高中英语作文-概要写作入门.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,Summary Writing,1,阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇,60,词左右的内容概要。,We shouldnt judge a person by their appearance but we do.In fact,the experts say that when we meet someone for the first time we make a decision about what that person is like in three seconds.But what do we look at?One of the most important things is clothes,but it isnt the brand of clothes that people wear that is important.The important thing is to wear the right clothes for the occasion.,Schools have always understood this and a lot of them ask their students to wear a uniform.Why?A lot of teachers think a uniform makes students feel that they are part of their school and that their uniform helps them to be serious about their studies.Teachers say that uniforms can help in other ways too.If all the students wear uniforms,they cant judge each other because of their clothes.It also avoids arguments about who or what is fashionable.,However,it is not only schools that want people to dress in a certain way.We all have fixed ideas about what the people in a certain profession should wear.If we visit a doctor,we expect to see respectable clothes under the doctors white coat.When we go into a bank we expect the staff to wear suits or dresses.Police officers wear uniforms to deter crime by establishing a visible presence while on patrol,to make themselves easily identifiable to non-police officers or their colleagues who require assistance,and to quickly identify each other at crime scenes for ease of coordination.In fact,a lot of companies have dress codes for their staff because they know that the customers expect to see them dressed in certain types of clothes.,But can our clothes really tell people what we are like?Maybe not,but they can show our attitude to what we are doing at the moment.When people see us in the right clothes,they think we are serious about what we are doing.Furthermore,if we are clean,smart and polite,people will have confidence in us.,Para.1,Para.3,Para.2,Para.4,2,What is a,Summary,?,A,shortened,passage(60words),Retain the,key points,of the original one,A restatement,in your own words,A readable continuous,whole,3,Original Passage,Summary,4,Reading for Structure,How many parts can we divide the passage?,Para 1,：,Part1,argument,para2:evidence/example,para3:evidence/example,Part 2 supporting,para4:,Part3,conclusion,5,How to Get,Key Points,?,3.,1.,:,topic sentence,2.:topic sentence+,examples,supporting,ideas,Find,Combine,Summarize,6,Read for Key Points,Para.1,We shouldnt judge a person by their appearance but we do.In fact,the experts say that when we meet someone for the first time we make a decision about what that person is like in three seconds.But what do we look at?One of the most important things is clothes,but it isnt the brand of clothes that people wear that is important.The important thing is to wear the right clothes for the occasion.,_,_,_,_,Point 1,7,Read for Key Points,Para.2,Schools have always understood this and a lot of them ask their students to wear a uniform.Why?A lot of teachers think a uniform makes students feel that they are part of their school and that their uniform helps them to be serious about their studies.Teachers say that uniforms can help in other ways too.If all the students wear uniforms,they cant judge each other because of their clothes.It also avoids arguments about who or what is fashionable.,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,Point 2,8,Read for Key Points,Para.3,However,it is not only schools that want people to dress in a certain way.We all have fixed ideas about what the people in a certain profession should wear.If we visit a doctor,we expect to see respectable clothes under the doctors white coat.When we go into a bank we expect the staff to wear suits or dresses.Police officers wear uniforms to deter crime by establishing a visible presence while on patrol,to make themselves easily identifiable to non-police officers or their colleagues who require assistance,and to quickly identify each other at crime scenes for ease of coordination.In fact,a lot of companies have dress codes for their staff because they know that the customers expect to see them dressed in certain types of clothes.,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,Point 3,_,_,9,Read for Key Points,Para.4,But can our clothes really tell people what we are like?Maybe not,but they can show our attitude to what we are doing at the moment.When people see us in the right clothes,they think we are serious about what we are doing.Furthermore,if we are clean,smart and polite,people will have confidence in us.,_,_,_,_,_,_,Point 4,10,List the,Key Points,Para.,Key points,1,But what do we look at?One of the most important things is clothes.The important thing is to wear the right clothes for the occasion.,2,Schools ask their students to wear a uniform.Why?A lot of teachers think a uniform makes students feel that they are part of their