高考英语考前辅导 书面表达 试题.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,2006,届高考英语考前辅导,-,书面表达,06,届考前辅导,-,书面表达,精彩回放,友情提醒,亮点点拨,精彩回放,A.,观点对比类文章,B.,今昔对比类文章,C.,数据说明类文章,D.,看图说话类文章,E.,提示议论文类文章,高考英语书面表达评分要求,评分原则,先根据文章的,内容,和,语言,初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,.,确定或调整档次,最后给分。,评分时，应注意的主要内容为：,内容要点,、,应用词汇,和,语法结构,的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。,第五档给分范围和要求,（,21-25,分）,完全完成了试题规定的任务,覆盖所有内容要求,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,语法和结构方面有些许错误，但为尽量使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言应用能力,有效的使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑,完全达到了预期的写作目的,精彩回放,A.,表示观点对比类写作套语,总起,:,Different people hold different opinions.,Opinions are divided.,People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards,People have different opinions on this problem.,People take different views on this question.,表达观点一,:,of them hold the opinion that.,of them are in favor of the idea that,People who are for/against the idea think,精彩回放,表达不同观点之间的衔接,:,However,of them hold a different view./of them hold the opposite opinion.,People who are against it dont think so.,However,each coin has two sides.,Different from those.,people think.,On the other hand,people object that.,精彩回放,B.,表示今昔对比类写作套语,1.,开头常用句型,(1)Great changes have taken place.,Great changes have taken place in my,hometown in the last five year.,Quite a few changes have taken place in,my school since you left China.,Over the past twenty years or so,great,changes have taken place in our life.,(2)Things have begun to improve since,自从,以来，事情有了好转,/,改善。,Things have begun to improve since schools,were called on to reduce learning load.,精彩回放,2.,对比常用句型,:,(1)used to,but now,过去常,，但是现在,(2)in the past,but now,在过去,，但是现在,(3)once,but now,曾经,.,，但是现在,(4)Things are different now.,情况已大不同了,(5)But now,everything has changed.,但是现在全变了,精彩回放,C.,表示数据说明类写作套语,文章结构,:,Part 1:General idea (conclusion/tendency),Part 2 Facts:(to support the idea),Part 3 Reasons,Part 4 Solutions or personal,opinion/suggestions(if needed),精彩回放,开头常用套语,:,The graph above shows that,As is shown by the graph/in the chart,From the graph/chart above,we can see,From the figures given in the table,it can be seen/noticed that,精彩回放,数据说明常用套语,:,The number of nearly,doubled,The number was,5 times,as much as,that of.,It,rose,from,It,decreased,twice,than that of,1906.,The total number,was,lowered,by,10%.,Compared with 1997,it,fell from,15,to,10%.,The number of amount to/add up to/sum up to/reach (,数量总计,),increase(rise/fall/drop)from to,）,Compared with make up about,精彩回放,原因说明常用套语,:,There are several reasons,that account for it.,A number of factors account for.,The change in.largely,results from,the fact that.,Firstly/First of all/To begin with,.Secondly,.Besides/In addition/Furthermore/Moreover,.Finally/Last but not least/,.,精彩回放,结尾常用套语,:,We can draw the conclusion that,In my opinion/Personally,As far as Im concerned,In short/in brief/in a word,It seems clear that,Its clear from the chart that,We can know/learn that,The results seem to suggest that,D.,看图说话类文章,E.,提示议论文类文章,友情提醒,看图作文写作应考虑的几点,1.,看懂图片，把图片展示的人物、地点、时间、事件等有机地串联起来，使之成为内容连贯的句子。,2.,确定短文的时态和人称。,3.,确定体裁（说明文还是记叙文），接着用简洁的语句描述图片或图表大意。,4.,根据图片或图表大意进行议论。,D.,看图说话类写作,友情提醒,walk in a park with my younger brother,see some foreigners,say“Good night!”,replied“Good evening!”,felt puzzled,look up in the reference book,misuse the phrase“Good night”,be determined to study English harder,never make the same mistake again,I thought English was easy to learn.However,what happened to me this evening changed my idea.,This evening I was walking in a park with my younger brother,when,we saw some foreigners coming towards us.,To be polite,I greeted them,saying,“,Good night!,”,To my surprise,one of them replied,“,Good evening!,”,rather than,“,Good night,”,.,Why did she say,“,Good evening,”,instead of,“,Good night,”,?,What was the difference between them?,I felt puzzled.,The moment,we got back home,I couldn,t wait to look them up in the reference book.,Not until then,did I realize I had misused the phrase,“,Good night,”,.,How ashamed I felt!,Thus,I,m determined to study English harder and never make the same mistake again.,增加开头内容,采用倒叙手法使文章前后呼应,整体完整,增添心理活动,使用多种句型,提示议论文写作应考虑的几点,1.,文章开头，能依据提示确立主题句（,topic,）,阐明观点或看法。