英语中考英语书面表达训练1.doc

-英语中考英语书面体现训练（word）1

一、中考英语书面体现（含答案详细解析）
1． 写作
假定你是李华，在一位名叫Tiger Mom学生家长博客上，你看到如下内容。 请你根据博客内容，写作要点和规定，给这位家长答复。
I’m the mother of a fourteen-year –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?
写作要点：1. 表明自已见解。
2. 陈说自已理由。
3. 提出至少2条提议。
【答案】Hi,TigerMom,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.My idea is that it is not quite
right for you to do so.
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university
admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are
many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in
society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up
mentally and physically.
So I suggest that you take your friends' advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let her
have more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，对学生家长博客进行答复。结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：My idea is that……，There are……，Some all-A students in school have…….，The reason is……，So I suggest that……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头表明自已见解，接下来陈说自已理由，最终简介自已提议。此处turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

2．书面体现
同学们，中考后就会迎来漫长暑假了，班会课上老师组织大家讨论假期学习和生活计划。假如你是李华，请根据如下内容提醒用英语向同学们汇报一下你计划。
内容提醒：
暑假计划
学习
博览群书；学习技能 （或自拟一点）
生活
健康饮食；坚持锻炼 （或自拟一点）
其他
热爱公益；亲近自然 （或自拟一点）

注意：
1. 体现中必须包括所给要点，可以合适发挥，不要简单翻译。
2. 词数90左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
3. 体现中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Dear classmates,
Summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it.
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I hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. That’s all. Thank you.
【答案】Dear classmates,
Summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it.
First, I'd like to choose several good books and read them carefully. This can help me open my mind and learn more about the world. I also think it's necessary for me to learn at least one skill. I'm interested in cooking, so I will learn to cook some delicious dishes during the holiday.
Second, health is the most important. So I will eat healthily and exercise more. I plan to eat more fruit and vegetables and keep running every day.
Third, it's a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need. I will pay more attention to protecting our environment so that we can make our Earth a better world. Also, travelling out is a good choice. While travelling, we can be close to nature and learn about different cultures. We have more chances to search the Internet. I know unhealthy websites are harmful to us. I will say no to them.
I hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. That's all. Thank you.
【解析】亮点阐明：这篇习作层次清晰，内容饱满，体现流畅。文中使用了非常好短语，例如I'd like to do，help me open my mind，at least，be interested in，during the holiday，plan to do，join in，be kind to someone in need，pay more attention to，be close to nature，search the Internet等。而First, I'd like to choose several good books and read them carefully./ Second, health is the most important./Third, it's a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need.等表次序词和综合句式运用，既使短文层次清晰，又丰富了习作内容，使体现多样化，是本文最大亮点。
点睛：书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

3． 书面体现
暑假即未来临,对于怎样安排孩子初中毕业后第一种假期,家长们和孩子自已有着各自想法。根据下表提醒,写一篇英语短文,描述他们不一样见解,同步刊登你自已对暑假安排观点。
Parents' opinions
Get ready for high school. Do some housework…
Kid's opinions
Have a good rest. Do some sightseeing…
Your opinion
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注意]
（1）表格中观点仅供参照,容许合适发挥;
（2）开头已给出,不计入总词数;
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息;
（4）词数:不少于80。
How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.
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【答案】How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.
Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so it's important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.
In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. It's good for us to do some sports.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了重要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点合适发挥．写作中，应注意描述全面性，尽量将提醒内容运用上；结合材料内容，可知本文重要是第三人称，一般目前时态进行论述．语言表述应当符合语法构造，造句应当符合英语体现习惯．合适使用连词，做到上下文联络紧密，符合逻辑关系．
【点睛】
这篇短文用到了某些好句型：They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.这些给文章增色不少。

