高考英语书面表达常见错误-PPT.pptx

高考英语书面表达常见错误2011-10-18书面表达常见错误2 不少考生在英语书面表达时易受不少考生在英语书面表达时易受汉语习惯影响汉语习惯影响,所写句子虽然语法正所写句子虽然语法正确确,却不符合英语表达习惯却不符合英语表达习惯,造成不少造成不少汉语式英语病句汉语式英语病句、要减少汉式病句要减少汉式病句必须做到必须做到:(1)养成用英语思维进行养成用英语思维进行写作得习惯写作得习惯,注意中西文化差异所带注意中西文化差异所带来得不同表达来得不同表达、(2)平时多归纳总结平时多归纳总结,纠正汉式英语纠正汉式英语、(3)多收听对外广播、多收听对外广播、收看英语节目、广泛阅读英文版书收看英语节目、广泛阅读英文版书籍、报纸及其她材料籍、报纸及其她材料、2011-10-18书面表达常见错误3误:He cost five yuan to buy a dictionary、正:或误:Good good study,day day up、正:It cost him five yuan to buy a dictionary、If you study hard,you will make progress every day、The dictionary cost him five yuan、2011-10-18书面表达常见错误4误:Here is suitable to grow cash crops、正:误:There is a notice in the park saying“To take notice of safe;the sidewalk is very crafty、”正:It is suitable to grow cash crops here、There is a notice in the park saying“Watch your step、Slippery sidewalk、”2011-10-18书面表达常见错误5误:His fever is high、正:误:The student is standing there is my brother、正:或He has a high fever、The student standing there is my brother、The student who is standing there is my brother、2011-10-18书面表达常见错误6误:The price of the puter is expensive、正:误:The population of China is many、正:The price of the puter is high、The population of China is large、2011-10-18书面表达常见错误7误:Recently our village have taken place great changes、正:误:There are twenty students in our class have been to Beijing、正:Recently great changes have taken place in our village、Twenty students in our class have been to Beijing、2011-10-18书面表达常见错误8误:That factory broke out a fire last Sunday、正:误:This building likes a school、正:A fire broke out in that factory last Sunday、This building looks like/is a school、2011-10-18书面表达常见错误9误:He will able to write articles in English next year、正:误:I will by bus to Beijing、正:He will be able to write articles in English next year、Ill go to Beijing by bus tomorrow、2011-10-18书面表达常见错误10误:Professor Li es from Beijing University will give us a lecture tomorrow、正:误:His friends are few、正:Professor Li from Beijing University will give us a lecture tomorrow、He has few friends、2011-10-18书面表达常见错误11误:Wei Fangs father scolded her ing late to school、正:Wei Fangs father scolded her for her ing late to school、12大家应该也有点累了，稍作休息大家有疑问的，可以询问和交流大家有疑问的，可以询问和交流大家有疑问的，可以询问和交流大家有疑问的，可以询问和交流2011-10-18书面表达常见错误13误:To attend this meeting is important、正:误:His teaching methods are many、正:It is important to attend this meeting、He has many teaching methods、2011-10-18书面表达常见错误14错误类型二错误类型二:句子结构不完整句子结构不完整或结构错误或结构错误2011-10-18书面表达常见错误15 一个句子至少包括主语和一个句子至少包括主语和谓语两部分谓语两部分(祈使句除外祈使句除外)。如。如果把句子得某一个部分当成一果把句子得某一个部分当成一个句子个句子,就会导致非完整句子。就会导致非完整句子。两个各含有主语和谓语得分句两个各含有主语和谓语得分句不能写在一起不能写在一起,也不能只用逗也不能只用逗号隔开。号隔开。2011-10-18书面表达常见错误16误:There were foreigners came to our school、正:误:Without a friend will feel lonely、正:There were foreigners who came to our school、Without a friend one will feel lonely、2011-10-18书面表达常见错误17误:The girls cleaned the desks and chairs,the boys mopped the floor、正:正:The girls cleaned the desks and chairs;the boys mopped the floor、The girls cleaned the desks and chairs,and the boys mopped the floor、2011-10-18书面表达常见错误18误:The book was interesting,I read it rapidly、正:正:The book was interesting;I read it rapidly、The book was interesting,and I read it rapidly、2011-10-18书面表达常见错误19误:The woman talked to you just now is our English teacher、正:误:I cant imagine what life would be like if have not any TV sets、正:The woman who talked to you just now is our English teacher、I cant imagine what life would be like if we have not any TV sets、2011-10-18书面表达常见错误20误:China is no longer what used to be、正:误:Although rained,we went on working、正:China is no longer what it used to be、Although it rained,we went onworking、2011-10-18书面表达常见错误21误:They finished the homework,they went out、正:误:I am tired,I must go to bed、正:Since/As they finished the homework,they went out、I am tired,so I must go to bed、2011-10-18书面表达常见错误22误:The sun gives off heat and light,this makes it possible for the plants on the earth to grow、正:The sun gives off heat and light,which makes it possible for the plants on the earth to grow、2011-10-18书面表达常见错误23误:You practise more reading,you will improve your reading ability、正:If you practise more reading,you will improve your readingability、2011-10-18书面表达常见错误24误:I arrived at the station,the train had left、正:When I arrived at the station,the train had left、2011-10-18书面表达常见错误25误:China is still a developing country,most people cant afford a car、正:Because China is still a developing country,most people cant afford a car、2011-10-18书面表达常见错误26错误类型三错误类型三:重复累赘重复累赘2011-10-18书面表达常见错误27 有些英语单词本身自带有些英语单词本身自带某个意思某个意思,或由于语法需要或由于语法需要不能再出现某个单词不能再出现某个单词,而学而学生基本功夫不够扎实生基本功夫不够扎实,常常常常出现累赘现象。出现累赘现象。2011-10-18书面表达常见错误28误:The box is too heavy for the weak boy to carry it、正:误:We hope to improve our work better、正:The box is too heavy for the weak boy to carry、We hope to improve our work、2011-10-18书面表达常见错误29误:We are very like his lesson、正:误:Yours class was interesting、正:We like his lesson very much、Your class was interesting、2011-10-18书面表达常见错误30误:In spite of the fact he is lazy,I like him、正:误:Personally I think he is a good student、正:In spite of his laziness,I like him、I think he is a good student、2011-10-18书面表达常见错误31误:I seldom go to the Shanghai Library due to the reason it is far away from my home、正:I seldom go to the Shanghai Librarybecause it is far away from my home、2011-10-18书面表达常见错误32误:Mary married with John、正:误:I returned back the book to you yesterday、正:Mary married John、I returned the book to you yesterday、2011-10-18书面表达常见错误33误:The teacher repeated the sentence again、正:误:My most favorite song is“Hand in Hand”、正:The teacher repeated the sentence、My favorite song is“Hand in Hand”、2011-10-18书面表达常见错误34误:The train is entering into the tunnel、正:The train is entering the tunnel、2011-10-18书面表达常见错误35错误类型四错误类型四:句子缺乏逻辑性句子缺乏逻辑性或连贯性或连贯性2011-10-18书面表达常见错误36 一个句子必须表达一个完整、一个句子必须表达一个完整、前后语意一致得意思。如果把不相前后语意一致得意思。如果把不相干得意思放子一个句字里或一个句干得意思放子一个句字里或一个句子表达不完整子表达不完整,就会出现逻辑问题。就会出现逻辑问题。句子无论长短句子无论长短,在安排上要合乎逻辑在安排上要合乎逻辑,衔接自然衔接自然,使句内语意关系明确。而使句内语意关系明确。而学生在习作过程中常出现悬垂修饰学生在习作过程中常出现悬垂修饰语、指代不明、缺少过渡词语、非语、指代不明、缺少过渡词语、非平行结构和语意不完整得分割句等平行结构和语意不完整得分割句等错误。错误。2011-10-18书面表达常见错误37误:Being an honest man,Tom worked very hard、正:误:Liu Hua is a kind-hearted girl、She will be successful in anything she tries、正:Being an honest man,Tom never tells a lie、AS she has a strong will and confidence in herself,Liu Hua may be successful in anything she tries、2011-10-18书面表达常见错误38误:Rose is in love with John,John is in love with Mary、正:Rose is in love with John,but John is in love with Mary、2011-10-18书面表达常见错误39错误类型五错误类型五:语法、词法错误语法、词法错误2011-10-18书面表达常见错误40 许多考生写作中易犯关许多考生写作中易犯关系不一致、词性混用、选系不一致、词性混用、选词或搭配不当词或搭配不当,时态语态错时态语态错误、指代不清、语序不当误、指代不清、语序不当等方面得错误。等方面得错误。2011-10-18书面表达常见错误41误:In the bedroom there are a bed,a sofa,a desk and a chair、正:误:He closed the door and hurries away to class、正:In the bedroom there is a bed,a sofa,a desk and a chair、He closed the door and hurried away to class、2011-10-18书面表达常见错误42误:60%of the students against the idea of entrance fees、正:误:2 days past before his letter arrived、正:60%of the students are against the idea of entrance fees、2 days passed before his letter arrived、