合并句子(广州和四川)市公开课特等奖市赛课微课一等奖课件.pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,二、超级仿写,江门二模你英国朋友向你了解广州,请用英语写一篇短文介绍广州。包含上表中全部内容。,概况,中国第三大城市;别称:五羊城、花城等;广东省省会;全市面积7,434平方公里;人口1,000多万。,历史,2,200多年历史文化名城,历史上丝绸之路（海路）始发港。,地理,珠江从市中心穿过,温暖湿润。,旅游,风光旖旎,旅游资源丰富。,第1页,Let me tell you something about Guangzhou.Guangzhou,the capital city of Guangdong Province,and,the third largest,city in China,is also known as Five-lamb City,Flower City and so on.,This city,/It,covers a total area of,7,434 square kilometers,with a population of,more than ten million.,第2页,Guangzhou,a famous city,with a history of,more than 2,200 years,is a starting port of the Silk Road on the sea in history.,With,the Pearl River,winding its way/running,through the city,Guangzhou enjoys a warm and wet climate.The beautiful city,which is,well-known for,its beautiful scenery,is also rich in,traveling resources.,I hope you will have a good time in Guangzhou.,第3页,Covering an area of 485,000 square kilometers,Sichuan Province,is located in the south-west of China,whose capital is Chengdu.,定语应尽可能靠近所修饰词,定语从句,尽可能靠近先行词,Covering an area of 485,000 square kilometers,Sichuan Province,whose capital is Chengdu,is located in the south-west of China.,第4页,Sichuan Province,located in the south-west of China,covers an area of about 485,000 square kilometers,whose capital is Chengdu.,定语应尽可能靠近所修饰词,定语从句,尽可能靠近先行词,Located in the south-west of China,Sichun Province,whose capital is chengdu,covers an area of,第5页,Jiuzaigou which is famous for its lakes is located in the north-west of Sichun,with beautiful rivers.,专有名词（独一无二）如人名、地名后应该使用非限制性定语从句,Jiuzaigou，which is famous for its lakes with beautiful rivers，is located,Jiuzaigou,，,which is located,is famous for its lakes with beautiful rivers.,第6页,The Dujiangyan Irrigation Project has played a important role now,with a long history of more than 2,000 years.,The Dujiangyan Irrigation Project,with a long history of more than 2,000 years,is still playing an,important role now.,第7页,Sichun is neither too cold nor too hot.,逻辑关系,The weather in,Sichun is neither too cold nor too hot.,第8页,Sichuan Province,whose capital,city is Chengdu,lies in,the south-west of China and,covers an area of,about 485,000 km,2,with a population of,more than one hundred million.It,is rich in,tourist attractions and enjoys many world-famous places of interest,such as,Jiuzhaigou and the Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.,第9页,Jiuzhaigou,is well known for,its beautiful lakes,whose water,is so clear that you can see the bottom of them.,Another,attraction is the Jujiangyan Irrigation Project,which was built over 2,000 years ago and,is still playing an important part,(in irrigation)today.,Whats more,the nice/comfortable weather,convenient transportation and the variety of famous hot food can also make your trip even more enjoyable.,第10页,李明一直很想,实现,自己,理想,成为一名探险家。,2.他父母一直试图,说服他放弃,这个想法。,3.一天，李明离家出走,并留下一封信,为,自己,不辞而别向,父母,道歉,。,4.李明决定,启航,去无名岛屿,寻找,刺激感。,5.在海上遇上了龙卷风(tornado),李明意识到自己,陷入了困境,。,第11页,6.这是李明,第一次,独自出行,他差点被吓死了。,7.在好心人帮助下,他,幸免于难,。,8.住院两个星期后,李明,康复了,。,9.他,设法,联络到父母,让他们到医院去,接,他。,第12页,Liming wanted to,achieve his ambition of,being,an explorer.,But his parents,tried to persuade him to give,up the idea all the time.,One day,Li Ming left home and left a letter,in order to,make an apology to his parents for,leaving without saying goodbye.,Li Ming,decided to set sail to,the unknown island,in search of,excitement.,第13页,5.On the way to the island,Li Ming met the tornado,which made Li Ming be aware of,getting into trouble,.,6.,It was the first time that,Li Ming,had gone,out alone and he seemed to scared to death.,7.,With the help of,the kind people,he,survived,.,be aware of+n,be aware/realize that+句子,第14页,8.After living in the hospital for two weeks,he,recovered,.,9.He,managed to,get in touch with,parents,made them pick him up from the hospital.,staying,asking them to pick,第15页,优异句子,But,unluckily,he met a tornado on the sea and he realised that he,was stuck in trouble,which,sacred him to death.