初中英语基础写作.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Basic Writing,时间分配,题型,题量,赋分,时间（分钟）,基础写作,1,15,10,基础写作的命题特点：,考生按所给的内容及要求，用,5,个规范的英语句子描述所,给信息的全部内容，并组成连贯的短文。,简而言之，考查考生整理信息和组词造句成文的能力。,对于书面表达的要求：,1.,Cover all the language points,and given information.,覆盖所有的语言要点,Avoid grammar mistakes and wrong spelling,应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性,3.coherent,tight,上下文的连贯性,即有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。,4.use the words properly,语言的,得体性,5.Write your article clearly,.,6.,Mind the number of your sentences,.,To make the article tight,graceful and clear.,To avoid using repetitive words or expressions.,表达时尽量用一些较高级的词汇，避免使用重复的词语，使语言不至于单纯和幼稚。也可以给文章增添亮点。,（,2,）,To use some transitional words,恰当选用过渡词，使文章紧凑，流畅。,(3)To use more sentence patterns,such as inverted,order,emphasis,a compound sentence or a participle adverbial,适当使用多种句型，注意语言的丰富性，多样化，以,变化多端的形式来表现丰富多彩的内容。,Basic writing skills,Ways of writing,good sentences,方法一,.,一句多译,As soon as,we arrived at the village,we were warmly welcomed by the,villagers.,On arriving,at the village,，,we were,warmly.,The moment,we arrived at the,village,we were,We were warmly welcomed by the,villagers,immediately,we arrived,at the village.,No sooner,had we arrived at the,village,than,we,Hardly,had we arrived at the,village,when,we.,Use different ways to describe the picture,方法一,.,一句多译,一,就受到欢迎,As soon as,Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport,they were warmly welcomed.,On arriving,at the airport,Lien Chan and his wife,Lien Chan and his wife were warmly welcomed,the moment/,immediately,they arrived at the airport.,No sooner,had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport,than,they were,Hardly,had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport,when,they were,方法一,.,一句多译,Practice,一句多译,这本书花了我,300,元。,I spent 300,yuan,on the book.,I paid 300,yuan,for the book.,The price of the book is 300,yuan,.,It cost me 300,yuan,to buy the book.,The book cost me 300,yuan,.,Practice,一句多译,昨天下午他才来。,He came here yesterday afternoon,.,He didnt come here until yesterday afternoon.,It was yesterday afternoon that he arrived here.,It was not until yesterday afternoon that he came here.,Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here.,Rewrite the sentences,方法二,.,使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档,（,1,）,Most of the artists who had been invited to the party were from South Africa.,Most of the artists,invited,to the party were from South Africa.,（,2,）,Nowadays the old people often do morning exercises in the park in order that they could keep healthy.,Nowadays the old people often do morning exercises in the park,to keep,healthy.,方法二,.,使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档,Complete the sentences with non-predicate(,非谓语动词,),听到这个消息,他们变的很激动,.,_,the news,they got excited.,2.,尽管被告知许多遍,他仍然重复这个错,.,_,many times,he still repeated the mistake.,3.,除非被邀请发言,你应该在会议上保持沉默,.,Unless _to speak,you should keep silent at the meeting.,Hearing,Having been told,invited,Translate the following sentences by using non-predicate(,非谓语动词,),1,面对困难时，他从不放弃。,2,，引入市场后，该产品大获成功。,3,，,做完作业后，他回家了,。,Faced with/Facing difficulties,he never gives up.,Introduced to the market,the product made a great success.,Having finished his homework,he returned,home.,方法三,.,丰富的句式,Describe the character by using Inverted Sentence(,倒装句,),Poor as/though he was,he was happy.,方法三,.,丰富的句式,Sentence patterns Are Always Useful,The dog jumped into the river and pulled the girl to the bank.,It,was the dog,that,jumped into the river and pulled the girl to safety.,The square is near the Great Wall Hotel.,Near,the Great Wall Hotel is the square.,You will have to work hard for years to speak good English.,It,will,take,years of hard work,to speak good English.,I failed in the exam again.,What disappointed me most was that I failed in the exam again.,Miss Li will give us a report soon.,Miss Li,who has a wide knowledge of English,will give us a report soon.,We all like Jim.,We all like Jim,who is always ready to help others.,We all like Jim because of his helpfulness and kindness.,1.To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.,（,使用名词性从句）,2.Though Im weak,Ill make the effort.(,使用倒装句,),3.He did not know what had happened,until he had read the news in the newspaper,.(,使用强调句型,),4.I passed the physics exam because of your help.(,用虚拟语气）,What,surprises him,is that,the little girl knows so many things.,Practice,怎样使用较丰富的句式,Weak as I am,Ill make the effort.,It was,not until he had read the news in the newspaper,that,he knew what had happened.,I,couldnt have passed,the physics exam,but for,your help.,5.I wont believe what he says.,（,使用状语从句）,6,.,If you study hard,you will make rapid progress.,（,用并列句）,7,He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.,(,使用倒装句,),No sooner had he come,back from Beijing,than,he was sent abroad.,No matter what he says,I wont believe.,Study hard,and,youll make rapid progress.,Use different ways to describe one sentence.,Make,sentences by using non-predicate.,3.Sentence patterns are always useful,Summaries:,Practice,此四幅画描述了,爱鸟周活动中李,明某一天所经历,的事，由此写一,篇文章。,要求：,1,必须使用,5,个句子,表达图画内容。,2,将,5,个句子组成,连贯的短文。,步骤一,审题,narration,past tense,the third person,time order,writing style:,tense:,person:,order:,caught a bird,fixed a string to it,a girl look for mother,a police comfort her,步骤二 要点,send her home,lost in thought,set the bird free,feel happy,步骤二 要点,步骤三,.,扩展成句，连句成篇,1.One day,Li Ming,caught a bird and,fixed a string to it.,2.He saw a girl cry,looking for her,mum and a police-,man comfort her.,3.The policeman,sent,the girl home,and Li Ming was,lost in thought.,4.Li Ming set the,bird free and felt,very happy.,步骤四,.,仔细检查，认真修改,查是否遗漏要点，信息是否完整，,尤其是：人物、地点、时间、发生什么事、,如何发生、怎样进行等方面是否遗漏。,查体裁格式是否正确。,查句式使用是否科学得当。,查叙述的顺序是否颠倒。,查过渡词是否使用合理。,查时态、语态是否一致正确。,查书写和标点符号是否规范清晰。,查字数是否符合要求。,bye bye,Please finish the composition after class.,