4．书面体现
如下图画展现了林涛和梅梅在公园里发生事情。请用英语写一篇约100词短文。
规定：1.完整论述图画内容。
2.简要陈说你从中学到了什么。
【答案】One day Lin Tao and Meimei were playing in the garden. They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die. So they decided to do something for the young tree. First, Meimei kept the tree straight and pushed the earth hard down with her foot. Then Lin Tao knocked a board into the earth. It said,
“Please take care of trees.” After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.
Trees are good for the environment. We should protect them.
【解析】
这是一篇看图作文，规定我们仔细观测图片，弄清晰里面发生事情，用英语将这些内容完整地论述出来，并简单陈说自已从中学到东西。因此写作前，要仔细看图片，理解图片中所发生事情，并提炼出要点，列出所要用到词汇、短语等，或者列出大概写作提纲。通过度析可知，这篇短文讲述是过去发生事情，应用一般过去时态，注意谓语动词形式变化，尤其是不规则动词过去式形式。写作时要注意按照事情发展先后次序，这样可以使文章条理清晰。还需注意是英语体现和汉语习惯不一样，不能逐词去翻译，应从句子整体考虑，使用简单句基本句型，如主谓宾构造或主系表构造。在文章中点缀几种并列句、复合句或复杂句式，调整文章节奏，提高文章档次。语句之间注意使用恰当连接成分，使文意连贯。
点睛：这是一篇优秀作文。首先短文内容完整，符合图片所传达信息，表述精确。作者在短文中论述了林涛和梅梅两人在公园里给小树浇水、并挂牌子告诉人们注意保护树木。整篇文章按照事情发生先后次序论述，条理清晰。文章最终两句话也点明了文章主题。另一方面短文中使用了对时态和人称，文章以一般过去时态为主，谓语动词用了过去式，尤其是注意了不规则动词过去式形式，如found, kept, got, were, spoke等。语法规范、精确。短文中还使用了较丰富句型和短语，如They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die.这句话中使用了并列句和宾语从句；再如So they decided to do something for the young tree这句话中使用了句型decided to do sth.决定做某事；After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.这两句话中用了短语after that, speak highly of等等。

5．书面体现
根据下表用英语写一篇80词左右短文，内容须包括：对下表中有关（City A和City B）所有信息进行比较，分析利弊，确定其中一种都市作为你暑假旅游目地。

City A

City B

Flying

2 hours

4 hours

Temperature

30℃

18℃

Hotel

★★

★★★★

Things to do

★★★★

★★

Food

★★

★★★★

In my opinion, is he better place to spend my summer holiday.
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【答案】例文
In my opinion, City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday. Although the temperature there is higher, the hotel is less comfortable, and even the food is not as delicious as that in City B, I still choose City A. The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in City A . I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities. Besides, it takes us only two hours to fly there, which saves us a lot of time. I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience.
【解析】
【详解】
试题分析：本题给出了两个都市飞行时常、气温、旅馆状况。食物等有关信息，规定考生对每个信息进行比较，选择自已要去暑假旅游目地。虽然字数规定不多，但可以很好地考察考生英语写作基本功，需要考生对常用英语句型纯熟掌握。熟悉英语体现方式。避免汉语式英语。句型不要都用简单句。此外，一定要注意题目规定，把每一种信息都进行比较，不要有遗漏。
写作亮点：本篇作文按照题目规定选择了都市A作为自已暑假旅游目地。对于都市A缺陷，作者用了“Although”尽管一词轻轻带过。对于长处则重点突出，由于在都市A可以做诸多事情，作者在这里用了词组“a lot of ”。在比较时候，作者用了多种方式，使句子不单调，例如在比较温度时，直接用比较级“higher”在说旅馆时用了“less comfortable ”，比较食物时，用了“as…as”等。在说选择都市A原因时，用了that引导宾语从句。本文大部分都是复杂句，显示了作者比较纯熟英语写作水平。

6．中学生在成长过程中常常会碰到某些烦恼。假设你是李华，请根据下表提醒，用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到烦恼以及你自已做法。
你烦恼

你做法

个头不高，相貌平常

不必在意，相信自已

父母不理解，朋友少

学会沟通，友善待人

学习压力大，课外活动少

……（自主发挥，至少两点）

规定：1. 词数100左右，开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 所写内容必须包括表格中所有信息，并作合适发挥。
3. 不得出现真实人名、校名、地名等有关信息。
Hello everyone,
Hello everyone,
I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.

