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正反观点类的写作套路
第一步:布局:
第一段话
1.争议焦点(title)
2.写正方观点及理由(3)
第二段话
写反方观点及理由(3)
第三段话
个人的观点及理由/(变换说法)
第二步:段与段连接:句子与句子的连接
第三步:每个句子: 1.句式结构的选择 2.词句的选择
3.闪光点
检查:病句,拼写错误。
示范一Social Practice 社会实践
提纲(1)有人对社会实践持肯定的态度
(2)而有部分人强烈反对大学生社会实践 (3)你的观点
正方理由:3
反方理由:3
When it comes to social practice , answers to this question vary greatly. Some people firmly believe that social practice does good to our life .On the one hand, what we have learned can be put into practice in our later Job career. On the other hand, it can enlarge our horizon, improve our ability and enrich ourselves. What’s more, it is with social practice that we can contribute to our society, which is also beneficial to us.
However, others may not agree with them. Quite a few people argue that social practice does great harm to our life. For one thing,it is widely believed that it is a waste of time. For another,it is possible for us to go astray by improper social practice. Above all, the incident may happen that the people will lose their health even their lives.
As far as I am concerned, social practice plays a very important role in our life. However, we should pay much attention to its side effect. Only in this way can we derive the greatest benefit from it .
示范二Campus Love 校园恋爱
(1).有人强烈反对在学校谈恋爱 (2). 有人坦然接受 (3). 我的观点 My view
反方理由:3
正方理由:3
When it comes to campus love, answers to this question vary greatly. Some people firmly believe that it does harm to our life .On the one hand, students should give up love during learning in college because it is a waste of time. On the other hand, it has a bad effect on study. What’s more, campus violence will happen among the students who have experienced failure in love.
However, others may not agree with them. Quite a few people argue that campus love does great good to our life. For one thing,those who fall in love can encourage each other and will make greater progress. For another,it is hard to find an ideal/right /pure love after graduation. Above all, far from parents and hometown, seeking a boy or girl friend can have a comfort of soul.
As far as I am concerned, campus love plays a very important role in our life. We should pay much attention to its side effect. Only in this way can we derive the greatest benefit from it .
或者As far as I am concerned, every coin has two sides/love is a two-edged sword. When you get it, you will be happy;when you lose it, you will feel painful. Therefore, we should lay great emphasis on learning despite the popularity of campus love.
示范三Reading selectively or extensively? 应该是有选择的读书还是博览群书?
提纲1、有人认为读书应当选择2、有人认为应当博览群书 3、我的看法
正方理由 3
反方理由 3
When it comes to reading, answers to this question vary greatly. Some people firmly believe that reading selectively is a good way/ reading selectively does good to our life. On the one hand, it is impossible for us to read all the books in our life long time since there are so many books. On the other hand, as is known to us, good books are as many as bad books. It is those good books that can give us pleasure and knowledge. What’s more, it is not how much one reads but what he reads that really counts.
However, others may not agree with them. Quite a few people argue that reading extensively does great harm to our life./ reading extensively is better. For one thing,it is through reading extensively that we obtain as much knowledge as we can . For another,one kind of books can only give us one aspect of knowledge. Above all, today's society is not what it used to be. If one man has many kinds of knowledge he'll have more chances to succeed.
As far as I am concerned, reading plays a very important role in our life. However, we should pay much attention to its side effect. Only in this way can we derive the greatest benefit from it .
或者In my opinion, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible. In this way , we can derive the greatest benefit from reading.
示范四Spring Festival Gala on CCTV 春节联欢晚会
提纲:1.许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会2.但有些人提出取消春节晚会3.我的看法
正方理由: 3
反方理由:3
When it comes to Spring Festival Gala on CCTV __ _1______, answers to this question vary greatly. Some people firmly believe that ____the gala does good to our life_____ 2__________. On the one hand, the program has been a tradition which lasts more than 30 years, and we get used to it__ ___3________. On the other hand, it can meet/satisfy the audiences’ demand with different ages because there are a number of stars performing in the gala __ _________4__________
What’s more, _5 the atmosphere is created on S F Eve for the whole family to get together _______.
