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,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,词 句子和亮点句式,Part I,好词增光添彩,-,准确性和适用性,1/48,Part I,词,一,.,增强语气词,1 most,和,more than,E g.,年,6,月,Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?,I am most happy to attend such a test of oral English ability.,翻译练习:,当我们谈到,大学生是否勤奋,我们惊奇地发觉现在情况是那么复杂。,When we talk about,whether college students are diligent or not,we will be most surprising to find the present situation is so complicated.,when it comes to,the diligence ,2/48,more than,也能够放在形容词前面,到达非常强烈效果。,Eg.98,年,1,月,My view on Fake commodities,After careful consideration,I am more than angry/exasperated,(往往用在总结段),在问题处理类中,强调处理方法有效。比如:,翻译:在这种条件下,对这个问题方法看上去已经非常清楚明确了。,in this situation/case,under these circumstances,On this occasion,the solutions to this problem seem more than clear.,3/48,2,undoubtedly,unquestionably,undeniably,和,beyond doubt,out of question,Eg.My View on college Students,Taking Part time Jobs,第一段第二句叙述了对立两个观点:,Some people argue that it is,unquestionably,beneficial to the students in that it can enlarge their horizon and enrich their experience,while others firmly hold that part-time Jobs of all kinds are harmful so as to hinder the students,normal college study,4/48,beyond doubt,和,out of question,不能放在句子开头。,如,How to Get a Job after Graduation,一文末句为:,As long as I am sure of making sufficient preparations and distinguishing myself during interviews,,,it is out of question for me to get the ideal job which I have been dreaming,5/48,3,all,any,no,never,和,every,加强语气效果。,every,能够用在,person,前面,也可用在,make every effort,或,seize every chance,问题处理,(翻译),政府应该尽全力处理,(,污染,/,腐败,),问题。,Government should make every effort to solve the problem of,(,pollution/corruption,),虚拟语气?,6/48,2,generally,我们使用,generally,也能显得自己说法不那么绝对,如:,In my mind,,,however,,,I do not agree with it to some extent,generally for three reasons,惯用于句首 普通来说,,generally speaking,7/48,Part II,句子,句子:完整思想最小单位;最大语法结构,=,句型,8/48,1.,由,while,引导状语从句,作用:它能凸显两种观点对比,又使句子显得非常精练。,使用方法,:,while,普通用在逗号后,Some people think that,while others argue that,比如:教材,P18,My View On,Opportunity,第一段改写,Different people have different views on opportunity.Some people,think,that there are few opportunities in the world,,,while others,argue,that everybody will have some kind,of opportunity along his life route.,Think,believe,argue,claim,hold+,观点,9/48,while,前面就没有逗号了,比如:,年,6,月,Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed?,(,译,),当做好事时候,有人期望得到回报而有些人无所图。,When doing a good deed,some of people will expect a reward while others,desire,nothing.(long for),10/48,2,Those who,句型,those,是一个指示代词,指代上文出现人们,而,who,引导是定语从句,普通引出持何种观点,句子后面就能够说他们怎样怎样这个句型非常精练。,如教材,P18 Text,(,c,)中第一段,造句练习:,Those who are,in favor of,the Internet,claim that,it has a lot of advantages,下一段起始句为:,Those who,are opposed to,the Internet hold that disadvantages are many,优点和缺点,(merits and shortcomings/strengths and weaknesses/strong points and weak points/benefits and downsides),11/48,3.,倒装句,使用方法:部分倒装,问题处理类中,在文章末段。这么句子力度非常强,强调要处理问题就必须怎样做。,后面介词词组,如:,Only in this way,can we solve the problem.,年,1,月,how to succeed in a job interview?,最终一句话:,Only in this way can we succeed in a job interview.,全文扣题,句子简练,语气强。,12/48,Only,后面有时接条件状语从句,比如 教材:,P18 Text 6 My View 0n Opportunity,最终一句话能够改写为:,Only if we get prepared can we seize the opportunities instead of letting them slip by,just as the saying goes,“,Opportunities are only for the prepared minds,”,时间状语,比如,Reduce Waste on Campus,Only when all of us join in the efforts of,消除,eliminating,(give up/dispose of/get rid of/exclude/discard),waste at all levels,can,we expect to have,a cleaner society and a more beautiful future.,(教材,P 56,倒装句中,only,),13/48,4,条件状语从句,看似平凡,却恰好符适当度思想,即不宣称自己观点在任何情况下都是正确,而是在何种情况下或是满足了何种条件才会正确。