人教版英语必修二unit4Writing.ppt

In pairs choose another endangered animal which you know about.Analyse why this animal is endangered.Then discuss with your classmates.Finally write a letter to WWF based on what you have discussed,asking them to help you save your endangered animal.AnimalHabitat Reason for problemWhite RhinoAfrica1 Destruction of the grasslands where it lives2 Hunting for its horn3 too friendly and so easily caughtPolar bearNorth PoleWarming of the seas means it is losing its habitat of ice flowsAnimalHabitat Reason for problemLeatherback turtlePacific ocean1 Pollutants in the sea2 Eggs taken by predators and/or humans3 Many baby turtles do not grow to be adultsWhales and dolphinsOceans 1 over hunting2 Gas and oil fields in its feeding grounds3 Collisions with ships4 Getting caught in fishing netsAnimalHabitat Reason for problemElephantsAsia and Africa1 Loss of habitat2 Conflict with peopleLynxEurope and Asia1 Loss of habitat 2 Conflict with people1.文体：写作中应注意书信的常规格式，文体：写作中应注意书信的常规格式，正确选用合适的书信开头和结束语。正确选用合适的书信开头和结束语。2.主体时态：以一般现在时为主。主体时态：以一般现在时为主。3.主体人称：建议信旨在向主体人称：建议信旨在向WWF提出自提出自 己的动物保护建议，所以用第一人称。己的动物保护建议，所以用第一人称。4.内容要点：内容要点：说明主题；说明主题；分条列分条列出建议；出建议；写建议信的期望。写建议信的期望。5.注意合理安排顺序，使文章条理分注意合理安排顺序，使文章条理分明，衔接顺畅。明，衔接顺畅。本题要求写一封动物保护建议信，本题要求写一封动物保护建议信，要求学生平时注重相关背景知识的积累，要求学生平时注重相关背景知识的积累，才能有话可说。本题谋篇布局时应注意才能有话可说。本题谋篇布局时应注意以下几个步骤：以下几个步骤：首先，应交代清楚具体的谈论对象，首先，应交代清楚具体的谈论对象，说明建议保护何种动物以及提出建议的说明建议保护何种动物以及提出建议的原因。原因。其次，针对该动物提出自己的保护措其次，针对该动物提出自己的保护措施。注意各条建议措施要表达清晰，可进施。注意各条建议措施要表达清晰，可进行必要的细节说明，使得建议易于理解，行必要的细节说明，使得建议易于理解，便于操作，达到较好的语言交流目的。便于操作，达到较好的语言交流目的。最后，书信主体部分末尾应再次向对最后，书信主体部分末尾应再次向对方表明自己的期待和感谢之情。方表明自己的期待和感谢之情。值得一提的是，该部分的写作任务与课值得一提的是，该部分的写作任务与课堂讨论密切相关，文章内容是基于讨论堂讨论密切相关，文章内容是基于讨论的结果。所以，学生在整理写作思路时的结果。所以，学生在整理写作思路时应充分吸收讨论成果，重新加工语言材应充分吸收讨论成果，重新加工语言材料，促进英语口语和书面表达能力的共料，促进英语口语和书面表达能力的共同提高。同提高。常用的信件开头和结束语：常用的信件开头和结束语：FormalInformalStartsDear,Hi,My Dear,Dearest,EndingsYours sincerely,Sincerely,Sincerely yours,Yours truly,Yours faithfully,Love,Yours,建议信正文常用的表达：建议信正文常用的表达：Im writing to give some suggestions to improve.I suggest that.Firstly,I suggest doing./suggest that./I advise that.Secondly,we should/can.By doing this,.Thirdly,it would be a good idea if.Then/That way.First.Equally important.Last but not least.If I were you,I would.Why not.?/Lets.We shall spare no effort to.It is necessary for us to.In order to.,wed better(not)do.For the benefits of.we should go out to.Though I am an ordinary person,I feel it my responsibility to call on all people to.These are my suggestions and I hope.I would be grateful if you could take my suggestions into consideration.I believe that with your help.Im looking forward to your reply.I hope they could mean something for a better future of.It is time we put all our great plans into practice!Dear WWF,My hometown is one of the few habitats of the golden monkey.Im so sad that this lovely animal is endangered now.I hope that you can help the golden monkey.Firstly,I suggest that we should start a foundation for the golden monkey.Then people who would like to help protect the monkey can donate.Secondly,making educational programs would be a good idea for saving the golden monkey.As a very important organization,WWF should provide knowledge and information about the golden monkey for more people.Thirdly,WWF should cooperate with local governments and schools.It is necessary to have some long-term projects,which would attract more volunteers and more funds.I believe that with your help the golden monkey will survive better.Please help them.Yours sincerely,Li Ming假设你是李华，你的网友假设你是李华，你的网友Tom因为家境因为家境贫寒决定辍学去赚钱。请你用英语写一贫寒决定辍学去赚钱。请你用英语写一封信，劝他留在学校继续读书。封信，劝他留在学校继续读书。注意：注意：1.词数词数120左右；左右；2.参考词汇：参考词汇：辍学辍学drop out of school