However, others may not agree with them. Quite a few people argue the gala does great harm to our life, it is called off/canceled 6__________. For one thing, ____it is a waste of time and money when we hold the _____7_________. For another,the quality of the gala has been decreasing step by step owing to lacking creativity /innovation _ _______ _8_ __________. Above all, _because the program goes against its original goal to entertain/amuse the common people. They can enjoy themselves by other _amusements ,such as, setting off fireworks/firecrackers ,surfing the internet, playing cards, and so on 9__________.
As far as I am concerned, __10____ plays a very important role in our life. However, we should pay much attention to its side effect. Only in this way can we derive the greatest benefit from it .
或者 In my opinion, every coin has two sides. On the one hand, it is the gala that can still entertain most of people although what people want is increasing. On the other hand, the problem mentioned above is arising. If we canceled it, most people couldn’t find pleasure in seeing it. Thus, I hope it will continue to appear after improving the gala itself.
Key:
利弊类的写作套路
示例一 Owning a private car 私家车
提纲:1、拥有汽车的好处 2、拥有汽车的坏处 3、你的观点
利: 3
弊: 3
With the improvement of the people’s living standard./With the development of modern society, p cars are entering ordinary families. There are some advantages of owning a car. To begin with, cars provide people with the most convenient form of transportation, save their time. Then, it’s comfortable for people to travel, especially in the changeable (variable) weather. Finally, owning a car can show a person’s success in his career, and become the symbol of one’s status.
However, there are some disadvantages of owning a car. On the one hand, cars take up (occupy) too much space. On the other hand, a driver should be careful (cautious) while driving a car,or (otherwise) traffic accidents are likely to happen. What’s more, cars give off poisonous gases which pollute the environment seriously.
Despite/In spite of all the disadvantages mentioned above, I still think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. As for the problem, I’m sure they will be settled by scientists in the future.
示例二 Keeping Pets
养宠物
提纲:1养宠物的好处 2.养宠物的坏处 3.我的观点
利:3
弊:3
With the improvement of living standard, pets are entering ordinary families. There are some advantages of keeping pets. To begin with, people can release pressure imposed on them working day and night. Then, As for the young, pleasure can be got; as for the old and disabled, loneliness is far from them. Finally, keeping pets is no more than a hobby and it can be a profitable business.
However, there are some disadvantages of having/raising pets. On the one hand, it is a waste of time and money, especially for the young. On the other hand, it is possible to contract/transmit/ disease and pollute environment. What’s more, people maybe be hurt accidentally/by accident/chance, which will have a lasting effect/impact on them.
Despite all the disadvantages mentioned above, I still think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. As for the problem, People can solve it by all means in the future.
第二段模板:
Just as a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”,____title_____ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.
第三段模板:
To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of _____title____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of____title______.
示例三 Exercise 锻炼
提纲:1锻炼的好处 2.锻炼的坏处 3.我的观点
利: 3
弊: 3
With the improvement of living standard, ____1_______ are entering ordinary families. There are some advantages of ___2_____. To begin with,___________3________________. Then, ____________4______________. Finally, _____________5________________.
However, there are some disadvantages of_____6_________. On the one hand, ____________7_________________. On the other hand, _________8_____________.What’s more, ______________9__________________.
Despite all the disadvantages mentioned above, I still think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. As for the problem, People can solve it by all means in the future.
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示例四 Internet — A Two-edged Sword 互联网—双刃剑
提纲:1.联网给我们生活带来的便利 2互联网的消极因素 3.我的看法
利:3
弊:3
With the development of science and technology, ____1______ are entering ordinary families. There are some advantages of ___2_____. To begin with,___________3________________. Then, ____________4______________. Finally, _____________5________________.
However, there are some disadvantages of_____6_________. On the one hand, ____________7_________________. On the one hand, _________8_____________.What’s more, ______________9__________________.
Despite all the disadvantages mentioned above, I still think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. As for the problem, People can solve it by all means in the future.
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示例五 Part-Time Job 做兼职
提纲:1.大学生做兼职的益处 2大学生做兼职的弊端 3.我的看法
利:
弊:
With the development of science and technology, ____1______ are entering ordinary families. There are some advantages of ___2_____. To begin with,___________3________________. Then, ____________4______________. Finally, _____________5________________.
However, there are some disadvantages of_____6_________. On the one hand, ____________7_________________. On the one hand, _________8_____________.What’s more, ______________9__________________.
Despite all the disadvantages mentioned above, I still think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. As for the problem, People can solve it by all means in the future.
