2年高考英语作文写作指导：邀请信(共38张PPT).ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,作文拦路虎：,1.,单词、语法学了很多但是不会用,2.,缺乏系统化的作文训练：读得多，写得少,3.,不了解阅卷老师的情况,高考英语作文评分标准,一、评分原则,1,本题总分为,25,分，按,5,个档次给分。,2,评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。,3,词数少于,80,和多于,120,的，从总分中减去,2,分。,4,评分时应注意的主要内容为：,内容要点,、应用词汇和语法结构的,丰富性,和,准确性,及,上下文的连贯性,。,5,拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。,6,如书写较差以至影响交际，将其分数降低一个档次,。,二,、,各档次的给分范围和要求,第五档（,21,25,分）,完全完成了试题规定的任务。,覆盖所有内容要点,。,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。,语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致。,有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。,完全达到了预期的写作目的。,二,、,各档次的给分范围和要求,第四档（,16,20,分）,完成了试题规定的任务。,虽漏掉一两个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。,应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。,语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。,应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。,达到了预期的写作目的。,二,、,各档次的给分范围和要求,第三档（,11,15,分）,基本完成了试题规定的任务。,虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。,应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。,有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。,应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。,整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。,二,、,各档次的给分范围和要求,第二档（,6,10,分）,未恰当完成试题规定的任务。,漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。,语法结构单调，词汇知识有限。,有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。,较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。,信息未能清楚地传达给读者。,二,、,各档次的给分范围和要求,第一档（,1,5,分）,未完成试题规定的任务。,明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。,语法结构单调，词汇知识有限。,较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。,缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。,信息未能传达给读者。,0,分,未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；所写内容均与所要求内容,无关,或所写内容无法看清。,（,2015,全国卷,2,）,假定你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人过重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)。请给外教露西写封邮件，邀请她一同前往，内容包括：,1.出发及返回时间；,2.活动：包饺子、表演节目等。,注意：,1.,词数100左右；,2,.,可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；,3,.,结语已为你写好。,Dear Lucy,How to write a letter of invitation,Will it get high scores?,Will it get high scores?,What makes a good invitation?,Precise structure,Elegant expression,P,roper linking words,Good and clear handwriting,Para.1,(beginning),Para.3,(ending),Para.2,(body),structure of an invitation,intention,what,when,where,expectation,gratitude,How to,express,your intention?,Part,1,Conclusion,I m _,chairman of our Students Union.Im writing to invite you to.,Womens day,is approaching.I wonder if you could come to.,I think it would be a great idea if you could participate in.,Im writing to invite you to.,On behalf of the_,I would be very pleased to invite you to attend.,Part,3,How to,express,your,expectation&gratitude,?,Conclusion,I will be grateful if you are willing to come.Looking forward to your reply.,W,e,do,hope that you can come and look forward to seeing you.,I would,appreciate it,if you could accept my invitation.,Im looking forward to your early reply.,Details-time/place,Which description is clear and precise?,Part,2,We will meet,tomorrow morning at school.,We will meet,at 8:00 a,.,m.tomorrow morning at the school gate,.,Translat,ion,英语夏,令营时间：2016年7,月底,为期四天,地点：海南,The English Summer Camp,which,lasts four days,will be held in Hainan,at the end of July,2016.,会议将于周二下午2点在会议中心召开。,The meeting will start,at 2 p,.,m.on Tuesday at the Conference Center.,Details-activities,Well have lots of activities.First,_.After that,_.Later,_.At last,_.,Part,2,Weve arranged various activities.First,_.In addition,_.By the way,_.,To make your composition smooth,you need to use some proper linking words!,Details-linking words,firstly,secondly.besides,then,for one thing;for another thing,in addition,by the way,whats more.,now,later,after that,meanwhile,in the meantime.,列举顺序,时间过渡,Part,2,Details-,highlights,Avoid grammar and spelling mistakes.,Dont forget to use some advanced sentence patterns!,Part,2,（2010课标卷,1,）你校将举办一次演讲比赛，希望附近某大学的外籍英语教师Smith来做评委。,主题：人与自然,时间：6月15日下午2:00-5:00,地点：501教室,参加选手10人,联系人：李华（484876655）；欢迎大家光临,Practice,Show Time,Presentation&Assessment,excellent/good/need improvement/fail,excellent/good/need improvement/fail,excellent/good/need improvement/fail,Procedures to write a letter of invitation,structure,content,language,intention,activity,expectation,what,when,where,precise expressions,advanced sentence structures,proper linking words,Dear Ms.Smith,I am Lihua,the leader of the Students Union of Yucai Middle School.I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for our English Speech Contest and be a judge.,The contest,the theme of which is“Man and Nature”,will be held in the Room 501 from 2,：,00 to 5,：,00 on the afternoon of June 15.Whats more,there will be ten students taking part in it.I am sure that it will be a,great success if you can give us some precious remarks.,I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.My telephone number is 44876655.I am looking forward to your reply.,With best wishes,Li Hua,Thank you!,