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一、动作描写:构造“动作链”和编织”动作面”
句式1:A, B and C
她上了出租车。 她喊了一辆出租车,跳进去然后告诉司机目的地。
She hailed a taxi, jumped into it and told the driver the destination.
她发表获奖感言。 她瞥了一眼奖杯,深吸一口气,说道“谢谢图图”。
She glanced at the trophy, took a deep breath and said,”Thank you TuTu!
句式2:After doing A, B and C.
After glancing at the trophy, she took a deep breath and said,”Thank you TunTun!
句式2:Having done(强调该动作先于谓语动作发生)
“拿肉扔狼” 他先拿出肉,瞄准狼,径直扔向这只凶狠的动物。
Having pulled up the meat, he aimed at the wolf and threw it straight at the fierce animal.
句式3:Doing..., 主句,doing...
围在营火旁,他们吃着烧烤,享受这一令人难忘的时光。
Gathering around the campfire, they feasted on BBQ (吃着烧烤), enjoying the unforgettable moment.
句式4:Done...,主语, doing...
被老师的话所鼓舞,Lucy举起了手,小声说,“我来。”
Encouraged by the teacher’s words, Lucy raised her hand, whispering, “I’ll do it.”
被眼前的这一幕吓坏了,他一动不动,不知道该说什么。
Terrified/Frightened by the scene in front of him, he was rooted to the spot, being at a loss (茫然不知所措)what to say.
句式5:主句,doing...and doing...
他欣喜若狂,在雨中又唱又跳。
He was overwhelmed with joy, singing and dancing in the rain.
句式6:(with)...doing/done...,主句, doing...
他头耷拉着,背靠在树上,反思之前发生的一切。
(With) his head drooping, he leaned on the tree, reflecting on what had happened.
必背句
1)肢体动作积累一
1. 奥利芙冲进屋,抓起她的手提袋,又跑了出来。
Olive dashed into the room, grabbed her bag, and ran out again.
2. 我趁她不注意时, 偷偷从后门溜了进去。
I managed to slip in through the back door while she wasn't looking.
3. 我们在群山、河流构成的美丽画卷中漫步。
We wandered through a landscape of mountains and rivers.
4. 她走到女儿身边,紧紧地拥抱她。
She went to her daughter and hugged her tightly.
5. 当问他为什么要这样做,他只是耸耸肩走开了。
When I asked him why he had done it, he just shrugged his shoulders and walked away.
6. 她交叉着双臂盯着他。
She crossed her arms and stared at him.
7.我能感到我的心怦怦直跳,我的掌心在冒汗。
I could feel my heart thumping wildly and my palm sweating.
2)肢体动作积累二
1.我父亲直直地盯着我的眼睛并且牢牢抓住我的双手。
1.My father looked at me straight in the eye and held my hands firmly.
2.听到一阵噪声,汤姆好奇地把头探出了窗外。(pop)
On hearing a burst of noise, Tom popped his head out of the window with curiosity.
3.我停在原地,吓得发抖。
I stopped where I was,trembling with shock.
5.那个兴高采烈的男孩笑着蹦蹦跳跳地进了房间(bound)。
The boy with a cheery face bounded into the room,laughing.
6.我吓得说不出话来,动弹不得。
I was speechless with horror and unable to move.
3)肢体动作积累三
1.他耷拉着脑袋,眼泪滴落在大脚上。droop 耷拉
His head drooped and tears fell into his lap.
2.他只喝了一杯就觉得天旋地转。spin [spin] 旋转;眩晕
He could feel his head spinning after only one drink.
3.在赢得比赛后,我们听到观众吼叫起来。roar 咆哮,吼叫
We could hear the audience roaring after winning the match.
4.我叫错他的名字后 ,后背突然冒冷汗了
I calling him the wrong name, a cold sweat broke out on my back .
5.他尖叫着让他妻子叫救护车。
He screamed for his wife to call an ambulance.
6.当我和我妈妈挥手告别的时候,我内心如水井般填满了泪。
Tears welled up from my heart as I waved my mom off.
7.这个年轻人挤出了一个微笑。
The young man squeezed a smile.
8.Fern无法把视线从这只迷你猪身上挪开。
Fern couldn’t take her eyes off the tiny pig.
9. I walked over to him, and patted him on the shoulder, encouraging,“Come on!”
我走向他,拍拍他的肩膀,鼓励道:“加油!”
二、心理描写
句式1:所有那些……的回忆都涌入了某人的脑海。
All those ... memories crowded into one’s mind.
All those old memory crowded into my mind when I saw the photo hanging on the wall.
当我看到挂在墙上的照片,所有的旧回忆都涌入脑海。
句式2 : 回想/反思……,某人……
Reflecting on... , sb...
Reflecting on what the old man had said to her, Kathy was trapped into endless sadness, tears streaming down her cheeks. 回想老人对她所说的话,Kathy陷入无尽的悲伤,眼泪顺着脸颊流下。
句式3: 某人突然想到……
It hit/struck/occurred to/dawned on sb. that...
It flashed through one’s mind that ...
It popped into one’s mind that ...
It hit/struck/occurred to/dawned on Steve that she could spend the weekend studying in the woods.
Steve突然想起他可以利用周末时间在小时林学习。
句式4 某人下定决心要……
Sb. made up his mind to do sth./that.../Sb. was determined to do sth./that...
From then on, I made up my mind/was determined to pass on love to other.
从那时起,我就下定决心把爱传递下去。
句式 5: 如果我(没有)……就好了(表后悔)
If only I had (not) done...
“If only I had listen to my parents’ words.”Tom murmured.
句式6: ……看到某物,某人感觉它好像在……并且说:
Seeing sth.,sb. felt as if it had been doing ... and saying...
Seeing the tent, I felt as if it had been sighing and saying,“I want to experience the outside world.”
看到帐篷,我感觉它好像在叹息,并且说:“我想要体验一下外面的世界。”
必背句
1. An idea flashed across his mind. 他脑子里闪过一个念头。
2An idea occurred to him. 他突然有了一个主意。
3.He looked out of the window, biting his lips, as if thinking.
他一边看着窗外,一边咬着嘴唇,仿佛在思考。
4.She was deep in thought and heard little of what was being said around her.
她在沉思,几乎听不见周围的话。
5.An idea/It suddenly occurred to/struck/hit the twins that (双胞胎突然想起)they could ask their dad for help.=It suddenly dawned on the twins that they could ask their dad for help.双胞胎突然想起她们可以向爸爸求助。
三、情感描写
句式1 (感到)……,某人……
Feeling+情绪,sb. .../(Being)+情绪,sb. ...
Feeling anxious/Being anxious/Anxiou, he paced up and down in the house.
他感到焦虑,在屋子里踱来踱去。
句式2某人如此……以至于(感觉好像……)
Sb. was so+情绪+that he/she (felt as if...).
So+情绪+was sb. that he/she (felt as if...).(倒装式)
Hearing this good news, so overjoyed was she that she jumped with happiness, with eyes sparkling like shining stars. 听到这个好消息,她是如此欣喜若狂以至于开心地跳起来,眼睛像星星般闪烁。
句式3 令某人…的是,
To sb.’s +情绪名词, sb...
To their great relief, their son returned safe and sound. 令他们欣慰的是,他们的儿子平安回来了。
句式4 出于某种情绪,某人……
Out of+情绪,sb. ...
Out of curiosity, I decided to meet the old lady in person. 出于好奇,我决定亲自见一下这个老太太。
句式5 某人……地……/某人因为……而……
sb...,with/非谓语动词/adj.+with+情绪或/With/非谓语动词/adj.+with+情绪, sb...
Frozen with fear, he couldn’t utter a word. 害怕地一动不动,他一个字也说不出来。
He was tongue-tied with anger. 他因生气而说不出话来。
句式6:内心充满某种情绪/被某种情绪占据
Sb. was overwhelmed/ overcome/ seized/ consumed/filled/bursting with+情绪
I was overwhelmed/seized/consumed/filled/bursting with horror, my palms sweating. 我内心被恐惧占据,手心出汗。
句式7:某人无法抑制...
Sb. couldn’t contain sb.s+情绪.
She couldn’t contain her joy. 他无法抑制内心的喜悦。
句式8:某人的声音/眼神/表情/行为中带着明显的……
There was apparent+情绪+in sb.’s voice/eyes/expression/behavior...
从某人的声音/眼神/表情/行为判断,很明显某人陷入了……之中
Judging from sb.’s voice/eyes/expression/behavior, it was evident that sb.was trapped in+情绪
Judging from Jonny’s voice, it was evident that he was trapped in sorrow.
从Jonny的声音判断,很明显他陷入悲伤之中。
句式9: 某人的情绪加深了
Sb.’s+情绪+deepened.
某人的情绪1战胜了情绪2
Sb.’s+情绪1+overcame+情绪2
某人的情绪1耗尽了,取而代之的是情绪2
Sb.’s+情绪1+faded/drained away and was replaced with+情绪2.
His excitement faded away, and was replaced with endless despair and worry.
他的兴奋耗尽了,取而代之的是无尽的绝望和担心。
句式10:某人感到一股强烈的……在内心升腾、奔涌。
Sb. felt a great sense of+情绪+ welling up in sb.’s heart and surging through sb.
Jessica felt a great sense of jealousy welling up in her heart and surging through her.
