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单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,Page,*,新托福写作03&04&05,基础段,1/144,6 父母对孩子高标准严要求是因为他们爱自己孩子.,Parents have high standards for their children because they love their children.,7 地铁作为一个改进公共交通方式，我提议它天天24小时运行。,As a way to improve public transportation,I suggest running the subway 24 hours a day.,8 有些人说，青少年犯罪对青少年心理成长不是必须。,Some people say teenage delinquency is not necessary for the mental development of adolescents.,9 我想与我全部同学建立融洽关系。,I want to have a close relationship with all of my classmates.,10 在韩国文化中，人们通常不为活着人修建纪念碑。,In Korean culture,people usually do not build a monument to a living person.,2/144,11 有依赖性孩子通常在情感上过于依赖他们父母。,Dependent children are often too emotionally attached to their parents.,12 我们有责任将我们好价值观传递给我们孩子。,It is our duty to pass on our good values to our children.,13 信仰某种宗教，你必须打心底里恪守该宗教教义。,In order to practise a particular religion,you have to obey the rules of that religion from the bottom of your heart.,14 除非你向学生展示出领导才能，不然你无法成为一名好老师。,You cannot be a good teacher until you show leadership skills to you students.,15 我认为人们在一个地方扎根之前不得不住在不一样地方。,In my view,people have to live in different places before putting down their roots in one place.,3/144,16 人们倾向于对同一群体组员友好。,People tend to be hospitable to a member of their group.,17 假如你住在郊区，你就会有很多了解你邻居机会。,If you live in a surburban area,you will have a lot of chances to know your neighbors.,18 儿童通常从幼稚园开始培养他们社会技能。,Children usually build their social skills for the first time in kindergarten.,19 在试图从家人那里取得帮助前，你应该试着在没有他们帮助下自己做。,Before trying to gain the support of your family,you should try to do without their help.,20 假如造访一下朋友邻居，你可能会更加好地了解你朋友。,If you visit a friends neighborhood,you may understand your friend better.,4/144,3、词汇使用丰富性,1）托福写作十四大功效语汇,2）托福写作六大主题词汇,5/144,托福写作十四大功效语汇,1、表示“观点”,2、表示“重视”,give weight to/give stress to/attach importance to,3、表示“强调”,place weight on/put emphasis on,6/144,托福写作十四大功效语汇,4、表示“赞同”,approve of/vote for/stand by,5、表示“反对”,disapprove of,object to,be opposed to,7/144,造句,1、观点,我认为，在生活中，健康像空气和水一,样主要。,2、重视,地方政府要重视特殊儿童教育问题。,（特殊儿童：exceptional children）,4、反对,有些人认为，在当今社会，金钱就是一,切。我强烈反对这种观点。,8/144,造句,1、观点,我认为，在生活中，健康像空气和水一,样主要。,In my point of view,health is as,important as air and water in my life.,9/144,As短语总结：,as busy as a bee,as blue as sky,as black as coffee,as evil as a devil,as pure as an angel,as deep as ocean,as strong as a horse,10/144,造句,2、重视,地方政府要重视特殊儿童教育问题。,The local government should,give,weight to,the issue of exceptional,childrens education.,11/144,造句,4、反对,有些人认为，在当今社会，金钱就是一,切。我强烈反对这种观点。,Someone assumes that money,means everything in the modern,society.I,am,strongly,opposed to,the,view.,12/144,6、表示“努力”,make every effort to,many efforts should be made to,spare no effort to,7、表示“提议”,suggest/advance/put forward/,13/144,8、表示“原因”,due to/owing to/,9、表示“决心”,be determined to,make up ones mind to,be convinced to,14/144,10、表示“结论”,Sb.may come to a conclusion that,Sb.may arrive at a conclusion,that,Sb.may reach a conclusion that,15/144,造句,6、努力,各行各业人们都要努力抵制假货泛,滥。