,2.,使用连接词,分层次说明理由、缘由（,supporting sentences,）。,3.,归纳总结，首尾呼应。,D.,提示议论文类写作,友情提醒,谈谈阅读的好处：,1,）阅读对人有很大好处；,2,）读书给我们带来很大乐趣；,3,）书是我们最好的朋友。,Reading,does a lot of good to,human beings.,We can,enjoy the great pleasures,that reading gives us.,Books are our best friends.,半开放式书面表达,1.,按照提示，写出主题句。,友情提醒,Reading does a lot of good to human beings.,We can enjoy the great pleasures that reading gives us.,Books are our best friends.,For one thing,reading can,enrich our knowledge,and,broaden our horizons.,Besides,we can,share,the writers,ideas,and,communicate with,him who lived long ago.,For another thing,we can talk about the book that we have read.This helps us make friends with other people.,2.,根据主题句，确定,supporting details.,On the one hand,reading can enrich our knowledge and widen our eyesight.,When we read at home we can travel around the world and understand the things around us clearly.,Meanwhile,we can share the writers ideas and communicate,with him who lived long ago.,On the other hand,we can talk about the book that we have read.,This helps us make friends with other people.Therefore,those who can enjoy books can get much happiness from books.,Reading does a lot of good to human beings.,Many people like reading books in their spare time.It has become part of their lives.,Generally speaking,books are our best friends.,Reading good books should become our life-long hobby.,3.,串联,supporting details,添加必要细节。,1,、细节的添加要为主题服务。,2,、要使用自己有把握的句型和短语。,3,、主题思想不宜挖掘得太深。,4,、表达尽量要简洁、不宜罗嗦。,友情提醒,A,、运用高级词汇,B,、增加形容词或副词,C,、灵活运用各种句型,亮点点拨,一,.,运用,高级词汇,1.,这件事情,挺难,的。,This is a,challenging,job.,2.,我们就会了解父母的,辛苦工作,。,Well then know about parents,hardship,.,3.,这有助于我们学会,节俭,。,This helps us learn to,be thrifty.,亮点点拨,高级词汇举例,:,significant,hardship,available,contact,demanding,relatively,wasteful,frequent,亮点点拨,二,.,增加形容词或副词,1.,在我们的校园里有一个小池塘。,2.,如果父母的收入较好,There lies a,lovely,pond in our,beautiful,campus.,If their parents have a,relatively high,income,.,亮点点拨,表示程度的副词举例,hardly,seldom,rarely,merely,relatively,slightly,a bit,partly,completely,亮点点拨,置于句首的副词,1.,这极有,可能,使孩子养成依赖父母的习惯。,2.,尤其,当父母有足够的钱养家时，,。,Probably,this will make the children,develop the habit of living on parents.,Especially,when their parents have enough,money to support the family,.,亮点点拨,句首副词举例,strangely,frequently,especially,unbelievably,unexpectedly,surprisingly,besides,亮点点拨,三,.,灵活运用各种句型,1.,插入语,然而,其他同学持有不同意见。,The other students,however,hold a,different view.,另外，他们会以为将来可以依赖父母。,Besides,theyll think they can rely on,their parents in the future.,亮点点拨,2.It,句型,我们期望今年有个好收成。,It is expected that,there will be,a good harvest.,30%,学生认为无必要让孩子知道父母的收入。,30%of the students think,it,unnecessary to let children know,how much their parents earn.,亮点点拨,3.with,结构,作业做完了，那个男孩出去玩了。,With the homework finished,the boy went out to play.,有了父母可依赖，他们就不再努力学习了。,Theyll not study hard any more,with,rich parents to depend on.,亮点点拨,4.,分词短语,30%,同学不赞同这一看法，,认为孩子不应当,。,30%of my classmates disagree with,it,saying children shouldnt.,知道了这点，他们会越来越努力学习。,Knowing this,theyll study harder and,harder.,亮点点拨,5.,从句,他所做的一切使我们很失望。（主语从句）,What he did,disappointed us all.,我们应当知道父母的收入，因为这有助于我们,理解他们的艰辛。（状语从句）,We should know parents income,because itll help us understand how,hard they have to work.,亮点点拨,6.,倒装句型,我们只有努力学习才能为社会作出自己的贡献,.,Only by working hard can we make our contributions to our society in the future.,只有当我们意识到互相帮助的重要性,我们才能致力于建设一个和谐社会,.,Only when we realize the importance of helping each other can we be devoted to building a harmonious society.,亮点点拨,7.,强调句型,当他到家以后才知道发生了什么事情,.,It was not until he got home that he knew what had happened.,是他让我懂得了什么才是真正的互相帮助,.,It was he that taught me what helping each other really meant.,亮点点拨,