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*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*,书面表达,话题写作(六),计划与安排篇,【话题点睛】,主要涉及的话题有活动安排、假期计划、人生目标等。,典例分析,2018,江西,假如国外中学生来你校进行为期一周的交流学习,期间计划参加一项中国传统文化的主题活动,为此向你们征求活动方案,(plan),。请你根据下面表格中的信息提示,写一篇英语短文,介绍你提供的活动方案,内容包括,:,茶或者民乐介绍,活动安排以及与之相关的理由。,要求,(1),从表格中任选一个主题,合理安排活动,;,(2),短文条理清楚,行文连贯,内容可适当发挥,;,(3),短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名,;,(4),词数不少于,80,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。,Hello,friends.Ive got a plan for you which may help you learn about Chinese culture.First of all,Id like to introduce_,_,_,Hope you will have a good time.,【思路点拨】,1.,要点提炼,:,主题主要是向外国学生介绍你提供的活动方案,提示给的比较充分,结合提示写即可,但一定要注意围绕着这两个点去写,:,(1),茶或者民乐的介绍,;,(2),活动安排以及相关理由。,2.,确定时态,:,一般现在时,【写作架构】,【基础写作】,.,写主干句,(,根据所给提示补全下列各句。,),1.,茶在中国是最受欢迎的饮品之一。,(one of the most popular),Tea is one of the,in China.,2.,茶有很长的历史,据说神农发现它可以作为一种饮品。,(have a long history),It has a,.It,that Shen Nong discovered it as a drink.,3.,我们的音乐老师将在音乐教室教你怎样演奏乐器。,(play),Our music teachers are going to teach you,musical instruments in the music rooms.,4.,我们有许多其他不同种类的乐器,比如二胡和笛子。,(such as),We have many,musical instruments,erhu,and,dizi,.,most popular drinks,long history,is said,how to play,other different,such as,.,句子升格,(,按括号中的要求完成句子。,),1.People made tea as a drink in ancient China.(,改为被动语态,),2.You will see a young lady.She often shows people how a cup of tea is made with tea sets.(,改为定语从句,),3.You can enjoy it and relax yourselves.You are listening to pieces of traditional folk music.(,改为用,when,引导的复合句,),4.We take you to the tea house.We want you to learn a lot more about tea culture there.(,改为用,because,引导的复合句,),Tea was made as a drink in ancient China.,You will see a young lady who/that often shows people how a cup of tea is made with,tea sets.,You can enjoy it and relax yourselves when you are listening to pieces of traditional,folk music.,We take you to the tea house because we want you to learn a lot more about tea,culture there.,【连句成文】,Possible,version,1,:,Hello,friends.Ive got a plan for you which may help you learn about Chinese culture.First of all,Id like to introduce tea.It has a long history.It is said that Shen Nong discovered it as a drink.Tea is one of the most popular drinks in China.So we will have some interesting activities about it for you.,On Saturday morning,you are going to visit a big farm where you can learn about tea processing.On Saturday afternoon,you are going to a tea house after dinner where you can watch a tea art performance.,Why do we plan a visit to a tea house for you?Because you can learn a lot more about tea culture there.You will see a young lady in a Chinese traditional dress who shows you how a cup of tea is made with tea sets.You can enjoy it and relax yourselves while listening to pieces of traditional folk music.,Hope you will have a good time.,Possible,version,2,:,Hello,friends.Ive got a plan for you which may help you learn about Chinese culture.First of all,Id like to introduce Chinese folk music.We have many famous pieces of music such as,Jasmine,Flowers,and,Gaoshan,Liushui,.We have,erhu,dizi,and many other different musical instruments.So we will have some interesting activities about it for you.,You are going to take musical instrument classes on Friday afternoon and our music teachers are going to teach you how to play musical instruments in the music rooms.On Saturday night,you are going to attend a folk musical concert in the school hall.,Why will we hold a concert for you?Because there are talented students from our school who can play very well.Its a good chance for you to enjoy the beauty of some famous pieces of folk music and you will surely lose yourselves in them.,Hope you will have a good time.,拓展积累,【假期安排】,1.Summer vacation is coming.Everyone has different plans for it.,2.All of us felt tired but happy.,3.I think my summer vacation is happy and exciting.,【学校活动】,1.Our school will have an English party in our classroom on the morning of May 10th,2019.,2.The various activities can not only provide opportunities for us to relax ourselves but also enrich our minds.,3.Besides,we can develop the spirit of teamwork through the game.,【日常活动】,1.Im going to help my parents do housework.,2.I will volunteer to collect rubbish or go to the old peoples home to cheer them up.,3.Ill help my mum do some cooking because it is one of the basic life skills.,【关于理由表达】,1.Because you can learn a lot more about tea culture there.,2.You can enjoy it and relax yourselves while listening to pieces of traditional folk music.,3.Its a good chance for you to enjoy the beauty of some famous pieces of folk music.,实战演练,A,请以“,My Traveling Plan,”为题写一篇短文介绍你的旅行计划,提示信息如下,:,(1)Where are you going and who are you going with?,(2)Why are you going there?,(3)What are you going to do there?,要求,(1),文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息,;,(2),词数,:80,100,。,One,possible,version,:,My Traveling Plan,I am going to travel in Beijing next month.Beijing is a beautiful city with a long history.It is the capital of China.I am going to stay there for several days.There are many interesting places.First I am going to visit Tiananmen Square,the Summer Palace and the Great Wall.Then I am going to Wangfujing Street.There are a lot of stories there,and I want to buy some gifts for my parents.And I am going to eat Beijing Duck there.How delicious it is!,B,2017,盐城,学校将举办英语写作比赛。请根据所给提示,以“,My Life in 20 Years,”为题,写一篇参赛短文,分享你对未来的憧憬。,要求,(1),词数,:100,左右,(,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数,);,(2),文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息,;,(3),文章必须包含所提供的主要信息,并作适当发挥。,My Life in 20 Years,Im always working hard for a bright future.I imagine_,_,One,possible,version,:,My Life in 20 Years,Im always working hard for a bright future.I imagine I will have a better life than now.,In 20 years,I will have a better family.I will take good care of my parents because I have grown up.And I will have two children and they are cute and lovely.Of course,I will have a big house.I will have a well-paid job.I will work hard and I will be ready to take on new challenges.I will have a group of workmates and they will be easy to work with.,When I am free,I will meet my friends.We will talk about the past school life and our teachers.I will go abroad for vacations with my family.After work,I will do some sports to keep healthy.,I think my life in 20 years will be exciting and wonderful.And I am working hard to make it come true.,
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