中考英语书面表达文档.docx

中考专题书面表达

重难点讲解：
英语写作是学生学习的一个盲点，缺乏对写作的专门训练和反思，老师的工作量大，造成作文讲评大多数时候只谈现象，因此学生学得也不具体、不深入，忽略写作技能的提高，甚至误认为只要句子结构正确，无单词拼写错误就应该得满分。同学们应该走出对英语写作认识上的误区。那么怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文，而在中考中获取高分呢？
（一）写作决窍
总体把握，要点齐全；人称时态，逻辑清楚；
关键词汇，动词第一；组词成句，结构完整；
组句成文，连词增色；此路不通，绕道迂回；
字迹工整，留好印象；从句适量，高分有望。

（二）写作步骤
1. 认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息，告诫读者什么（即写作目的）。
2. 确定文体和时态。确定文体后，根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料；同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。
3. 写完要点，但不随意发挥。
4. 先草稿，后抄写。

（三）培养途径
1. 根据老师布置的写作内容，独立完成一篇写作。
2. 与同伴合作，交流自己的写作，通过交流找出各自作文中写得好的地方和优美的句子，合作创造一篇新的文章，供大家欣赏。
3. 找老师点评，请求老师指点，尤其是怎样润色。
4. 自己纠错，写下反思。

（四）常出现的问题
1. 句子不准确，中文式英语多
2. 句子结构不完整，句式雷同多
3 语法错误多
学习语言的关键是学以致用。在书面表达中用好、用对语法知识是保证写好英语作文的一个重要前提。部分考生的语法错误主要表现在：
（1）时态、语态上。一般来说，特定时间、背景下的时态总是相同的：介绍人、事、物的现状常以一般现在时态为主；写议论文、说明文也多以一般现在时为主；写日记、记叙文常要介绍过去的情况，这要以一般过去时态为主。
（2）修饰词语错位。在考生平时训练过程中，会出现几个形容词共同修饰一个名词，这时要特别注意其排列顺序。
4. 用词不准
选用词语就是要准确表达思想。我们选用词语的原则是：既知道确切含义、用法，又要用有把握的词语。很多考生选用词语的错误常表现在：拼写错误、用词不当、词义（类）混淆、遗词漏词等方面。其中用词不当是最主要的问题。例如：
The price of the dictionary is very cheap. （价格仅能用high or low来衡量，应改clean为low，物品常用 cheap or expensive来说明）
We joined the sports meeting yesterday. （join指加入组织、团体，应改为took part in）
5. 遗漏情景内容，详略不当
6. 句子衔接性差，缺少过渡词
7. 常识性错误
主要表现在：（1）遗漏标题或标题写错位。（2）正文格式，尤其是应用文格式错误。（3）单词字母的大小写及标点符号。
虽然各地的评分标准略有差异，但是都包括以下几个方面：整体印象、语言表达、词数规定等几方面内容。我们在写作中要尽量避免扣分，争取有加分点。当然用英文写作不同于用母语那样得心应手，常常会受到生词、语法、惯用法的限

（五）. 常用的连接词语
1. 开头：
As far as we know 据我们所知
As everybody knows 众所周知
At present 目前
First of all 首先
Of course 当然
To tell the truth 老实说
2. 衔接转折：
After a while 过了一会儿
As a matter of fact 事实上
At the same time 同时
But it is a pity that… 但可惜的是
By the way 另外
For example 例如
From now on 今后
On the other hand 另一方面
Thanks to 多亏了，因为
What is more 此外
3. 结尾：
After all 毕竟
At last 最后
In a word 总之
Finally, we hope that… 最后，我们希望……

（六）热门话题

1，健康问题
典型例句
1. It is very important to keep healthy。
2. How can we keep healthy?
3. We can't go to sleep too late. We can't get up too late。
4. We should eat the food healthily。
5. We should do more exercise。
6. Last Tuesday I got a cold and had a pain in my head。
7. I didn't feel like eating anything。
8. I decided to see the doctor。
9. In the doctor's office, the doctor looks over me carefully。
10. He said: "Nothing serious." And he told me to take a rest and drink more water。
11. A nurse gave me an injection. It was a little painful。
12. The doctor asked me to take the medicine three times a day。
13. A few days later, I felt better. From then on I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world。
2，关于环境保护问题
典型句子
1. It’s our duty to save water
 2.  As we know, water is very important to man, 
3. We can’t live without water. 
4. The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less. 
5. But some people don’t care about it.
6. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution. 
7. It's our duty to protect our environment。
8. It is very important to take care of our environment
9. We should not throw litter onto the ground
10. We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the trees
11. We should plant more flowers and trees。
12. We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin
13. If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful。
15. Trees are very helpful and important for us. 
17.We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and healthier in the 
future.  It’s everyone’s duty to love and protect the environment.
3，语言学习 
典型例句
1. My favorite subject is English。
2. More than three quarters of the information on the Internet is in English。
3. It is used by travelers and business people all over the world。
4. China has joined the WTO and the Olympic Games will be held in China. English becomes more and more useful。
5. So English is very important and I like English very much。
6. We have a lot of fun in the English class。
7. Our English teacher often makes us happy in the English class。
8. I hope I can go abroad one day, and then I can speak to foreigners in English。
9. I like English and try my best to learn it。
4， 兴趣与爱好
我的爱好（My hobby）
Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.
·What exactly your hobby is;
·When and how you became interested in this hobby;
·Why you enjoy your hobby;
·About your hopes and plans for the future.
5，旅游和介绍地方篇
典型例句
1. Last Sunday(Saturday,…) ,it was sunny(rainy, windy, foggy,)
2. I got up very early (late). After breakfast I went to …with my friends by bike, bus，…
3. We enjoyed ourselves。
4. We forgot the time. We didn't come back until 5 o'clock。
5. We all felt very tired, but we were happy。
6. I thought I would never forget this trip。
7. Last summer, my parents and I went to Beijing for our holidays。
8. We visited a lot of places of interest。
9. We had a good time there。
10. We bought a lot of things. The clothes here are good and cheap。
6，新生事物评价
典型例句
1. Computer is becoming more and more important
2 .We should make good use of it.
3 .It maybe get in the way of our study.
4. We can do lots of things with it’
5. It makes our life more easy
6. Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students.
7，烦恼篇
典型例句
1.I am sorry to hear that……
2.you should learn to forget……
3.you had better……
4 you should learn to relax
5.you can ask your teacher for help

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