,Tips:,各行各业人们,people from all walks of life,抵制：resist;,假货：fake commodities,泛滥：rampancy,16/144,造句,9、决心,我决心资助两名失学儿童。,10、结论,所以，我们能够得出结论：自信在工作,面试中很必要。,17/144,造句,6、努力,各行各业人们都要努力抵制假货泛,滥。,People from all walks of life should,make every effort,to resist rampancy,of fake commodities.,18/144,造句,9、决心,我决心资助两名失学儿童。,I,make up my mind,to finance two,drop-out students.,19/144,造句,10、结论,所以，我们能够得出结论：自信在工作,面试中很必要。,Therefore,we may,come to a,conclusion,that confidence is,essential in a job interview.,20/144,11、表示“坚持”：,adhere to,insist on 坚持主张,persist in 坚持,12、表示“打算”,mean to do,intend to do,attempt to do,21/144,13、表示“认识到”,be aware of,be conscious of,realize,14、表示“不一样”,Differ from in,be different from,vary in,22/144,造句,11、坚持,假如我们相信某件事情是值得做，就应该,坚持去做。,12、打算,我打算在暑假做一份兼职。,13、认识到,现在，越来越多人意识到用科学态,度对待生活和工作主要性。,23/144,11、坚持,假如我们相信某件事情是值得做，就,应该坚持去做。,If we believe that something is,worthwhile,we should,persist in,pursuing it.,24/144,12、打算,我打算在暑假做一份兼职。,I,intend to,take a part-time job,during the summer vacation.,25/144,13、意识到,现在，越来越多人意识到用科学态,度对待生活和工作主要性。,Currently,people in increasing,numbers,have,been aware of,the,importance of scientific attitudes,towards life and work.,26/144,2、托福写作六大主题词汇,1）教育,2）科技,3）社会问题,4）环境,5）文化,6）道德,27/144,语言丰富改变,1、简单句五种结构,2、并列句公式,3、三大主从复合句,28/144,1、简单句五种结构,主+谓,主+谓+宾,主+谓+宾+宾,主+谓+宾+宾补,主系表,29/144,1、主+谓,Time flies!,2、主+谓+宾,Time proves all！,3、主+谓+宾+宾,Time gives us experience!,4、主+谓+宾+宾补,Time makes us smart!,5、主+系+表,Time is money.,30/144,2、并列句公式,简单句+并列连词+简单句,31/144,并列句造句,1、政府能够对私家车主增加税款，或者它能够发展公共交通。,2、快餐不会取代传统食物，印刷书籍也不会被电子书籍取代。,32/144,并列句造句,1、政府能够对私家车主增加税款，或者,它能够发展公共交通。,The government may levy tax on the,private cars owners,or,it may,develop the public transportation.,33/144,并列句造句,2、快餐不会取代传统食物，印刷书籍也,不会被电子书籍取代。,Fast food will not take the place of,traditional food,nor,will P-books be,replaced by E-books.,34/144,3、复合句,1）名词性从句,2）定语从句,3）状语从句,35/144,简单句,英语三种基本句式 并列句,复合句,36/144,托福句式重点复合句写作,名词性从句（主、宾、表、同）,复合句 定语从句,状语从句,37/144,宾语从句用来表示观点。,I,think,that I love you.,主 谓 宾,38/144,All parents assume,that their,children should not follow the,super stars steps blindly.,The majority of scientists on,space believe,that exploring,space is of great benefit to human,race.,39/144,宾语从句造句：,1、很多人认为，那些著名运动员不应该得到,那么高工资。,2、经济学家认为，世界经济与原油价格亲密,相关。,3、大学生们认为，应该在四级考试中举行口,试。,4、HR教授认为，自信在面试中至关主要。,5、年轻人们以为跳槽是一件司空见惯事,情。,40/144,宾语从句造句：,1、很多人认为，那些著名运动员不应,该得到那么高工资。,A great number of people assume,that those prestigious athletes,should not deserve such high,salaries.,41/144,宾语从句造句：,2、经济学家认为，世界经济与原油价,格亲密相关。,The economists believe,that the,world economy is closely connected,with oil price.,42/144,3、大学生们认为，有必要在四级考试,中举行口试。,College students hold,that it is,essential to take a spoken English,test in CET-4.,43/144,4、HR教授认为，自信在面试中至关重,要。,Experts on HR insist,that confidence,is of great importance in the,interview.,44/144,5、很多年轻人们以为，跳槽在当今社,会是一件司空见惯事情。,Many youngsters hold,that job-,hopping is a common practice in the,modern society.,45/144,亮点句式It 从句：,公式：,It+be+a/an+名词+that,It+be+形容词+that,It+be+过去分词+that,46/144,It+be+a/an+名词+that,It is a pity that,It is a shame that,It is a fact that,It is an honor that,It is my belief that,造句：,1、有些年轻人不愿意赡养年迈父母，这是,一件令人遗憾事情。