school and that their uniform helps them to be serious about their studies.Teachers say that uniforms can help in other ways too.,3,However,it is not only schools that want people to dress in a certain way.visit a doctorgo into a bank Police officers a lot of companies,4,but they can show our attitude to what we are doing at the moment.Furthermore,people will have confidence in us.,11,Paraphrase(say or write in a different way),Alex likes playing football and he likes basketball,too.,Alex likes playing,not only,football,but also,basketball.,Not only,does Alex like playing foortball,but also,basketball.,Not only is,Alex,fond of,football but also.,In addition to football,Alex loves playing.,.,12,How to,Paraphrase?,2.use synonyms(,同义,),3.summarize examples(,概括,),bine sentences(,并句,),4.sometimes change the voice(,语态,),1.change the sentence structure(,句型,),13,List the,Key Points,Para.,Key points,1,But what do we look at?One of the most important things is clothes.The important thing is to wear the right clothes for the occasion.,2,Schools ask their students to wear a uniform.Why?A lot of teachers think a uniform makes students feel that they are part of their school and that their uniform helps them to be serious about their studies.Teachers say that uniforms can help in other ways too.,3,However,it is not only schools that want people to dress in a certain way.visit a doctorgo into a bank Police officers a lot of companies,4,but they can show our attitude to what we are doing at the moment.Furthermore,people will have confidence in us.,14,Paraphrase,Key Points,Key point 1,But what do we look at?One of the most important things is clothes.The important thing is to wear the right clothes for the occasion.,Paraphrase,1.Wearing the right clothes is important,because,people look at our clothes.,2.Wearing the right clothes for the occasion is important,if,we want to,leave good first impressions,.,3.Wearing,proper,clothes is important for first impressions.,15,Paraphrase,Key Points,Key point 2,Schools ask their students to wear a uniform.Why?A lot of teachers think a uniform makes students feel that they are part of their school and that their uniform helps them to be serious about their studies.Teachers say that uniforms can help in other ways too.,Paraphrase,1.Schools ask students to wear a uniform,because,it helps them in many ways,such as,being serious about their study.,2.Students,are required to,wear a uniform because it,benefits,in,various,ways,such as being serious about their study.,16,Paraphrase,Key Points,Key point 3,However,it is not only schools that want people to dress in a certain way.visit a doctorgo into a bank Police officers a lot of companies,Paraphrase,1.However,not only,schools,but also,places,such as,hospitals,banks,police stations and some companies want people to dress in a certain way.,2.,Besides,students,other people who work for hospitals,banks,police stations and some companies,are also supposed to,wear uniforms,because of convenience,.,17,Paraphrase,Key Points,Key point 4,but they can show our attitude to what we are doing at the moment.Furthermore,people will have confidence in us.,Paraphrase,1.Our clothes can show our attitude,and,make people have confidence in us.,2.Our clothes,represent,our attitude and help us,win trust from,others.,18,How to,Connect?,but,yet,however,though,.,as well as,in addition,to,not,only.but,also,together,with,besides,moreover,futhermore,.,thus,therefore,，,as a,result,consequently,.,meanwhile,on,the other,hand,on,the,contrary,contrast,with,.,firstly/secondly/finally/.,because(of),due,to,in,view,of,on,account of,.,for example/,instance,such,as,and,so on,in short,in,conclusion,in,a,word,all,in all.,19,Connect,Key Points,Point1,Wearing proper clothes is important for first impressions.,Point2,Schools ask students to wear a uniform because it helps them in many ways,such as being serious about their study.,Point3,Besides schools,other places,like hospitals,banks,police stations and some companies also want their staff to wear uniforms because of convenience.,Point4,Our clothes represent our attitude and help us win trust from others.,For example,In conclusion,20,Write,and,Edit,Wearing proper clothes is important for peoples first impressions.(,要点,1)For example,Schools ask students to wear a uniform because it benefits them in various ways.(,要点,2)Besides schools,other places,like hospitals,banks,police stations and some companies also want their staff to dress in uniforms because of convenience and seriousness.(,要点,3)In conclusion,our clothes can show our attitude and win confidence from others.(,要点,4)(67,词,),21,How to Write a Good Summary?,connect,the key points with proper words;,1.read,2.paraphrase,3.connect,4.write,read,two or three times,to find,the key points;,rewrite,the key points;,write,a draft and,edit,it.,22,Homework,Finish writing the summary and polish it.,Read the passage on A4 of the newspaper(7)and write,a summary,paying attention to the procudures of writing a summary.,23,