中考英语书面表达综合分类解析1.doc

中考英语书面体现综合分类解析1

一、中考英语书面体现（含答案详细解析）
1．书面体现
地球是我们家园，我们作为地球主人，就应当好好保护地球。目前正在倡导“低碳”生活，只要我们不污染地球环境，不挥霍地球能源，就可以让我们周围变得更绿，生活变得更美好。作为中学生，我们应当怎样做呢？谈谈你想法。内容应当包括如下几点：
1. 节省用水、用电；2. 节省纸张，循环使用旧书本，保护森林；3. 节省粮食，在更多土地上种树；4. 不乱丢杂物，保护环境；
规定：短文中不得出现真实校名和人名；80词左右
提醒词：the greenhouse gases lifestyle 低碳生活方式
How does our earth turn better?
The earth is our home. _______________________________________________________
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If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we are living will be better and better.
【答案】How does our earth turn better?
The earth is our home. We should protect our earth as the owner. But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?
I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. When you wash, can you close down the water? Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? I think saving paper is necessary. All the used text books should be recycled. Thus, less trees won't be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. Don't throw litter everywhere, it will pollute our environment.
If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we living will be better and better.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to do，live in，around us， such as，as a middle school student，and so on，close down the water，turn off the lights，cut down，make a contribution to our earth，pollute our environment，better and better等。而固定构造But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?和I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm.等复杂从句构造运用，丰富了短文内容，使体现多样化，是本文亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记某些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以合适引用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

2． 近来一份学生体质健康调查成果显示，学生近视率仍维持在高位水平，且越来越低龄化。请根据下表所提醒内容，用英语写一篇短文，并刊登自已观点。
现 状
大概70%学生眼睛近视
重要原因
1. 睡眠局限性
2. 长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等
防止措施
1. 做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动
2. 养成对用眼习惯
你观点
… ….（至少一条）

参照词汇：近视 shortsighted
规定：
（1）词数：80～100个。
（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可合适发挥。
The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present,
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【答案】The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.
Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time.
In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.
I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇图表作文。根据题干规定可知，本篇文章重要使用一般目前时写作，人称用第三人称复数和第一人称。内容包括：学生近视原因：1.睡眠局限性（not enough）2.长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等（for a long time）防止近视措施：1.做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动（eye exercises）2.养成对用眼习惯（have the good habit of）个人观点：如：我认为，我们应当理解保护眼睛重要性，尽最大努力保护我们眼睛。（I think ⋅⋅⋅；try one's best to do sth.）。
常用重点句型和短语有：sb. spend some time doing sth.，in order to do sth.，try to do sth.，the importance of…等。

3． 书面体现
暑假即未来临,对于怎样安排孩子初中毕业后第一种假期,家长们和孩子自已有着各自想法。根据下表提醒,写一篇英语短文,描述他们不一样见解,同步刊登你自已对暑假安排观点。
Parents' opinions
Get ready for high school. Do some housework…
Kid's opinions
Have a good rest. Do some sightseeing…
Your opinion
…

注意]
（1）表格中观点仅供参照,容许合适发挥;
（2）开头已给出,不计入总词数;
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息;
（4）词数:不少于80。
How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.
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【答案】How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.
Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so it's important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.
In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. It's good for us to do some sports.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了重要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点合适发挥．写作中，应注意描述全面性，尽量将提醒内容运用上；结合材料内容，可知本文重要是第三人称，一般目前时态进行论述．语言表述应当符合语法构造，造句应当符合英语体现习惯．合适使用连词，做到上下文联络紧密，符合逻辑关系．
【点睛】
这篇短文用到了某些好句型：They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.这些给文章增色不少。

4．临近毕业，学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段自评和组评活动，假设你是 Moonlight 小组 组长，请根据下面表格中信息和提醒，为你组员 Tommy 进行综合素质评价，写一 份素质汇报．
Name
Tommy
Characteristics
聪颖、大方（各举一例）
Hobbies
喜欢看书，认为看书有诸多好处（请列举 2 个好处）
Honour
他在家协助做家务。在学校和同学相处融洽。上学途中遵守交通规则（举 一例）。今年，学校授予了他优秀学生奖（Award for Best Student）
Problems
面临考试，遭受压力痛苦，他没有充足睡眠．
Your suggestions
（根据实际状况提 2 点提议）…

规定：1、体现清晰、语法对、上下文连贯；2、要点必须包括所有有关信息，并作合适发挥；3、词数：100 词左右；4、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等
Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.
【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his friends.He likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on children’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the exam comes. And he doesn’t have enough sleep.
I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.
【解析】
这篇作文规定我们按照表格里内容简介一下Tommy状况，为Tommy写一篇综合素质评价汇报。在表格中有非常详细有关Tommy各方面内容，我们需要用对英语把这些内容有条理体现出来。表格中波及内容较多，写作时要注意体现条理性。这篇作文应重要使用第三人称来写。在最终要给Tommy提某些提议，这一部分应当用第一人称。同步注意体现精确性，尤其是表格中第五项和第六项内容。
【亮点阐明】这是一篇比较优秀范文。这篇作文内容完整，包含了表格中所有内容，没有遗漏要点。体现精确，注意了被动形式使用，如He was rewarded by our school this year.。写作时注意了条理性，使文章具有层次感，条理清晰。短文注意到了长短句结合，并恰当使用了某些连词，使文章体现连贯。如He is always ready to help others.、He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this year.等。

5．书面体现
初中即将毕业，同学们都感到压力很大。就此问题，老师规定你在英语课上做一种以“Less Pressure Makes Life Better”为题汇报，谈谈你做法，与同学分享经验。请根据如下规定写一份发言稿，内容包括：
1. 普遍存在压力：同学关系；考试
2. 我过去压力：父母期望；学习
3. 我成功缓和压力措施及效果；……
规定：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
2. 词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Less Pressure Makes Better Life
Hello, everyone!
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. _____
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【答案】Hello, my classmates!
Pressure is a serious problem in today's world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can't get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.
I was always under pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class. They always sent me to all kinds of after-classes on weekends. 
I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best. Finally, they understood me. In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies. 
Less pressure makes better life. Thank you.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文规定我们针对目前同学们普遍感到压力大这种现象，以Less Pressure Makes Life Better为题，谈谈自已见解，和同学们分享一下自已经验。审题可知，文章中应重要包括如下几种内容：首先简介同学们普遍感到压力这种现象；然后讲述自已过去曾面对压力；最终简介自已怎样成功缓和压力。题目中只给出了大概提纲，其中详细内容应由学生们自已发挥想象力来补充，并用对英语体现出来。学生们可以从自身经历和体会出发，选用生活中常见场景进行简介。文章应使用一般目前时和一般过去时，注意根据体现需要使用对时态，并变化谓语动词对形式。句式构造可以简单句构造为主，这样句式体现简洁、明了，易于掌握。但为提高作文档次，应穿插使用并列句和复合句，或使用某些复杂构造，如非谓语动词、被动语态等。语句之间使用恰当连接成分，使文意连贯。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀作文，短文作者根据题目规定，谈了自已对同学们普遍感到压力大这种现象见解，并分享了自已经历。短文有如下几种长处：首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中规定所有信息，且层次清晰，文章提成了四段，每一段中心话题也很明确。另一方面短文中使用了对时态和人称，文章重要使用了一般目前时和一般过去时，谓语动词形式精确。句式构造以简单句为主，论述清晰、简洁。也使用了并列句和复合句构造，如宾语从句、状语从句等。短文中使用了丰富句式，如Some students can't get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.、My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class、In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies等等。

6．环境保护话题是人们最关怀话题之一，请以Change for a better China为主题，结合自已家乡变化写一篇英语短文。
注意事项：
1.短文应包括表格中所有提醒内容，条理清晰，作合适发挥。
2.短文中不能出现真实人名和地名,词数不少于80。
状况
水污染，大气污染......
应对措施
立即制止此类活动,治理环境（至少两条）......
感想提议
环境可以变得更好......

Change for a better China
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【答案】We all know it is becoming more and more important to protect our environment well. But some people don’t care about it .They throw litter into the river and even worse factories also put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.
I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.
【解析】
【详解】
环境保护话题是人们最关怀话题之一，请以Change for a better China为主题，结合自已家乡变化写一篇英语短文。规定中已经给出了部分提醒，动笔先应先认真阅读提醒，确定写作内容。写作中注意体现观点时常用句式，注意在体现不一样观点时，连词使用。内容上应注意描述全面性；语言表述应当符合语法构造，造句应当符合英语体现习惯。
【点睛】
本文紧紧围绕规定对家乡做了简单简介，内容完整，用了表格中信息。2. 句式丰富。表述灵活。衔接自然，顺畅。文中用到了某些好句型：The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.；We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy.给文中增色不少。

7．4月23日是“世界读书日”，你校英语俱乐部正在开展主题为“多读书，读好书”活动。假如你是李华，请你写一封倡议书，向全体同学发出号召。内容包括：应当读什么样书，以及读书意义。
提醒词语：story, novel, knowledge, improve, important
提醒问题：● What kind of books should we read? ● Why do we read?
Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming.

So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.
Li Hua

【答案】例文
Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming. As a middle school student, everyone should read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing.
So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，写出对学生倡议。
例文点评：例文采用是一段式，写是阅读好处，时态采用是一般目前时，描述倡议时，描写细致，条理清晰。
高分亮点：
短语：Firstly；Secondly；Finally；a good way to do sth；broaden our knowledge and horizon。
句型：reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills；reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。

8．书面体现
中考后暑假即将开始，你和某些同学准备结伴出国旅行。旅行社提供了两个国家供你选择游玩。请根据旅行社提供信息，将你选择用英文向同学们简介。
Britain

Australia
Time
July 1 - July 14

Time
August 15 -August 24
Activities
visit the Buckingham Palace （白金汉宫）
visit the British Museum （大
英博物馆）
watch football matches
…

Activities
visit the Sydney Opera House
travel around the Gold Coast （黄金海岸）
have fun with kangaroos and koalas
…

Attention
changeable weather

Attention
winter
Cost
20,000 yuan

Cost
16,000 yuan

规定：
1. 所写内容必须包括某一国家所有信息及选择理由；
2. 结合游玩国家状况，自拟但愿可以安排活动，并提出1-2点出游注意事项；
3. 文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 语义通顺、意思连贯、条理清晰、书写规范；
5. 不得出现真实人名、校名等有关信息。
The summer holiday is coming. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad.

I hope I will have a good time there!
【答案】The summer holiday is coming. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad. I have read information about two countries——Britain and Australia. I like britain. So I think we can go to Britain.The time is july 1 to july 14. Its activities include visiting the buckingham palace,visiting the british museum, and watching football matches.The first, I want us to visit the Buckingham Palace and the british museum, I think it is very helpful for us to understand the history and culture of Britain. Next I hope to watch football matches. I like football very much. It will be exciting.
However, the weather in Britain is changeable, which will make our trip inconvenient. And it's expensive to travel to the UK, whi