Jessica 感到一股强烈的嫉妒在内心升腾、奔涌。
某人感到一股混杂着……和……的情绪在内心升腾、奔涌
Sb. felt a mixture of+情绪1+and+情绪2+ welling up in sb.’s heart and surging through sb.
Seeing the helicopter in the distance, Jane felt a mixture of excitement and grievance welling up in her heart and surging through her. 当她看到远处的直升机,混杂者激动和委屈的情绪在Jane内心升腾、奔涌。
动作/“用心”传情
palms get sweaty 手心出汗→be nervous/scared/frightened紧张、害怕
tremble from head to toe浑身颤抖→be nervous/scared/frightened紧张、害怕
scratch one’s head 挠头→be confused/embarrassed困惑、尴尬
one’s jaw dropped 下巴掉了→be astonished at/惊讶、错愕
be on pins and needles 如坐针毡→be anxious/restless焦虑、不安
get a lump in the throat/one's throat tightened喉咙哽咽→be sad/moved伤心、感动
Those words chilled my heart. 那些话让我心寒。be disappointed
The scene warmed my heart. 这一幕让我心暖。be heart-warming
The song softened my heart. 歌声柔软了我的心。be moving/delightful
What he said pierced my heart. 他说的话刺痛了我的心。be heart-breaking
二、情绪描写
1)描写“无聊”的情绪
1. I lingered out there, without a thought. 我停留在那儿,毫无思绪。
2)描写“震惊”的情绪
1. His eyes became wide with surprise and astonishment.
他惊讶地睁大了眼睛。
3)描写“疑惑、迷茫”的情绪
1.With a confused look on his face, he had no idea what to do.
他露出疑惑的表情,不知道该做什么。
4)描写“感谢”的情绪
1.With grateful tears hanging in his eyes, he kept extending his gratitude, “Thank you so much!”
他眼中满是感激的泪水,不停地说:“非常感谢!”
5)描写“绝望”的情绪
1. Upon hearing the bad news, he was suddenly thrown into a world of darkness and sank into hopelessness.
听到这个坏消息,他(仿佛)突然被投入了黑暗世界,陷入了绝望中。
6)描写“冷静”的情绪
1.Taking a deep breath, I managed to calm down .我深吸一口气, 成功地让自己镇定。
7)描写“焦虑、紧张”的情绪
1.My heart began to race and my mind went blank.
我心跳开始加速,大脑一片空白。
8)描写“羞愧、难堪”的句子
1.He lowered his head in shame.
9 ) 描写“高兴”的句子
1.Her eyes twinkled with excitement.
10)描写“悲伤 绝望”的心理
1. A ripple of sadness welled up inside him.
他心中涌起阵阵悲伤。
2.With tears streaming down her face, words failed her.
眼泪顺着她的脸留下来,她说不出话来。
11)读后续写中描写“愤怒”的心理
1.His voice trembled with anger.
他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。
12)读后续写中描写“恐惧”的心理
1. A burst of horror held me totally and I was unable to move an inch.
恐惧喷薄而出,将我彻底包围,我已经寸步难行了。
四、语言描写(注意标点符号的用法)
1.说话人+说话内容
He said, “You are my best friend!”
2.说话内容+说话人
“Christine! Take care of your young brother!” Mother shouted at the top of her voice.
3.说话内容+说话人+说话内容
“There’s a Christmas wish contest on the newspaper,” Amy’s mom announced. “Write
a letter to Santa, and you might win a prize.”
五、各种“说”的表达
tell 告诉
ask 问
answer 回答
add 补充
shout 喊
reply 回答
state 陈述
whisper 轻声说
exclaim 呼喊
argue 争论
interrupt 打断
repeat 重复
claim 声称
complain 抱怨
explain 解释
insist 坚持
order命令
request 请求
demand 强烈要求
suggest 建议
recommend 推荐
announce 宣布
beg 请求
mock 嘲讽
apologize 道歉
murmur 低语
blurt out 脱口而出
六、环境描写
句式1:在…有一个…,在它的…有…
方位+lie/stand+景,介词+which is+物/人
In the center of the forest stands/lies a giant tree, beside which is a small cottage.
在森林中央有一棵巨树,它旁边有一座小木屋。
句式2:A充斥/点亮了B, 好似魔法般,B变成了C
A filled/ lit up B, which, as if by magic, had turned into C.
The smell of the popcorn filled/lit up the house, which, as if by magic, had turned into a bakery.
爆米花的香味弥漫了整个房子,仿佛变魔术似的,房子变成了面包房。
句式3:某物…,某人…
With sth. doing/ done, sb. ...
With the streets filled with the sound of firecrackers, people watched the Spring Festival Gala,exchanging anecdotes.
爆竹声充斥大街小巷,人们看着春晚,分享着趣闻。
句式4:随着(情况恶化),某人快要崩渍了,完全不知道该怎么办。
As/With+(情况恶化), sb. was on the edge of breaking down, totally at a loss what to do.
