2020年中考英语作文总复习题及答案解析.doc

2020年中考英语作文总复习题
1．Writer a passage of at least 60 words on the topic " _______Makes My life Better "． （以" ______使我的生活更美好 " 为题， 写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文， 标点符号表不占格．）
要求：
补全作文标题
短文中不得出现考生的姓名，校名及其他相关信息， 否则不予评分．
【分析】高分句型一：
When I started middle school，I was weak in English 此句是一般过去时的复合句．是由when引导的时间状语从句，意思是"当…的时候"，be weak in是一个固定短语，意思是：在某方面很差．因此此句可翻译为" 当我上中学的时候，我的英语很薄弱．"
高分句型二
I often wrote English stories． and shared them with my teachers and classmates．此句是一般过去时的陈述句．运用短语share…with…"和…分享"，此句可翻译为"我经常写英语故事，并和老师与同学们一起分享它们．"
【解答】Learning English well Makes My life Better．
Although the life of junior three is tense，尽管三年的生活很紧张． but learning English well makes my life better．（要点一，点明要点）．Now my English has greatly improved．When I started middle school，I was weak in English （高分句型一）．My English teacher encouraged me and gave me some advice．my classmates helped me．Then I began to work hard on it and was fond of it．I often took part in some activities about English and enjoyed myself． I not only listened more carefully in class but also read a lot of books about English in my spare time，Besides，I often watch English movies on TV or computer．I can learn about the culture and the local condition all over the world． I often wrote English stories． and shared them with my teachers and classmates．（高分句型二）（要点二，如何学习英语的及学好英语使我的生活更美好．）．
Now I'm more interested in English and I get higher grades．I'm pleased with English and thankful to my English teacher and my classmates．I really feel that learning English well makes my life better．（要点三，学好英语的感受．）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务

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