,翻译:假如他知道生活目标而且知道依据目标怎样去做决定,他就会作出正确 选择。,He will make the right choice if he knows his goal in life and how to make decisions according to the goal.(,决议主要性,),14/48,5,强调句,强调句语气强烈能给阅卷老师留下深刻印象。,How I Finance My College Education,一文中第二段第一、二句:,First of all,,,the main financial support come from parents and other family members.For all the years,,,it is they who give the student courage and determination to hold on and excel,(,出色,),eg:excel sb in knowledge/excel others in strengths),15/48,(练习:教材,P 57,强调句),It is(,成份,)that,It is(sb)who,.,1.It is,Jefferson,who wrote the,2.It is,with genuine feeling,that the author praise all that is progressive.,3.It was,because the water has risen,that we could not cross the river.,4.It was,Jim,a heartless fellow,who was heard shouting at his mother in the dead of night.,5.It was,not until I told her,that Mrs.Williams knew anything about it.,16/48,6,结果状语从句,由,so,that,或,so that;such,that,以译为,“,如此,以至于,”,。问题类 作文中,Is a Failure a Bad Thing?,第一段首句:,Failure is,such a common matter that every one of us may meet it from time to time,99,年,Reading Selectively or Extensively?,用,reading,替换,failure,Losing one,s love,17/48,7.,让步状语从句,第一个让步状语从句是由,although,或,though,引发,可译为,“,即使,”,。注意不要和,but,连用。,Although it may bring unfavorable consequences,we can be sure to conclude that this practice is favorable on the whole.,Although(it is true that),,,it doesn,t mean(that),是一个非常好句型,能批驳对方观点中推导错误。另外这个句型最大亮点在于以退为进,语气非常恰当。它告诉我们任何观点都不是绝正确,我们所驳斥观点也不是一无是处。,18/48,although,可由,while,替换,动词,“,it doesn,t follow,替换,是,“,推导出,结果,”,意思。,While it is true that,it doesn,t follow that.,译:即使你能够用钱做很多事情,不过不意味着 你能够用钱买到象爱,友情,健康和幸福这么东西。,First,while it is true that you can do a lot of things with money,it doesn,t follow that you can buy such things as love,friendship,health and happiness with,money,.,19/48,8,There is no such thing as,意即,“,没有,这么事情,”,。,My View on Fate,一文第三段首句:,(译)当考虑全部原因后,我们会自然地得出结论 在我生活里没有,宿命,这么事情。(,destined fate,),Taking all these factors into consideration,we may safely come to the conclusion that there is no such thing as destined fate in my life.,20/48,9,There be,句型应用广泛,(文章开头 引言句),教材,P 15 Text 2,There be+people+who,定语从句,固定句型:,P 17,和,P 21,There is no denying the fact that+,普遍现象,P 18 text C,There has been much controversy over+,热点话题,P 18 text 6,There is no consensus of opinion in society about +,有争议观点,21/48,10.,平行结构,平行结构能够出现在词、词组与句子等各个层面上。,1.Audrey Hepburn is graceful and elegant.,2.a government of the people,by the people and for the people.,民有,民治,民享,3.I came,I saw,I conquered.,Features,简单,气势强,排比,节奏感,22/48,平行结构高级技巧是平行中富有改变。如图表类,Film is Giving Way to TV,第二段句子,比较级形式一个加,er,,一个加,more,,平行之中又有改变:,Compared with a film,,,TV is much cheaper and more convenient-you don,t have to leave your house at all.,23/48,Part III,短句拉长,短句拉长,在六级英语作文中,任何短句都能够拉长为长句。,即使,考试纲领,没有明确要求作文中长句长度和数量,不过基于作文实战需要,,“,长句设置,”,意识,向阅卷者展示考生对于复杂语言掌握能力,从而征服阅卷者心,取得满意分数。,24/48,1.,常规方法,短句拉长写作要领:,名词:,+,形容词,,+,同位语,,+,定语从句,动词:,+,状语(时间、地点、目标、方式),25/48,例,1,、,Factories have discharged gas and liquid.,(,6,个单词),Without a view to preserve the marine resources,the,newly-built chemical,factories have discharged,harmful and even poisonous,gas and liquid,which had a seriously negative impact on the surrounding environment,.,(拉长后,31,个单词),26/48,例句实战:,例,2,、,Officials have built highways.(4,个单词,),Hints:,近年来,负责,努力工作,热心,大量,给当地居民带来方便高速路,In recent years,the,responsible,hard-working and warm-hearted,officials have built a,great number of,highways,which have brought much convenience to the local citizens,.(,拉长后,25,单词,),27/48,2.,插入语,增加句式复杂性另外一个方法就是使用插入语。中国学生写,“,竹竿句,”,;,而英美人士写句子语气间歇和停顿。有了插入语,,“,海浪句,”,。,28/48,例:,Ancient men made tools of stone.For instance,they always used flint because it is easier to shape than other kinds.,(不使用插入语),Fortunately,however,ancient men made tools of stone,especially flint,because it is easier to shape than other kinds.,(使用插入语),同学要在语言上下功夫,就必须学会写作,“,海浪句,”,,从而使得自己作文,“,波涛汹涌,错落有致,”,29/48,插入语写作要领:,1,)插入语能够是一个词,一个短语,或者一个句子。,2,)插入语最好放在主语之后,便于掌握。,3,)插入语两边分别用逗号,跟其它成份隔开。,30/48,例,1,:副词插入,frankly,especially,fortunately,indeed,however,翻译:,“,坦率地说,旅游能够促进国家之间相互了解。,”,Tourism,frankly,may promote the mutual understanding among nations.,31/48,例,2,:短语插入语,generally speaking,to tell the truth,in a sense,,,in a word,strange to say,翻译,“,总而言之,家长不该无视电脑游戏对小孩副作用。,”,Parents,in a word,should never lose sight of the side-effects of computer games on their children.,32/48,例,3,:短句插入语,I suppose,as I see it,I believe,what is important(,主要是,).,翻译,“,主要是,环境对人性格有深远影响。,”,Environment,what is important,has a far-reaching influence on one,s personality.,33/48,3.,非谓语动词、(,主动:,ing;,被动:,ed,),(The flat)is located on Zhongyang Street.,The flat is 25 square meters,(The flat)includes a bedroom and a kitchen,主语相同,:同一个事物两个特征,去主语,用非谓语 :观察主语和动词之间是否有,be,。有,be,,去掉;没有,,be+ing,Located on Zhongyang Street,the flat is 25 square meters including a bedroom and a kitchen.,34/48,修饰就近标准:,The flat is located on Zhongyang Street,Which is 25 square meters.,The flat,which is 25 square meters,is located on Zhongyang Street.,35/48,短句:内部结构简练,简练是写作一个主要标准,用词累赘,华而不实是大忌。,36/48,1 His father,who is a salesman,became a millionaire overnight.,a salesman,2.Perhaps they basically distrusted our capacity to judge correctly,They distrusted our judgment,.,He didn,t have enough experience,which is the reason why he didn,t do the work well.,He didn,t do the work well for the lack of experience,.,37/48,一个标准:有话则长,无话则短。,38/48,39/48,讨论类,观点论证,1,对比选择,2,非讨论类,现象解释,含图表,问题处理,原因+方法,六级作文题型分类,40/48,图表类作文,经过图表或图画入手,反应出现象,并对该现象进行解释说明。,Structure:,描写现象,+,分析现象原因,+,提议或观点,1.,最尤其:第一段写法,put the figures from the chart to words,2.,图表:,chart:,图,bar chart/pie chart,graph:,函数关系图(,x.y,),table:,表格,41/48,要求写,4S,S1,:图中有数据,就有改变,全部改变都要写在第一句中。,M1,:,Based on the above graph,it can be observed that some changes have taken place,:_ S1 _,M2:,From the statistics given in the above graph,it can observed that,_ S1 _,42/48,改变替换词,Change:grow/increase/rise,fall/drop/decline,幅度副词:,sharply/rapidly /dramatically,/gradually,波浪型:,rise and fall/fluctuate,43/48,How to write S1,.The number/amount of N is falling/rising.(,简,),.,There has been a rapid/sharp/gradual/growth in the number of/amount of+N,.,N has been on a rapid growth,44/48,S2,S3,S4,写法,cite figures from the graph,one figure for each S,i.e.,一条上升曲线,取,3,个点?,这,3,个点 就是 主题句,support.,句子中数量方法惯用词有:,was /was equal to/reached/amounted to,过去式,短语力量 词,45/48,不要在句子中表示倍数关系,轻易犯错。,exception:,i.e.The number has increased about three times,compared with that of _in 1997._,轻易犯错误:,整段都在引用数字,没有,summary.,假如把主题句放在最终,,warm-up slow,。,46/48,练习,47/48,S1:,From the statics given in the graph,it can be observed that,there has been a sharp growth in the number of,people traveling abroad in X city in the past decade.,S2:As early as in 1995,the number of people traveling abroad was only about 10,000.,S3:Then,only five years later,it increased up to nearly 40,000.,S4:And by,the number had reached over 120,000 which had increased ten times,compared with that of 1995.,48/48,
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