As the wolf glared at him fiercely outside the car, Mac was on the edge of breaking down, totally at a loss what to do.
With the wolf glaring at him fiercely outside the car, Mac was on the edge of breaking down, totally at a loss what to do.
随着这只狼在车外恶狠狠地怒视着他,Mac快要崩溃了,完全不知道该怎么办。
句式5:在A的对比下(在…中),B显得…
Against A,B ...
Against the noise in the shopping mall, these soft words uttered from her mouth sounded so clear to me.
在商场的嘈杂声中,她嘴里说出这些温柔的话语,在我听来却格外清晰。
句式6:沐浴在…中,其他人在…, 而某人却在动作1,动作2
Bathed in+天气/气氛,others were... , while sb.did... , doing...
Bathed in wonderful sunshine, other students were busy chatting and taking photos with their teachers, while Steven was sitting quietly on his chair, drawing something.
在美妙的阳光下,其他同学都在忙着聊天,和老师拍照,而Steven却安静地坐在椅子上,画着什么东西。
必背句
1. The howl of animals and the whistling wind in the distance added to her fear.
远处动物的嚎叫声和呼啸的风声加剧了她的恐惧。
2.Like a lamp,the moon shone from above.The stars twinkled their eyes with curiosity.
月亮在天空中好像一盏夜灯,闪烁的星好奇地眨着眼睛。
3. The river glitters in the sunshine.阳光下河面波光粼粼。
4.The wind was getting up and it was becoming cloudy.
风越来越大,天空开始乌云密布。
5. The clouds parted and the sun shone.
云散开了,太阳出来了。
6.The hills were bathed in the sunshine.
山丘沐浴在阳光下。
7.Blue sky stood tall and far,and the sun was burning my back.
晴空万里,火热的太阳晒得我后背发烫。
七、主旨升华句
1.from then on + 行动
From then on, I made up my mind to pass on “love” to others. Just as a saying goes : “ Roses given, fragrance in hand. ” 从那以后,我下定决心向别人传递“爱”。俗话说:“玫瑰予人,手留余香。”(2020.7高考山东卷)
我恍然大悟,那一刻的善良对另一个人来说意义重大,而一个简单的行为可以使世界变得如此美好。
2.It hit/struck/occurred to/dawned on sb that +感悟
It dawned on/occurred to me that a moment of kindness could mean so much to another, and that a simple act could make the world so much better. 我恍然大悟,那一刻的善良对另一个人来说意义重大,而一个简单的行为可以使世界变得如此美好。
1.It's never too late to learn. Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make more attempts.
学习永远为时不晚。每个人都应该并且有权利去接受更多的挑战,做更多的尝试。
2.Actually, every individual possesses talent. Be brave when you find it and also make efforts. You can create miracles in the end.
事实上,每个人都有天赋,发现它的时候要勇敢,也要付出努力,最终你会创造奇迹。
3.The journey to success is full of challenges and difficulties. As long as we don’t give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties, we will surely achieve our goal finally.
通往成功的路,充满挑战和艰辛。只要不放弃希望并竭尽全力克服所有困难,我们最终会实现我们的目标。
4.Determination and optimism are what it takes to conquer your fear and accomplish your goal.
战胜恐惧和实现目标,需要决心和乐观。
结果+难忘的经历+体悟
1.Finally, we succeeded. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there’s always a way out of any dilemma as long as we never give up hope.
最后,我们成功了。多么难忘的经历啊!事实证明,只要我们不放弃希望 ,就总有办法摆脱困境。
2.Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way. 直到那时,我才意识到,正是勇敢才能克服一切困难。
3.It was this unique experience that made me understand whatever difficult we are faced with, we mustn’t give up our hope.
正是这种独特的经历使我明白了无论我们面临什么困难,我们都不能放弃希望。
1.It was on that very day that I truly realized the value of sincerity and honesty in friendship.
在那一天,我真正意识到真诚和诚实在友谊中的价值。
2.It was on that very day that I truly realized the most important thing in life is to spend time with family.
就在那一天,我真正意识到生命中最重要的事情就是和家人在一起。
3.It dawned on me that the affection towards our family is like a touch of green tea, refreshing and heartwarming.
我突然感悟到,那份亲情像一抹清茶,沁人心脾,温暖人心。
4.Speechless and happy, she held her son tightly to her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.
她高兴得说不出话来,把儿子紧紧地抱在怀里,眼里噙满了泪水。
首尾呼应
开头:It was summer and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
那是夏天,我爸爸想像以前一样请我去度假。 他决定带我去西部荒野之旅。
结尾:Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The special trip to the Wild West was deeply rooted in my mind.
我从来没有过这么刺激又危险的假期。那次去西部的特别旅行,深深地印在我的脑海里。
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