高考英语作文讲解.ppt

高考英语作文高考英语作文高考英语作文高考英语作文常见错误剖析及写作常见错误剖析及写作常见错误剖析及写作常见错误剖析及写作2024/4/17 周三1.学生英语作文中学生英语作文中10种常见错误剖析种常见错误剖析 1、汉语式思维Seethefilmwilltookmemuchtime.Hehappenedanaccidentyesterday.2、谓语缺失 Hetoldmethatallmyclassmatessittingintheclassroom.Sheintheclassroomyesterday.3、Therebe句型出错Therearefivestudentsplaybasketballontheplayground.Therearesomeworkersareworkinginthefield.(Seeing)(Anaccidenthappenedtohimyesterday.)werewasFive2024/4/17 周三2.6、非谓语动词出错Beingseriouslyill,hisclass-matessenthimtohospital.Seeingfromthespace,theearthlookslikeaball.学生英语作文中学生英语作文中10种常见错误剖析种常见错误剖析 4、谓语动词用法出错Hedressedinanewcoat.Greatchangeshavebeentakenplace.WhenIarrivedHongKong,mymotherwastherewaitingforme.Hedidntnoticetheteachertocomeintotheclassroom.5、词性混用SheenjoysstudyEnglish.Ifanyoneagainsttheplan,pleaseletmeknow.isin(studying)isAsheisseriouslyill,(Seen)2024/4/17 周三3.学生英语作文中学生英语作文中10种常见错误剖析种常见错误剖析 7、分数与百分数作主语Inourclass,20%sthdentsaregirls,butthreefifthsstudentsareboys.8、定语从句错误Thetwoboysarereadingaremybrothers.ThebookIboughtitislost.Illneverforgetthedayswhenwespentinthevillagetogether.9、连词出错Althoughhetried,buthestillcouldntkeepupwiththeothers.Mysuggestioniswetryforasecondtime.10、形容词、副词混用Thepatientappearednervouslywhenhetalkedtothedoctor.Theartistworkedhardlytofinishhisdrawingsontime.oftheofthewhothatthatnervoushard2024/4/17 周三4.DearSue,ImLiHua,isoneofyourstudentsinChina.Itsalmostamonthsinceyouleftus.Weallverymissyouandareverygratefulforyoudidforus.Wearebusyasusually.WehadanEnglishspeechcontesttheotherday.Iwonthefirstprize.Thisagainremindsmeofallyourkindhelp.Doyoustillrememberthetreesweplantedthemtogetheronthehillbehindtheschool?Yesterday,wewentthereandwaterthem.Thetreeyouplantedyourselfisgrowinggood,andthewholeclassdecidedtonameitSueWood.WillyoucomebackseeSueWood?Howiseverythingwithyoulately?WehopetoknowmoreaboutyouwithyourAmeicanstudents.Hopetokeepinclosetouch.Allthebest,LiHua作文修改作文修改 whatusual-edwelltoand2024/4/17 周三5.实例写作实例写作(2010全国)假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter曾表示希望来中国教书。你校现需招聘外教，请给他写封信，告诉招聘信息。内容主要包括：1教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等2授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础）3工作量：每周12学时，任选三门课担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问（advisor）注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信写出来。DearPeter,IrememberyoutoldmeyouwereinterestedinteachinginChina._Best,Lihua2024/4/17 周三6.写作技巧点拨写作技巧点拨 1、提纲式作文为半开放型写作。2、要点均为45个（多为4+1个要点），要点提示比较简洁，考生111有发散思维的空间；3、英语作文多为三段式：1para.Topic sentence(main idea,writers attitude)2nd para.Body(different points)3rd para.Ending(writers own idea)4、尽量避免第一印象词汇出现5、好的连词与表达法的使用。2024/4/17 周三7.提炼文章要点提炼文章要点理解每个要点的含义，然后讨论每个要点的正理解每个要点的含义，然后讨论每个要点的正确表达方式。确表达方式。形成文章。形成文章。2024/4/17 周三8.范文DearPeter,IrememberyoutoldmeyouwereinterestedinteachinginChina.Ourschoolislookingforanative-speakertoteachsomecoursestoseniorhighstudents.Ifyoudliketocome,youcanchoosethreeofthefollowingfourcourses:Speaking,Writing,BritainTodayandAmericaToday,andteach12periodsaweek.ThestudentswhoaregoingtotakethesecourseshaveatleastthreeyearsofEnglishlearningexperiences.Besidesteaching,youwillalsoworkasanadvisorforourstudentsEnglishcluborourschoolsEnglishnewspaper.Pleaseletmeknowifyouareinterestedandifyouhaveanyotherdecisions.Best,Lihua2024/4/17 周三9.