雅思考试流程图作业.ppt

Click to edit Master title style,Click to edit Master text styles,Second level,Third level,Fourth level,Fifth level,*,*,Click to edit Master title style,Click to edit Master text styles,Second level,Third level,Fourth level,Fifth level,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,雅思考试流程图作业,优选雅思考试流程图作业,3,流程图如写开头和总结,Introduction,（开头）,(introduce the process in your own words)The diagram presents the manufacturing process of two types of tea,pu-erh raw tea and pu-erh ripe tea,4,3,流程图如写开头和总结,SummaryOverview,（总结）,(give an overviewsummary of the complete process)Illustrated in the illustrations is that,although the first three stages are the same for both teas,it can,be seen,that the methods of production differ in the final stages,which accounts for the resulting variations in the two teas.,5,优选雅思考试流程图作业,The milk is stored in a holding tank until it is ready to be delivered.,Write at least 150 words.,SVwhile SV,After that,the milk is pasturized.,【开头不能一上来就直接介绍cacao tree，而是通过主题词chocolate引出，否则显得太唐突】,The tree produces large red pods which contain white cocoa beans.,When the cows have been milked,they are then returned to the field.,Once SV,SV,The cows are milked while the holding tank is prepared.,Two things happening at the same time,流程图必备三个词：process或procedure整个过程；,【流程图特点之四：使用一些表示顺序的连接词】,(introduce the process in your own words)The diagram presents the manufacturing process of two types of tea,pu-erh raw tea and pu-erh ripe tea,【三个句子的并列：“句子A,句子B and 句子C”。,3,流程图如写主体段落,6,3,流程图如写主体段落,First,+sentence,First,the cows graze in the field.,After that,+sentence,After that,the milk is pasturized.,Afterwards,+sentence,Afterwards,the milk is pasturized.,Then,+sentence,Then,the milk is pasturized.,Next,+sentence,Next,the milk is pasturized.,Following this,+sentence,Following this,the milk is pasturized.,7,3,流程图如写主体段落,COMPLEX STRUCTURES,COMPLEX STRUCTURES,After SV,SV,After+gerund,After the milk is packed and labeled,it is delivered.,After being packed and labeled,the milk is delivered.,Before SV,SV,Before+gerund,Before the milk is delivered,it is packed and labeled.,Before being delivered,the milk is packed and labeled.,SV until SV,The milk is stored in a holding tank until it is ready to be delivered.,Once SV,SV,SVonce SV,Once the cows have been milked,they are then returned to the field.,The cows are returned to the field once they have been milked.,When SV,SV,SVwhen SV,When the cows have been milked,they are then returned to the field.,The cows are returned to the field when they have been milked.,Having,Having been milked,the cows are then returned to the field.,8,3,流程图如写主体段落,Two things happening at the same time,SV at the same time as SV,At the same time as SV,SV,The cows are milked at the same time as the holding tank is prepared.,At the same time as the holding tank is prepared,the cows are milked.,SVwhile SV,While SV,SV,The cows are milked while the holding tank is prepared.,While the holding tank is prepared,the cows are milked.,9,【,高分范文,写作特点,深度点评,】,You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.,The illustrations below show how chocolate is produced.,Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.,Write at least 150 words.,COMPLEX STRUCTURES,【流程图特点之四：使用一些表示顺序的连接词】,【流程图特点之五：要适当地添加个别图中没有交代但能从图片中直接读出来的一些内容，否则可能达不到字数要求。,【流程图特点之一：介绍过程要使用一般现在时】,【高分范文写作特点深度点评】,【流程图特点之三：大量使用被动语态,表客观性。,优选雅思考试流程图作业,Before being delivered,the milk is packed and labeled.,【开头不能一上来就直接介绍cacao tree，而是通过主题词chocolate引出，否则显得太唐突】,The cows are milked at the same time as the holding tank is prepared.,【三个句子的并列：“句子A,句子B and 句子C”。,After+gerund,SummaryOverview（总结）,SVwhile SV,Next,+sentence,Writing task 1,You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.,The illustrations below show how chocolate is produced.,Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.,Write at least 150 words.,SummaryOverview（总结）,但是一定要把握尺度，千万不要加上自己的主观观点，否则会扣分】,After that,the milk is pasturized.,（The ten pictures demonstrates/illustrates/exhibits/depicts/describes/gives information about the different stages of making liquid chocolate.,Write at least 150 words.,After that,the milk is pasturized.,After that,the milk is pasturized.,【高分范文写作特点深度点评】,【流程图特点之一：介绍过程要使用一般现在时】,【所有的小作文第一句话都要用一般现在时。,【三个句子的并列：“句子A,句子B and 句子C”。,After that,+sentence,【流程图特点之一：介绍过程要使用一般现在时】,Then,+sentence,COMPLEX STRUCTURES,【,高分范文及深度点评,】,The diagram shows the stages in the process of making chocolate.,（,The ten pictures demonstrates/illustrates/exhibits/depicts/describes/gives information about the different stages of making liquid chocolate.),【,所有的小作文第一句话都要用一般现在时。流程图必备三个词：,process,或,procedure,整个过程；,stage,阶段；,step,步骤,】,【,流程图特点之一,：,介绍过程要使用一般现在时,】,Chocolate comes from the cacao tree,which is grown in parts of South America,Africa and Indonesia.The tree produces large red pods which contain white cocoa beans.,【,开头不能一上来就直接介绍,cacao tree,，而是通过主题词,chocolate,引出，否则显得太唐突,】,【,流程图特点之二,：,大量使用,定语从句，,将有关联的两句话连接，,并少量结合其它从句,。,】,【,流程图特点之三,：,大量使用,被动语态,表客观性。,】,Firstly,，,when the pods are ripe,they are harvested,the beans are removed and they are fermented for several days in large wooden boxes.During the fermenting process,the beans turn brown.,【,流程图特点之四,：,使用一些表示顺序的连接词,】,【,三个句子的并列：“句子,A,句子,B and,句子,C”,。,【,流程图特点之五,：,要适当地添加个别图中没有交代但能从图片中直接读出来的一些内容，否则可能达不到字数要求。但是一定要把握尺度，千万不要加上自己的主观观点，否则会扣分,】,beans,fermented,Next,the brown beans are spread in the sun to dry.They are then put in large sacks and transported by train or lorry.After this,the beans are taken to a chocolate factory where they are roasted in an oven at temperatures of between 250 and 350 degree Celsius.,