英语作文训练.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,作文训练,热身：熟悉词汇,Appreciate,欣赏感激意识到,I would it if,Appearance,出现 外表,dont judge a person by his,Impression,令人印象深刻的,leave a deep on,sb,Escape,逃跑 遗忘,the memories when.never me,Count,数数 重要,it is that,好句子朗读,Everyone is the architect of his own fortune,每个人都是自己命运的建筑师,No cross,no crown,（不经历风雨怎会有彩虹）,No sweat,no sweet,No pains,no gains,Many hands make light work,众人拾柴火焰高,A thousand journey starts with the first step,千里之行始于足下,评判作文的标准,第一档：一塌糊涂（,messy,）；,第二档：糊里糊涂（,cloudy,）；,第三档：马马虎虎（,common,）；,第四档：清清楚楚（,clear,）；,第五档：漂漂亮亮（,cool,）。,20,分以上作文 踩点扣分,18,分以下作文 踩点给分,好作文的标准,书写清晰明了 无填涂,结构合情合理,审题明确 中心突出,行文语言流畅准确 不是单纯拼凑 阅卷老师一目了然,句式丰富 使用较多的高中阶段学过的单词词组,内容积极乐观 情感饱满 体现个人良好的价值观人生观,作文书写,态度决定高度,attitude determines altitude,传达两种思想：,我很认真，我要拿高分,五要：干净，整洁，,压线,，分三段，,g h f y I s,字母重点注意 恰当的大小可以遮丑,五不要：添涂，伞型，一逗到底，上蹦下蹿，随意，瘦小挤在一起，硕大无比,注意：字母要善于辨认，,字母之间有间隔,单词,之间,不能隔太开 忽大忽小,大概一行,十一到十三字,开头结尾一个单词,拼写,也不能错,开头结尾,三到四行,不能有,语法错误,作文结构,开头 总 对提示语或图片进行解释 阐明观点开门见山,一针见血,34,行,中间 分 提出问题 解决问题办法 结果,情绪饱满,1012,行,结尾 总 总结观点 收获 前后呼应,感情升华,34,行,关于审题,抓住关键词,请根据以下提示，,并结合事例,，,用英语,写一篇短文。,Interest,plays an important role in our life.With the motivation of interest,we will eventually make our way to success.,注意：,1.,无须写标题,，,不得照抄英语提示语,；,2.,除诗歌外，文体不限,；,3.,文中,不得透露个人姓名和学校名称,；,4.,词数为,120,左右。,今年是不得少于,120,字,请根据以下提示，,结合一则人生励志故事,，用英语写一篇短文。,Regardless of what happened yesterday and what may or may not happen tomorrow,the present moment is where we are,.,注意：,无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；,除诗歌外，文体不限；,文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；,词数为,120,左右。,请你根据以下提示，,并结合事例,，用英语写一篇短文。,A man can fail many times,but,he isnt a failure until he begins to blame somebody else,.,-J.Burroughs,注意,:,无须写标题；,除诗歌外，文体不限；,内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例,；,文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；,词数不少于,120,如,引用提示语则不计入总词数,。,English composition,紧密相关的,20,个完成句子,+,插入语,+,高中学过的熟悉好词汇词组衔接词,=,you make it!,好单词,老师偏爱“学得晚”的单词，因为使用学得比较晚的单词，可以体现一个人“学以致用”的意识。,(1)Adj.,困难的,黯然低分词：,difficult,闪光高分词：,tough,艰难的,challenging,有挑战性的,(2)Adj.,重要的,黯然低分词：,important,闪光高分词：,vital,至关重要的,;essential,必不可少的,;significant,有重要意义的,;,(3)Adj.,美丽的,黯然低分词：,beautiful,闪光高分词：,appealing,动人的,;attractive,吸引人的,;charming,迷人的,;fascinating,迷人的,(4)adj.,不开心的,黯然低分词：,sad,闪光高分词：,discouraged,气馁的,;depressed,沮丧的,;downhearted,垂头丧气的,;low-spirited,意志消沉的,;break down,在阅卷老师看来，活用短语是一个考生能力的体现。因此，我们可以掌握一些将某些常见单词转化为短语的用法,，如：,(5)v.,参加,黯然低分词：,join,闪光高分词：,take part in,、,participate in,(6)v.,使用,黯然低分词：,use,闪光高分词：,make good use of,、,make the best of,(7)v.,拜访,黯然低分词：,visit,闪光高分词：,pay a visit to,(8),最常见的换词手段：形容词,=of+,同根名词,黯然低分词：,Important,闪光高分词：,be of importance,(9)v,帮忙,黯然低分词：,help,闪光高分词：,come to ones assistance,(10)adv,黯然低分词：,finally,闪光高分词：,at length,好词汇词组造句,temporary setback,不要被暂时的困难所沮丧,Dont be cast down by temporary setbacks,Make great progress,你越努力 你取得的进步越大,The harder you work,the more progress you will make,Be bound to do/be doomed to do,除非我们不遗余力 我们注定是一个失败,Unless we spare no effort,we are doomed to be a failure,Obstacle,任何你遇到的困难将会让你更加坚强,Whatever obstacles you meet with will make you stronger,英语写作中的句式选择,结合平时练习和所学短语及语法运用，总结如下：,一 改变时态,例,:The bell is ringing now.,一般,There goes the bell.,特殊,事例全部用过去式,二 改变语态,例,:People suggest that the conference be put off.,一般,It is suggested that the conference be put off.,被动胜过主动，讲述理由时更加客观可信,I believe we will win,一般,I am firmly convinced that our efforts will pay off,特殊,三 改变结构,不定式,例,:she work hard to realize her dream,一般,In order to realize her dream,she worked hard,特殊,使用过去分词,Because she devoted all her life to studying,she succeeded.,一般,Devoted to studying,she finally made it,I was inspired by her words and made up my mind to hold on,Inspired by her words,I made up my mind to hold on,I failed the exams many times and almost gave up,Having failed the exams in a row,I almost gave up,形容词作状语,I realized the importance of holding on and decided not to give up,Aware of the importance of holding on,I determined not to give up,Finally,I arrived at the destination,At length,I arrived at the destination,safe and sound /tired but satisfied,使用,v-,ing,1.When he arrives,，,please give me an e-mail,一般,On arriving/when arriving,please give me an e-mail.,特殊,2.,进入到重点大学是我一直想要的,Being admitted to a key university is what I am longing for,3.,每次看到这样的话语，我都忍不住想起小时候,Every time I saw those words,I couldnt help recalling my memory when I was young,使用名词性从句,1.It disappointed everybody that he didnt turn up.,一般,The fact that he,didn,t turn up,disappointed everybody.,特殊,2.he is surprised that the little girl knowsso many things.,一般,What surprises him is,that the little girlknows so many things.,特殊,他做了他所能做的事帮我摆脱困境,He did what he could to get me out of trouble,从那以后，我不停反思我所做的事情,From then on,I never stopped reflecting on what I had done,使用定语从句,例,;The girl is spoken highly of.,Hercomposition was well written.,一般,The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of.,特殊,Honesty,to which teachers attach great importance,plays a significant part in our daily life,There was a time when,Thanks to,sb,without whom I couldnt have got through the hard times,使用状语从句,I wont believe what he says.,一般,No matter what he says,I wont believe.,特殊,时间状语 四个,when/,一,就,Be about to do when it occurred to me that,原因状语,thanks to/due to/owing to,让步状语,no matter+,wh,-/although/as/even if,条件状语,as long as/unless/only if,结果、伴随状语,thus doing/only to do,目的状语,in order to/in an attempt to do,使用虚拟语气,例,:The ship didnt sink with all on board because there were the efforts of the captain.,一般,But for the efforts of the captain,the ship would have sunk with all on board.,特殊,But for the fact that/had it not been for the fact that,It is high time that,sb,should do,十 使用倒装句型 强调句型,(8,个,NO),例：,Though Im weak Ill make the effort.,一般,Weak as I am,Ill make the effort.,特殊,He finds English is difficult to learn,一般,So difficult does he find it to learn English,特殊,I have never had such an unforgettable experience in my life,Never have I had a more unforgettable experience in my life,His hard work makes a difference,一般,It is,his hard work,that makes,a difference,特殊,十一 插入语,To Ones+n(delight,disappointment,surprise,relief),To make matters worse,Whats more,whats worse /in addition,In the long run/term,From,now(then,)on/since then,Meanwhile,therefore,whereas,As a consequence/at length,In a word/in a nutshell/to sum up,fortunately/from where I stand,As a matter of fact/believe it or not,To put it in another way,例文,结合,校园事例,写英语作文,Many hands make light work.,Cooperation,is so important that we can never emphasize the importance of it too much.,无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；,除诗歌外，文体不限；,文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；,词数为,120,左右。,Union is strength.,Whenever youre faced with difficulties or in a dilemma,cooperation plays a significant part in getting you out of trouble.,There was a time when,I,was so proud that,I overlooked my peers,refusing to,work together with them.,Therefore,there was no doubt that,I was left alone,suffering from loneliness and failure,.,Fortunately,a teacher impressed on me the value of cooperation,.,From then on,I learned to help each other and turn to my friends for help,whenever I had difficulty in finishing a task on my own,.,Surely,cooperation made a difference.Now I am getting along well with my friends.,Meanwhile,I become more confident.,My experience has taught me that,only if we attach great importance to cooperation can we go beyond ourselves,.,As the saying goes,“United,we stand;Divided,we fall.”,