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问题解决类的写作套路
问题解决类又称社会问题或社会现象型,一般涉及的是当前或相当长一段时间内大众关注的热点问题
第一步:布局:
第一段话
描述现象或社会问题
第二段话
分析问题或现象的产生原因,如果原因不好分析就说明造成危害
第三段话
给出解决对策
并预测该问题的趋势
第二步:段与段连接:句子与句子的连接
第三步:每个句子:1.句式结构的选择2.词句的选择3.闪光点
检查:病句,拼写错误。
示例一
Global Shortage of Fresh Water 全球淡水短缺
提纲: 1. 人们以为淡水是取之不尽的 (提示:雨水、河水、井水......)
2. 实际上淡水是非常紧缺的 (提示:人口增加,工业用水增加,污染......)
3. 我们应该怎么办
原因:3
对策:3
It is widely thought and accepted that the world’s supply of fresh water will never be run out of (used up) because it comes from such a variety of sources as rain ,river, well. Such an opinion leads to a shocking waste of water.
However (As a matter of fact), the earth is short of fresh water. There are many causes for the shortage of it. First, the world’s population is growing at a dangerous rate. Second, the demand for water is rising. What’s more, our surroundings has suffered serious pollution. All of the reasons mentioned result in the urgent need of fresh water, especially in some big cities.
Therefore, effective measures/steps should be taken to deal with/see to /take care of the problem. To begin with, strict laws should be passed to control any waste of water. Second, the sense of saving water should be educated among people. Above all, scientists must work even harder to purify the sea water and polluted water. I firmly believe this problem will be solved in the near future.
示例二 My View on Fake Commodities
提纲:1.假冒伪劣商品的危害; 2.怎样杜绝假冒伪劣商品。
危害:3
对策: 3
Nowadays fake commodities can be found, now and then, in the market, which has aroused a lot of public attention. It is reported that these commodities range from food, clothes to radios, and TV sets and even medicines.
Fake commodities are harmful in many ways. To begin with , it is a waste of resource, especially in our country. Second, it has bad effect on the reputation/fame of the real manufacturers. Above all, people’s health and lives are severely threatened if someone buys some fake medicines.
Measures should be take to deal with the problem. On the one hand , strict laws should be passed/enforced to punish the producers and the sellers. On the other hand, consumers should be told to distinguish the genuine goods from the false ones. At the same time, there should be a popular belief among people that cheaper goods shouldn’t be bought. I firmly believe this problem will be solved in the near future.
第一段
Currently, there is a widespread concern over___title__, which has aroused a lot of public attention.
第三段
It is really an important concern to every one of us, we must spare no efforts to take some effective steps to solve this problem.
示例三 food safety 食品安全
提纲:1由于是食品安全时间不断发生所以近年来越来越受到关注
2它造成乐巨大的危害
3 我们该如何做?
危害:3
对策:3
Nowadays,unsafe foods can be found, now and then, in the market, which has aroused a lot of public attention. It is reported that these foodstuff ranges from substandard milk powder, tainted/dyed steamed buns to pork with lean meat powder.
Fake commodities are harmful in many ways. To begin with, it is a waste of resource, especially in our country. Second, it has bad effect on the reputation of the real manufacturers and brings about moral Crisis. Above all, all that matters is food.people’s health and lives are severely threatened if someone buys some unsafe foodstuff.
Measures should be take to deal with the problem. On the one hand , strict laws should be passed to punish the producers and the sellers. On the other hand, consumers should be told to distinguish the genuine goods from the false ones. At the same time, the government should strengthen the supervision of all aspects of food. I firmly believe this problem will be solved in the near future.
示例四 Reducing Waste on Campus 减少校园浪费现象
提纲:1 近年来,校园浪费现象严重。2 减少浪费,从我做起
危害:3
Nowadays, more and more waste appears on campus in some university. Lights are still on while there is no one in the classroom. Papers scatter here and there. The food left is full of the rubbish box.
The harmfulness caused by waste is great. To begin with, it caused the severe pollution, which affect students’ study and life. Second, the urgent need of resource will be increased as the result of waste. Above all, a habit will be acquired that will have a bad effect on their life.
Reducing waste, start with me. On the one hand , I should have a sense of saving, for example, putting off the lights before leaving and recycling the used papers. On the other hand, I will influence others by what I do, that is to say, setting an example for others to
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