,2、我相信这些孩子在灾难之后会回到校园。,47/144,1、有些年轻人不愿意赡养年迈父,母，这是一件令人遗憾事情。,It is a pity that,some youngsters are,unwilling to support their aged,parents.,48/144,2、我相信这些孩子在灾难之后会回到,校园。,It is my belief that,those children will,go back to their schools after the,great disaster.,49/144,It+be+形容词+that,It is likely that,It is obvious that,It is strange that,It is fortunate that,It is natural that,造句：,1、每个人都要爱他人和被他人爱，这是很自,然。,2、幸运是，这个国家每一位组员都愿意,帮助深陷困境人。,50/144,1、每个人都要爱他人和被他人爱，这,是很自然。,It is natural that,everyone should,love others and should be loved by,others.,51/144,2、幸运是，这个国家每一位成,员都愿意帮助深陷困境人。,It is fortunate that,every member in,this country is willing to help those,people in trouble.,52/144,It+be+过去分词+that,It is reported that,It is said that,It is believed that,It must be pointed out that,造句：,1、据报道，这个超级巨星有成百万疯,狂粉丝。,2、必须指出是，养宠物能够培养孩子,责任心。,53/144,造句：,1、据报道，这个超级巨星有成百万疯,狂粉丝。,It is reported that,the super star has,millions of crazy fans.,54/144,造句：,2、必须指出是，养宠物能够培养孩子,责任心。,It must be pointed out that,caring for,pets can give children a sense of,responsibility.,55/144,状语从句：,1、时间 when,while,as,2、地点 where,3、原因 because,as,for,since,4、结果 sothat,suchthat,56/144,状语从句：,5、让步although,though,6、条件 if,unless,7、目标 in order that,so that,8、比较（不作要求）,9、方式（不做要求）,57/144,状语从句造句实战,1、时间,当社会进入了信息化时代时候，我们,天天要面对很多巨大改变。,3、原因,全部国家都应该重视环境保护，因为,这个问题已经妨碍了人类发展。,58/144,状语从句造句实战,4、结果,当前，体育运动变得如此流行以至于成,为了一个时尚。,5、让步,尽管我缺乏工作经验，不过我有很好,合作意识和团体意识。,59/144,1、,当,社会进入了信息化时代,时候,，我,们天天要面对很多巨大改变。,When,the society has entered the,information age,we,are confronted,with,many great changes every day.,60/144,3、全部国家都应该重视环境保护，,因,为,这个问题已经妨碍了人类发展。,All countries should,attach much,importance,to,environment,protection,because,this issue has,held back,the further development of,mankind.,61/144,4、当前，体育运动变得,如此,流行,以至,于,成为了一个时尚。,Currently,sports has become,so,popular,that,it has turned out to be,a fashion.,62/144,5、,尽管我缺乏工作经验，不过我有很好合作意识和团体意识。,Although,I lack working,experience,I have excellent,cooperation awareness and,teamwork spirit.,63/144,6、条件,假如秋天走了，我会在雪地里等你；,假如世界没了，我会在天堂里等你；,假如你走了，我会在泪水中思念你；,假如我走了，我会找一个人照料你。,64/144,If autumn is gone,I will wait for you on snow;,If the world is gone,I will wait for you in the heaven;,If you are gone,I will miss you in tears;,If I am gone,I will find somebody to look after you.,65/144,七大高分句式：,1、双重否定,2、定语从句,3、并列修辞,4、强调句,5、插入语,6、短句拉长,7、倒装句,66/144,1、双重否定,写出像阿迪广告一样精彩句子,Impossible is nothing.,跟布什对手Kerry学习双重否定,never fail to,67/144,I will never fail to get your kids home.,68/144,练习：,我们一定会完成这项艰巨工,作。,2)人类一定会在科学技术方面取得更大进步。,69/144,1、我们一定会完成这项艰巨工作。,We will never fail to complete the,tough job.,2、人类一定会在科学技术方面取得更,大进步。,Human race will never fail to make,more achievement in science and,technology.,70/144,其它双重否定句：,方法：主语否定+谓语否定,陈说句,我们全部些人都犯过失。,All of us have made mistakes.,双重否定（加强语气）,我们中没有些人从不犯错。,None of us has never made,mistakes.,71/144,陈说句,大家都相信他话。