最近几年四级作文真题及述评(课堂PPT).ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,2,#,最近几年四级作文真题及评述,1,2,2014.6,【,作文,(,一,)】,关于家乡,Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to visit your,hometown,what is the place would you show him or her and why.,【,作文,(,二,)】,关于中国,Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to visit your,China,what is the place would you show him or her and why.,【,作文,(,三,)】,关于校园,Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to visit your,campus,what is the place would you show him or her and why.,2,2025/4/29 周二,属于偏而不难，他的本质肯定是我们学习过的东西。,这次的题目，首先你要明确一点，这道题并不是要求你写书信的形式，而是如果一个你的外国朋友来到中国，你想去推荐他去哪的文章，所以审题一定要想清楚。,中间段，介绍原因，万能理由,我们推崇的并不是语言模板，而是思维模板。在这次的作文中，我们想理由可以从便捷、环境、健康、经济等等几个方面入手。,3,2025/4/29 周二,2014.12,今年主要有三个话题,:,分别是,A course that has impressed you most in college(,大学中给你印象最深的一门课,);A campus activity that has benefited most(,使你受益最深的一项校园活动,)A classmate of yours who has influenced you most in college(,大学中对你影响最深的一位同学,);,4,2025/4/29 周二,这三个话题均为我们所熟悉的话题性作文，写作手法可以采用叙议结合的方式，完成难度相对较低。,5,2025/4/29 周二,2015.6,6,2025/4/29 周二,【,作文,(,二,),：手机与教育,】,7,2025/4/29 周二,8,2025/4/29 周二,第一，易审题，延续了上一次四级写作考试“反押题”的倾向。,作文的主题非常开放而明显，基本上不存在跑题的问题，所有考生均可表达自己的观点。,第二，重语言，主题明确，考生比拼的就是“语言质量”本身。,一篇不再“假大空”的文章，注定不需要使用太多“大而华丽的空洞语言、口号语言”，而在于考生能否灵活运用一些基础词汇和固定表达，写出语法正确、语言流畅的文章。同学们比拼的是驾驭英语语言本身的能力，对词汇、语法、固定句型套用的熟练程度和精采程度。,第三，技巧和能力并重。,宗旨，多背，多写，背好，写好，总能够在考场上有话好说，有分可拿。,第四，目前的题目是描述与议论文并重。,这次的考试其实更多的是重在考生的思考问题、发表评论、写议论文的能力。这样的话题涉及的面比较广、话题比较正式，作文考的是你真正的语言描述和议论点能力。,9,2025/4/29 周二,2015.12,第一篇作文题目是：,Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying“Never go out there to see what happens,go out there to make something happen”You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of being creative rather than mere onlookers in life.You should write at least 120 words,no more than 180 words.,10,2025/4/29 周二,第二篇作文题目是：,Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying