英语通过句式转换打造优秀高考作文市公开课一等奖百校联赛特等奖课件.pptx

Click to edit Master title style,Click to edit Master text styles,Second level,Third level,Fourth level,Fifth level,*,怎样打造优异高考作文,句式篇,第1页,思索：什么样作文会成为一篇好作文,无遗漏信息点（审题）,篇章条理清楚：分段和过渡词,句式多样,地道高级词汇和恰当词组,思索：你能想到好句式有哪些？,第2页,推荐高考写作,10,种句式,一、主动句与被动句交换。,操作难度 写作效果,1.Rice is grown in the south of China.(people),2.They have printed one and a half million copies of the dictionary since 1986.,People grow rice in the south of China.,One and a half million copies of the dictionary have been printed since 1986.,第3页,二、将陈说句改为感叹句。,操作难度 写作效果,1.To prevent the pollution is very important,How,！,2.She is a clever girl,What,!,How important it is,to prevent the pollution!,what a clever girl she is!,第4页,三、将陈说句改为倒装句。,操作难度 写作效果,1.I could,hardly,understand the importance of English at that time.,2.We did,not,realize our mistakes,until,at that time.,Hardly could I,understand the importance of English at that time.,Not until at that time did we,realize our mistakes.,第5页,四、将简单句改为强调句。,操作难度 写作效果,1.,Smoking,did great harm to his health.,2.Our money is earned,through hard work,by our parents.,It was,smoking,that,did great harm to his health.,It is,through hard work,that,our money is earned by our parents.,第6页,五、将两个简单句合并为并列句。,操作难度 写作效果,1.You can do it.I can do it.One of us must do it.,you,I must do it.,2.I want to buy this bike.I dont have enough money.,I want to buy this bike,I dont have enough money.,Either,or,but,第7页,六、将两个简单句合并为复合句。,操作难度写作效果,1.,同位语和同位语从句（惯用于描述人物、地点等介绍性文段）,1)Liu Xiang is an excellent athlete.He won the first prize in Mens 110 Hurdle Race in the Olympic Games.(,用同位语改写,),won the first prize in Mens 110 Hurdle Race in the Olympic Games.,2)The word is true.The president will give our school a speech.,is true,the president will give our school a speech.,第8页,2.,定语从句（限制性,/,非限制性）,1)The Olympic Games was held in Beijing,and its slogan is One World,One Dream,The Olympic Games,.,2)In my opinion,the Great Wall and the Summer Palace are well worth visiting.,In my opinion,the Great Wall and the Summer Palace,.,3)Yesterday,we went to the East Gate,and we bought a lot of clothes.,Yesterday,we went to the East Gate,.,Whose slogan is One World,One Dream,was held in BJ,are the two places which are well worth visiting.,Where we bought a lot of clothes.,第9页,3.,主语从句,1)His wonderful performance on the stage impressed me.,most was his wonderful performance on the stage.,2)It satisfied me.Our school dining hall provides us with a large variety of kinds of dishes.,our school dining hall provides us with a large variety of kinds of dishes.,3)I learned from the story that as long as we have patience,confidence and perseverance,we can realize our dreams.,as long as we have patience,confidence and perseverance,we can realize our dreams.,What impressed me,What satisfied me is that,What I have learnt from the story is that,第10页,【,推荐句型,】,：,What surprisesastonishedsatisfiedimpressed me is that,What I would like to suggest advise put forward is that,What matters most is that,What I learnconclude from the story is that,第11页,4.,表语从句,【,推荐句型,】,：,is no longer what it used to be.,我故乡不再像以前那样了。,My hometown is no longer what it used to be.,第12页,5.,状语从句,【,推荐句型,】,结果、程度,sothat;such that,让步,no matter how what when where.=whatever,however,whenever,wherever,时间,was doingwhen,第13页,1),不论前面有多少困难，我们都要学会独立克服他们。,we should learn to overcome them independently.,2),我正沿着马路走，突然我听到有些人叫我。,I,along the road,suddenly I heard my name called.,No matter how many difficulties there are ahead of us,was walking,when,第14页,七、将两个简单句合并为一个由,which,引导非限制性定语从句,操作难度写作效果,1.Recently many middle school students spend their money on unnecessary things.Different people have different opinions about it.,Recently many middle school students spend their money on unnecessary things,about,different people have different opinions.,2.Many boys learn to smoke.It does harm to their health.,Many boys learn to smoke,.,which,Which does harm to their health.,第15页,八、,It,作形式主语或形式宾语句型,操作难度写作效果,1.You pretend to know what you dont know.Its no good.,2.It is easy to get on with Pam.I find,.,Its no good pretending to know what you dont know.,I find it easy to get on with Pam.,第16页,九、分词结构代替状语从句,操作难度写作效果,1.If you work harder,you will do better in the exam next time.,you will do better in the exam next time.,2.Because my friend was frightened of losing his job,he said nothing to the police.,my friend said nothing to the police.,Working hard,Frightened of losing his job,第17页,十、,with,引导短语或者复合结构,操作难度 写作效果,With+,宾语,+adj./adv./,介词短语,/to dodoingdone,惯用句型,with a population of.,with a total area of,with a long history of years,第18页,1),这个地域占地,平方千米，人口,10,万。,This area covers an area of square kilometers,.,2),我们学校周围种了很多花和树，吸引了大量学生来参观。,it attracts a large number of people.,3,）没有做完作业，这个小孩不敢去上学。,the boy dared not go to school.,4),这两个男人早早就睡了，蜡烛烧了一个晚上。,The two men went to bed early,.,with a population of 100,000,.,With so many trees and flowers surrounding our school,.,with candles burning a night long,With homework not finished,第19页,实战操演：,最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织一场讨论。讨论主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你依据下表提供信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。,60%同学认为,1、不应收门票,2、公园是公众休闲地方,3、如收票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象,40%同学认为,1、应收门票，但票价不宜高2、支付园林工人工资,3、购新花木,注意：,1,、信开头已为你写好,2,、词数：,100,左右。,3,、参考词汇：门票：,entrance fee,第20页,1,60,同学,认为,公园,不应该,收费。,Sixty percent of the students,think,that the park should not charge entrance fees,Sixty percent of the students,hold the view that,entrance fees,should not be charged,被动句,Sixty percent of the students,have the idea that,people should,be allowed to,enter parks without charge.,In the opinion of,60,of the students,people can enter parks for free,第21页,2,公园是公众休闲地方。,A park is a place for the public to rest and enjoy themselves,A park is a place where people rest and relax,定语从句,第22页,3,如,收门票,，需建大门,围墙，会,影响,城市形象。,If entrance fees are charged,it will be necessary to build gates and walls,which will affect the appearance of the city,（,which,指代上文）,With entrance fees charged,it will be necessary to build gates and walls,which will do harm to the appearance of the city,第23页,4,40,同学认为应收门票，但票价不宜高,。,40,of the students think that entrance fees are necessary,but the prices should not be high,There are 40,of the students who think that entrance fees should be charged,but fees should be low,（定语从句）,In the opinion of 40,of the students,entrance fees should be charged low,第24页,5,门票收入支付园林工人工资,购置新花木。,The income from entrance fees,is used to,pay the gardeners and buy new plants and flowers,The money from entrance fees,is made use of,to pay garden workers and buy new plants,With money from entrance fees,the gardeners are paid and new plants as well as young trees are bought,（,With,短语）（被动句）,第25页,Dear Editor,.,Opinions are divided on the question.,60%of the students are against the idea of entrance fees.They believed a public park should be free of charge.People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves.Without doubt,Charging entrance fees will keep some people away.,What is more,it will become necessary to build gates and walls,which will do harm to the appearance of a city.,On the other hand,40%think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers and to buy plants and young trees.They suggest,however,fees should be charged low.,第26页,