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,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,5/2/2018,#,Welcome to Aileens,English Writing Class,Writing assignment,Write a composition of at least 60 words on the topic,“_makes me happy”,It should be a person,an experience or an action.,Content,Sample 1,Title:,The book makes me happy,Questions,Yes,No,Skills,Is,the title,appropriate,(,合适的,),？,Add,Content,Sample 2,(1),In order to keep healthy,people choose to take various sports,such as running,swimming,playing basketball and so on.,(,2),I like jogging best because it makes me happy.On one hand,jogging is good for my health.,Jogging makes me happy,Questions,Yes,No,Skills,Are all the sentences,related,(,有关的,),to the topic?,Cut S1,Content,Sample 3,(1),I think studying in groups is full of happiness.,(2),Its a good way to make our study better.,(3),I think it can make us solve the difficulties more quickly.,(4),It can also let us know the best answer to the question.,(5),In this way,studying in groups can make us happier than solving the problems by ourselves.,(6),So I like studying in groups very much.,Studying in groups,makes me happy,Questions,Yes,No,Skills,Are all the sentences,related,(,有关的,),to the topic?,Correct S2/S3/S4/S5,Content,Sample 4,(1),I read books every day before going to bed because it makes me happy.,(2),When I am reading,I can experience what the characters experienced.,(4),Its really interesting to read different stories.,(5),Whats more,books contain wisdom of ancient people so that I can learn from them.,(6),All in all,everyone should get into the habit of reading books since it is both pleasant and helpful.,Reading makes me happy,Score:8+8+3=19,Content,Sample,5,(1),Playing basketball is good for my health.,(2),So I always practise it even though I am not good at it.,(3),Whats more,playing basketball can help me keep slim.,(4),As a result,I can become more confident.,(5),In conclusion,playing basketball brings me a lot of benefits which makes me happy all the time.,Playing basketball makes me happy,Questions,Yes,No,Skills,Does the composition have a topic sentence,supporting sentences and a concluding sentence?,Add a T.S.,Today Ill tell you two reasons why playing basketball makes me happy.,I like playing basketball which makes me happy.There are two reasons for it.,Content,Sample,6,(1),I like playing,basketball,which makes me happy.,(2),Playing basketball is good for my health.,(3),So I always practise it even though I am not good at it.,(4),Whats more,playing basketball can help me keep slim.,(5),In,t,his way,I can become more confident.,Playing basketball makes me happy,Questions,Yes,No,Skills,Does the composition have a topic sentence,supporting sentences and a concluding sentence?,Add a C.S.,Content,Sample 7,(,1),It is said that reading ten thousand books is like travelling ten thousand miles.,(2),I like reading very much because it makes me happy.,(3),Reading can broaden my horizon.,(4),Through reading,I can get familiar with many unknown but interesting things.,(5),Whats more,it can guide me to do a lot of things.,(6),All in all,because of reading,my life is full of happiness.,Questions,Yes,No,Skills,Is there,enough information,to support the supporting sentences?,Add,between S5 and S6,Grammar,Sample 8,(,1),As a student,I study almost every day.,(2),I can receive knowladge from studying.,(3),And I can also.,(4),I belive that studying makes me happy.,Questions,Yes,No,Skills,Are,there any,spelling mistakes,?,Correct S2/S4,Grammar,Sample 9,(,1),Helping others makes me happy.,(2),When I saw others in trouble,I always tell myself I should give them a hand.,Questions,Yes,No,Skills,Are there any,tense problems,?,Correct S2,Grammar,Sample 10,(,1),I am keen on playing volleyball and it brings me a lot of happiness in my life.,(2),I played volleyball since four years ago.,Questions,Yes,No,Skills,Are there any,tense problems,?,Correct S2,Sample 11,Grammar,(1),I think travelling makes me happy.,(2),During the trip,I can experience a lot of interesting and meaningful things,.,(3),It,can open my eyes to see the world.,Questions,Yes,No,Skills,Is there any,Chinglish,?,Replace S3,Reading books makes me happy,(1),Listening to music,reading different books and running can make me happy.,(2),I think reading interesting books is the best way to make me happy.,(3),Although reading books costs me a lot of time,I never give it,up.,(4),When I was reading books,I can forget anything.,(5),I feel like I am the person in the story.,(6),In addition,I can gain a lot of knowledge from reading.,(7),So in my opinin,reading books is a good way to make me happy.,Questions,Yes,No,Skills,Is,the title,appropriate,？,Are all the sentences,related,to the topic?,Does the composition have a topic sentence,supporting sentences and a conclusion sentence?,Is there,enough information,to support the supporting sentences?,Questions,Yes,No,Skills,Are,there any,spelling mistakes,?,Are there any,tense problems,?,Is there any,Chinglish,?,Questions,Yes,No,Skills,Is,the title,appropriate,？,Are all the sentences,related,to the topic?,Does the composition have a topic sentence,supporting sentences and a concluding sentence?,Is there,enough information,to support the supporting sentences?,Use the,checklists,and the,four skills,to revise the following composition.,Questions,Yes,No,Skills,Are,there any,spelling mistakes,?,Are there any,tense problems,?,Is there any,Chinglish,?,Content,Grammar,M,usic makes me happy,(1),Different people have different hobbies,.,(2),So,do I,.,(3),I like doing many things such as reading,jogging and so on.,(4),Im keen on listening to music because it makes me happy.,(5),On one hand,listening to music can make me feel relaxed.,(6),I can have a sound sleep if I,listen,to the light music before sleeping.,(7),On the other hand,it can keep me calm,.,(8),I hope I am a singer in the future.,Homework,Make changes to the composition.,Write the final composition neatly(,整洁,地,)on the sheet.,Revise,your own composition.,Use the,checklist,and the,four skills,.,