That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】Hello everyone,
I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.
I am not very tall and very common. But I don’t care and I believe in myself.
My parents don’t understand me and I have very few friends. I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to communicate with others very well.
I often feel stressed because of my study and I don’t have many chances to join the after-class activities. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies.
That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】
试题分析：本题是一篇给材料作文，规定用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到烦恼以及你自已做法。规定从个人外貌特点、与人沟通及学习压力等方面进行写作。要包含表格中所有信息，并作合适发挥。短文用第一人称形式，一般目前时态。
写作亮点：短文开头直奔主题：我想要谈谈我烦恼及怎样处理他们；背面三段分别从外貌上烦恼、与父母交流上障碍、学习上压力几方面分别谈论自已烦恼及处理方式，生动详细，条理分明。文中不定式作宾补、作定语、作宾语用得精确恰当；and连接并列句、并列谓语等等都使短文显得简捷生动。
【考点定位】 考察提纲类作文。

7．假如你是李华，请你根据如下提醒用英语写一封保护大象倡议书。
提醒：陆地上最大哺乳动物，可以活到80岁。目前数量在减少，由于：
1）人们砍伐森林，大象渐渐失去家园；
2）人们捕杀大象，获取象牙。
3）应怎样保护它们（不少于三条）。
规定：1）恰当运用比较级和最高级；2）80词左右。倡议书结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参照词汇：哺乳动物mammal; 象牙ivory
Dear classmates
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I believe everyone's contribution （奉献） can make a big difference.
Yours,
Lihua
【答案】Dear classmates,
Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.
As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants.
I believe everyone's contribution （奉献） can make a big difference.
Yours,
Lihua
【解析】
【详解】
本文是一封倡议书,倡议大家保护大象。文章共分为三个方面内容，首先描述大象想在所处现实状况，然后阐明出现这种状况原因，最终为了保护大象我们应当怎样去做。时态重要为一般目前时。提出倡议时可以使用We can/ We should/ Let’s/We’d better表达提议句子。写作时注意不要使用太复杂句型，以免出现语法错误，为使句子具有连贯性，可以合适使用连词。本篇文章内容完整，符合材料规定，Elephants are the largest mammals …,及First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比较级和最高级；Firstly,…. Secondly,…等词使用使文章具有层次性，条理清晰。并且某些连词使用，例如so, or, but等也使文章具有连贯性，是一篇不错文章。

8．书面体现
我校决定让学生轮番打扫厕所，以此作为教育学生一种方式。 这件事在学生中引 起了强烈反响，请你把下列不一样意见整理成一篇书面材料，汇报给学校。
同意 ：1．多数学生是独生子女，不会做事。
2．学生应当学会做艰苦工作。
3．学会理解和尊重清洁工人劳动。
不一样意：1．很脏，容易使学生生病。 2．不是学生应当做事情。 3．打扫教室就足够了。
注意：1．短文应包括表中所有内容，可合适发挥，但不要逐字翻译； 2．不少于80词。 生词提醒：respect尊重
【答案】A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor.
Some students think it is a good way of education. Now most families have only one child. They never do hard work. To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. It can also help them understand and respect the cleaners.
But others have different points. They think it is easy for them to get sick. They don’t think it is students＇jobs. Cleaning the classroom every day is enough.
【解析】
【详解】
阅读题干规定，这是一篇见解类作文，那么首先得点明讨论话题，然后分别写出不一样人群对此事见解，时态以一般目前时为主。
重点词汇及短语：argument争论；take place发生；among（三者或三者以上）之间；a good chance for sb对某人来说是个好机会；help sb do sth协助某人做某事；get sick生病。
亮点句型：
（1）A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor. 自从我们学校让学生做自愿劳动以来，在学生中发生了一场剧烈争论。目前完毕时（have/has+done）。
（2）To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. 做义务劳动是他们学习怎样做困难工作好机会。动词不定式作主语，谓语动词用单数，疑问词+to do。

9．为了吸引外国游客，杭州旅游网但愿对杭州茶文化进行宣传。请你根据表格信息，用英语为其写一篇简介，词数80左右。
What is Longjing Tea famous for?
Good taste
What is it used for?
Keep healthy
How is it produced?
Grow on the sides of mountains ...
What’s the best place to learn about it?
Why?
Hangzhou National Tea Museum ...

Longjing Tea
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