高考英语 考点突破Unit5 阶段写作方略课件 大纲人教版选修7 课件.ppt

佳作赏析议论文,现象说明类,(2011,苏州高三联合调研,),假如你是班长，看到班上有部分同学在完成作业时，不是独立完成而是经常抄袭他人的作业。针对这种现象，你班召开班会课进行讨论，请你以“,My opinion on copying others homework”,为题，在班会课上谈谈你自己的看法。,上一页,主要原因,1.,作业量大，偏难；,2.,懒惰，对功课不感兴趣；,3.,取悦老师和家长。,你的看法,1.,抄袭作业不诚实，违反校纪，对自己不负责任；,2.,勤奋学习，有困难请教同学和老师；,3.,自拟,(,至少,1,点,),。,上一页,注意,：,1.,必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥。,2,词数：,150,左右。标题与开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。,My opinion on copying others homework,Today we are going to have a discussion about copying others homework.Here Ill say something about it first.,_,_,_,_,1,话题特点：这篇书面表达为议论文中的现象说明类，试题中给出了一些信息，但不详细，写作时需要自己补充一定的内容。根据现象说明类议论文的特点我们需要从已给出的信息中找出自己认为最重要的因素并加以阐述。,2,写好这类文章，需要注意：,(1),现象说明类议论文的特点。强调语言表达的客观性，力求简洁；围绕主题阐述；多用书面语，少用口头语。,(2),详略得当。本文重点应写你认为其中最重要的一个因素，并说明原因。,(3),适当地增加细节以使文章显得丰满，充实恰当地使用连词及过渡语使文章行文流畅，自然得体。,上一页,3,现象说明类议论文的写作模式可以归纳为：,(1),陈述所给信息中所提出的某一现象。,(2),阐述不同的因素与这一现象的关系。,(3),陈述其中一个因素与这一现象的密切联系并说明理由。,(4),总结并提出建议。,4,常用的句式表达：,(1),开头：,As we all know,.,Recently.,It is known to us all that.,.is being discussed hotly among.,上一页,(2),说明与这一现象有关的各个因素：,There are many factors that lead to.,This is caused by many factors,and among them,the most important are.,We can see that.are closely related to the phenomenon.,(3),表达个人观点并说明理由：,While among all the elements,，,I personally think that.because,In my opinion,，,.,(4),总结全文：,From the above,，,we should.,So we should.,My opinion on copying others homework,Today we are going to,have a discussion about,copying others homework.Here Ill say something about it first.,We all know some of our classmates copy others homework,instead of,doing it independently/,on their own,/by themselves.,On the one hand,，,they do so because,they have too much homework to do at home and at school,，,some of which is beyond them/too difficult for them.,On the other hand,，,some of the students are so lazy that they,are not intersted in,their lessons at all.,They dont work hard and have to copy others homework just to finish the assignments and please their teachers and parents.,上一页,In my opinion,，,its dishonest of them to copy others homework,，,which is against the school rules.,Whats more,，,copying others homework means cheating themselves.As middle school students,，,we should be honest,，,put our heart into our studies and finish our homework by ourselves instead of by copying.When we,have,any,difficulties/problems with,our homework,，,we can,turn to,our teachers and classmates,for help.,Only in this way can we,make progress,and take reponsibility for our future.,文章开篇便点出了本文要说明的现象,“,抄袭他人作业”，接下来说明产生这一现象的原因。“,instead of doing it by themselves”,，“,on the other hand”,以及“,so that”,等句式的正确运用为文章增添了亮点。,最后一段中作者表达了自己对这一现象的看法，并提出了合理的建议，不仅对上文的现象进行了充实，而且将文章的内容进一步升华，使全文一气呵成，浑然一体。,(1),短语类：,have a disussion about.,，,instead of,，,on their own,，,be interested in,，,have difficulties/problems with.,，,turn to sb.for help,，,make progress,上一页,(2),句子类：,状语从句：,They do so because.,Some of the students are so lazy that.,When we have any.,，,we can turn to.,定语从句：,.,，,which is against the school rule.,倒装句：,Only in this way can we make progress.,其他句式：,They dont work hard and have to copy.just to finish the.,As middle school students,，,we should.,(3),过渡语：,in my opinion,，,on the one hand.on the other hand,习作过关,据一项调查显示，有,85.8%,的中学生说自己的字迹不好看，而他们又不想改善字迹，其理由有很大差别。请根据下图写一篇,120,个词左右的短文，说明该现象并发表自己的看法，开头已给出。,上一页,上一页,_,_,_,_,_,【,参考范文,】,Nowadays,with the growing popularity of computers,teachers,students and their parents are paying less and less attention to handwriting.,According to a recent survey,about 85.8 percent of middle school students think that their handwriting is poor.Yet for various reasons,many students dont want to improve their hand,writing.51.5 percent of the students think that they can just use a computer,so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting,and 32.3 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practise.10.9 percent think that practising handwriting is useless.,上一页,As the saying goes,writing style shows the man.Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial,especially for middle school students.Therefore,in my opinion,more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future.,