(9班，刘佩雄),One day,he set sail,in search of,an island without name to experience excitement,after leaving,a letter to apologise for leaving without saying good-bye.(9班，石玉良),第16页,没有语法错误但不提议使用句子,1.Li Ming went away from home with a letter left for the purpose of apologysing without saying good-bye to his parents.,1.从简标准,leaving a letter,2.目标,for,the purpose of+n(,名,词),to,+do(,动,词),to apologise,第17页,没有语法错误但不提议使用句子,2.Li Ming decided to set sail to the unknown island,just for finding the felling of excitement.,1)表目标 for+n(名词),to+do(动词),2)find 找,到,look for/search for 寻找/寻求,to look for,第18页,没有语法错误但不提议使用句子,3.One day,Li Ming left home and left a letter with the purpose of making an apology to his parents for leaving without saying good-bye.,目标 for the purpose of+n(名词),to+do(动词),to make,第19页,没有考虑逻辑关系进行错误合并,1.It was the first time that he had got out alone,so,he realized that he got into trouble and was scared to death while meeting a tornado in the sea.,因为他是第一次独自出门，所以他意识到,While,meeting a tornado,he realized that he got into trouble.And,since,it was the.,he was scared to death.,第20页,没有考虑逻辑关系进行错误合并,2.Li Ming wanted to realize his dream that he would become an explorer,so that,his parents always tried to persuade him into giving up this thought.,李明想实现当探险家梦想，以致于他父母总是想劝他放弃。,but,第21页,为了降低句子数量而拼命堆砌信息错误合并,3.When the first time for him to travel on his own,he was scared to death as he was facing the tornado in the sea,which help him come to realize that he was stuck in trouble.,Since/Because,it was the first time that he had traveled on,he was scared to death,.,When,he was faced with,he realized that he was,第22页,1.李明一直很想,实现,自己,理想,成为一名探险家。,Li Ming always wanted to,achieve his ambition,to be an explorer.,2.他父母一直试图,说服他放弃,这个想法。,His parents have been always trying to,persuade him to give up,this idea.,第23页,3.一天，李明离家出走,并留下一封信,为,自己,不辞而别向,父母,道歉,。,One day,Li Ming ran away from home and left his parents a letter to,apologize for leaving,without saying goodbye,.,第24页,4.李明决定,启航,去无名岛屿,寻找,刺激感。,Li Ming decided to,set sail,for unknown islands,in search of,excitement.,5.在海上遇上了龙卷风(tornado),李明意识到自己,陷入了困境,。,Li Ming ran into a tornado on the sea,and realized he,got into trouble,.,第25页,6.这是李明,第一次,独自出行,他差点被吓死了。,This was,Li Mings,first time that,he,had traveled,on his own,and he was scared to death.,7.在好心人帮助下,他,幸免于难,。,With the help of kind-hearted people,he,survived the accident,.,第26页,8.住院两个星期后,李明,康复了,。,8.After staying in hospital for two weeks,Li Ming,recovered,.,9.他,设法,联络到父母,让他们到医院去,接,他。,9.He,managed to,get in touch with his parents and asked them to,pick him up,at the hospital.,第27页,Li Ming always wanted to,achieve his ambition,to be an explorer,though,his parents have been always trying to,persuade him to give up,this idea.One day,he ran away from home,leaving,his parents a letter to,apologize for leaving,without saying goodbye,and,decided to,set sail,for unknown islands,in search of,excitement.,合并：,第28页,Running,into a tornado on the sea,Li Ming realized he,got,into trouble,and,since,this is,Li Mings,first time that,he,has traveled,on his own,hes scared,to death.,Luckily,with the help of kind-hearted people,he,survived the accident,and,recovered,after staying in hospital for two weeks.Eventually,he,managed to,get in touch with his parents,asking,them to,pick him up,at the hospital.,第29页,