,5),对比,:,in the same way,，,just as,，,on the other hand,，,more or less,sooner or later,on the contrary,etc,并列：,and,also,as well as,and then,，,顺序、动作过程：,first,firstly,first of all,second,secondly,at first,at last,next,，,时间：,now,then,afterwards,soon,five minutes,later,before,long,shortly after that,soon after supper,to this day,just now,just then,结果：,thus,therefore,so,as a result,seeing that,luckily,unfortunately,解释和说明：,that is to say,namely,for example,actually,and so on,such as,believe it or not,to tell you the,truth,according,to this,for this reason,.,高考满分作文赏析：,【,全国卷,I】,【,试题回放,】,假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。内容应包括：,1.,个人情况：年龄，性别，学历,2.,个人条件：英语好，爱好体育，善于交际，乐于助人，熟悉本地情况,3.,承诺：提供最佳服务,注意：词数,100,左右，开头语已为你写好,;,可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯,;,生词：申请,apply(v.),application(n.),，志愿者,volunteer,Dear Sir/Madam:,I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live.My name is Li,Hua,.I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school.And I want to be a volunteer for the games.I like English and sports very much.I like making friends and I am ready to help others.I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time.Hope the games will be a great success.Hope I will be chosen to be one.,Yours faithfully,Li,Hua,名师点评,这篇文章写得非常流畅，把握了所有要点，同时以“我”为中心，详细说明了自己对志愿者工作的结合，以此来表达自己的决心。由于用词恰当，这种表现就比较充分，具备一定的说服力。词汇和语句的运用也不错。,全国卷,II,【,试题回放,】,假定你是李华。应英国朋友,Bob,的要求，写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。内容须包括下面两幅图中的相关信息。,注意：,1,、字数,100,左右,2,、可以适当增减细节，以使行文连贯,3,、开头语已为你写好,Dear Bob,Thank you for your last letter asking about our library.Our library locates between the teaching building and our garden.The shape of it seems to be a book to welcome our students.its open from Monday to Friday,and we can borrow the books from 9:00a.m.to 7:00p.m.,There are many books available in our library,dealing with almost every subject.,Not only the books,but also the magazines can be read here.You may borrow up to five books at a time,and keep them for at most ten days.,Due to the library,we are offered a place to gain as much knowledge as we can.If you are interested in it,welcome to our school,and Ill show you around.,Yours sincerely,Li,hua,名师点评,本文最大的特点是描绘仔细而生动，意思表达十分契合。文章以短句为主，兼以长句读起来轻快。文章的体系结构也是常用的三段式，作者极力推荐自己的图书馆，这么好的图书馆怎么不打动他的外国朋友呢,?,【,浙江卷,】,在英语课堂上，你喜欢你的老师授课时只用英语，还是英语、汉语兼用？某英语杂志社就此话题邀请中学生发表看法。请你围绕“,How do you prefer your English classes to be taught?In English only,or in both English and Chinese?”,这个问题，参考所给要点，选择一种授课形式，写一篇英语短文。注意：,1.,词数,100,120,，短文开头已给出（不计词数）,2.,参考词汇：,atmosphere,氛围,I prefer my English classes to be taught in,满分作文一：,I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese,whose advantage is that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about.,The teacher first teaches the class in English,and then she explains,those that are hard to understand to us so that we get a better knowing of the passage,.That will be good for us.,However,teaching the class in two languages will make the English atmosphere not so strong.Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed.,Except for the disadvantage,I think it is really good to hear two languages in classes.It can make us more familiar with the foreign culture.,名师点评：审题是作文的第一要素，本文的审题准确无误。无论是要点的把握还是结构的组织都证明了这一点。本文运用,多种复杂句式,，整体看来是不错的。文中的一个,复合句式,显示了作者的英语功底。其他出彩短语的使用也很地道，可以参看好句中的分析。,好词：,1.advantage n.,优点,2.be familiar with,，对某人熟悉,3.atmosphere n.,气氛,好句：,1.I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese,whose advantage is that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about.,我更喜欢采用双语教学，其优点是可以更好地理解老师的话。,好处：,定语从句很好地组织了复杂句，同时,prefer,等词组的使用很地道。,2.Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed.,那些希望英语授课的学生们可能会失望了。,好处：,定语从句和,wish to do,的使用。,满分作文二：,I prefer my English classes to be taught only in English because it is helpful for us to improve the ability of speaking and listening in a very short time.I have strong interest in English study and foreign culture,so Id like to be totally,immersed,in the atmosphere of English so that I can quickly make progress.,Thats why I prefer total English.However,since we are all English beginners,its really hard to understand all that the teacher says.Sometimes we need Chinese explanation.So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in English but also using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to understand.,名师点评：本文写作十分成功。语言和句式是本文最大的特点。好词中词汇的使用，将作者的意思表达得完整而准确，从而映衬了词汇的重要性；其次，本文的句式以复杂句为主，表语、定语和状语从句的使用都十分到位。,好词,：,1.immerse v.,沉浸,2.explanation n.,解释,3.make progress,取得进,好句,：,1.I have strong interest in English study and foreign culture,so Id like to be totally immersed in the atmosphere of English so that I can quickly make progress.,我对英语学习和外国文化有着浓厚的兴趣，因此我想沉浸在英语的学习氛围中，使得我能更快地进步。,好处：,be immersed in,沉浸其中；,so that,表示目的。,2.So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in English but using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to understand.,因此，我的观点是，用英文教授，同时对于一些难以理解的内容用中文进行辅助讲解,好处：,表语从句使用正确。,总之，写作能力的培养和提高，有赖于扎实的基础、写作方法和大量的写作实践。背诵大量优秀作文范文是同学们写作能力快速提高的最好途径。,写作训练：,当前不少文学作品被改成电影,.,有人选择看电影,有人则喜欢读原著,.,请你以,“,Film or Book,Which Do You Prefer”,为题,按照下列要点写一篇英语短文,.1.,看电影,:,省时,有趣,易懂,.2.,读原著,:,细节更多,语言优美,;3.,我的看法及理由,.,词数,100120,文章题目和开头已经给出,(,不计总词数,).,原著：,original work,或,book in the original Film or book,which Do you Prefer Some of us think it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.,_,参考范文：,Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story.Besides,the film is usually more interesting,and it is easier to follow.,Some others have just the opposite opinion.They think that they can get more detailed information from the original.Meanwhile,the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.,Personally,I agree with the second view.Actually I have more reasons for it.I think I can stay at home,reading quietly in a situation of my own,and whats more,I am able to better understand the authors ideas.In a word,to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.,