,Everybody believes in him.,双重否定,Nobody does not believe in him.,72/144,主要句型：,It is common for sb.to do sth.,It is not uncommon for sb.to do,sth.,是很日常（并不罕见）。,73/144,e.g.,一个伟大学者对日常事务一无,所知，这并不罕见。,Tips:,学者：scholar,日常事务：everyday affairs,一无所知：be ignorant of,74/144,陈说句,It is common for a great scholar,to be ignorant of everyday,affairs.,双重否定句,It is not uncommon,for a great,scholar to be ignorant of,everyday affairs.,75/144,用否定形式表示必定,cannottoo 越越好,1、面对这件事情，我们越小心越好。,Confronted with such an issue,we,cannot,be,too,careful.,76/144,2、所以，我们得出结论：一个人,朋友越多越好。,As a result,we may arrive at a,conclusion that a man,can never,have,too,many friends.,77/144,2、定语从句,功效：对关键词进行修饰性扩展和延,伸，使关键词愈加丰满和完善。,例：,1、有很多河流,被严重污染,。,2、那些,受溺爱,孩子轻易被生活困难击,倒。,3、你最好用,有吸引力,观点说服考官。,78/144,1、有很多,河流,被严重污染,。,There are a great number of,rivers,which were seriously polluted,.,79/144,2、那些,受溺爱,孩子,轻易被生活困,难击倒。,Those,children,who are spoilt by,parents,are easily defeated by,difficulties in life.,80/144,3、你最好用,有吸引力,观点,说服考官,Youd better convince the,interviewer with those,ideas,which,seem attractive to him or her.,81/144,定语从句,限制性：修饰一个成份。,非限制性：修饰一句话。,82/144,练习：,(限制性定语从句),1、有些人强烈反对,动物权益保护者提出,提议,。,Tips:,强烈反对：be strongly against,动物权益保护者：,animal-rights activists,提出：set forth;put forward,提议：proposal;suggestion;advice,83/144,1、有些人强烈反对,动物权益保护者提出,提议,。,Some people are strongly,against the,proposal,that is set,forth by animal-rights activists.,84/144,2、主动生活方式是,使人不会,发胖,关键,要素,。,Tips:,主动生活方式:,the wholesome lifestyle,使人不会：preventfrom,关键要素：,key factor,发胖：get overweight.,85/144,2、主动生活方式是,使人不会,发胖,关键,要素,。,The wholesome lifestyle is,the key,factor,that will,prevent people from getting,overweight.,86/144,练习：（非限制性）,3、动物试验被取消了，,这正是我们,所希望看到。,Tips:,动物试验：animal experiment,取消：cancelled,正是：exactly,希望看到：expect to see.,87/144,3、动物试验被取消了，,这正是我们,所希望看到。,The animal experiment has,been cancelled,which is,exactly what we expect to see.,88/144,定语从句造句练习,1、,生活在小城镇里,人,通常会有一个,更舒适生活方式。,2、老板必须持有职业态度，这种,态,度,为全部雇员作出榜样。,3、,既令人愉快又必要,事,和,既不令人,愉快又无须要,事,几乎都不存在。,4、我们生活在一个,人人都想取得成功,世界,里。,89/144,1、,生活在小城镇里,人,通常会有一个,非常舒适生活方式。,Tips:,小城镇:small town,舒适:comfortable,生活方式：life style,90/144,1、,生活在小城镇里,人,通常会有一个,非常舒适生活方式。,People,who live in a small town,often have a much comfortable life,style.,91/144,2、老板必须持有职业态度，这,种,态度,为全部雇员作出榜样。,Tips：,职业：professional,态度：attitude,为树立榜样：,sets an example for,雇员：employee,92/144,2、老板必须持有职业态度，这,种,态度,为全部雇员作出榜样。,A boss must have a,professional,attitude,that sets,an example for all of his,employees.,93/144,3、,既令人愉快又必要,事,和,既不,令人愉快又无须要,事,几乎都不存,在。,Tips:,事情：things,既又:bothand,愉快：enjoyable 不愉快：unenjoyable,必要：necessary 无须要：unnecessary,存在：exist,94/144,3、,既令人愉快又必要,事,和,既不,令人愉快又无须要,事,不存在。,Things,that are both enjoyable,and necessary or both,unenjoyable and unnecessary,seldom exist.,95/144,4、我们生活在一个,人人都想取得,成功,世界,里。,Tips:,想要：want to,取得成功：to be successful,96/144,4、我们生活在一个,人人都想取得,成功,世界,里。,We live in a,world,in which every,one wants to be successful.,97/144,经典定语从句,1、God helps those who help,themselves.,天 助 自 助 者。,2、A book,that is shut,is but a block.,不去翻动书本不过是一块砖头。,98/144,经典定语从句,3、Success is a process,that begins,from within.,成功是一个开始内心过程。,4、You must do the thing which you suppose you cannot do.,你一定要去做自己认为做不到事情。,99/144,经典定语从句,5、A soldier,who does not want to be,a marshal,is not a good soldier.,不想当元帅士兵不是好士兵。,6、There is no path,that cannot be,traveled.,没有不能走路。,7、He laughs best,who laughs last,.,谁笑到最终谁笑得最好。,100/144,3、并列修辞,经 典 例 子,1）,I came,I saw,I conquered,.,我来了，我看到了，我征服了。,结构：I+过去式,I+过去式，I+过去式,101/144,2）Studies serve,for delight,for,ornament,and,for ability,.,学习能够怡情，能够博采，能够长才。,结构：for+名词，for+名词，for+名词,102/144,3),of the people,for the people,by the people,民有，民享，民治,结构：,介词+the people,介词+the people,介,词+the people,103/144,并列修辞写作方式：,_ and/or _,用and/or连接两个词性相同，词义相,近单词。,104/144,a small town,a,small and peaceful,town,a responsible teacher,a,responsible and impressive,teacher,a,direct and effective,method,105/144,3、并列修辞,练习：,1、University,education,can,enrich,our,social experience,.,2、when you see someone,in,difficulty,dont hesitate to give your,love,to him.,106/144,University,education,can,enrich,our,social,experience,.,1）University,education and instruction,can enrich our social experience.,University education can,enrich and improve,our social experience.,University education can enrich our,social experience and social knowledge.,107/144,When you see someone,in difficulty,dont,hesitate to give your,love,to him.,1)When you see someone,in difficulty or in,trouble,dont hesitate to give your love to him.,2)When you see someone in difficulty,dont,hesitate to give your,love and support,to him.,3)when you see someone in difficulty,dont,hesitate to give your,help and support,to him.,108/144,4、强调句,句型：,It is(was)+被强调部分+that+其它,部分,Lao Yu always sings“Two,Butterflies”on the Quan Cheng,Square every night.,109/144,其它强调方式：,I.用助动词_表示强调,II.用形容词_修饰名词加强语气,110/144,其它强调方式：,III.用_等副词和_等带有-ly副词,来强调：,IV.用_等介词短语能够表示更强语,气（惯用于疑问句）,造句：,幸福终究是什么？,111/144,5、插入语,举例式插入语：such as,especially,Movies on violence should be,regulated.,Movies,such as ones on violence,should be regulated.,112/144,插入语写作要领,1、紧跟在主语之后。,2、插入语前后需用两个逗号。,113/144,I.副词,：frankly,indeed,fortunately,造句：坦率讲，旅游能够促进国家之,间相互了解。,114/144,坦率讲，旅游能够促进国家之间相,互了解。,Tourism,frankly,can promote the,mutual understanding among,nations.,115/144,II.形容词或者短语,strange to say,needless to say,worse still,造句：更为糟糕是，居高不下失业,率破坏了社会稳定。,116/144,更为糟糕是，居高不下失业率破,坏了社会稳定。,High unemployment rate,worse still,has undermined the social stability.,117/144,III 介词短语,In fact,in a sense,in a word,造句：实际上，跳槽给人提供充分发挥,潜能机会。,118/144,实际上，跳槽给人提供充分发挥潜能机,会。,Job-hopping,in fact,can offer an,opportunity to bring ones potential into,full play.,119/144,IV.分词短语,generally speaking,strictly speaking,frankly speaking，,造句：严格说来，家长不该忽略电脑游,戏对孩子副作用。,120/144,严格说来，家长不该无视电脑游戏对小,孩副作用。,Parents,strictly speaking,should,not,turn a blind eye to,the side-,effects of computer games.,121/144,V.不定式短语,to sum up,to tell the truth,造句：老实说，吸毒直接原因是无知,和好奇。,122/144,老实说，吸毒直接原因是无知和好,奇。,The direct cause of drug abuse,to,tell the truth,is ignorance and,curiosity.,123/144,VI、插入句,I suppose,what is important,I,believe
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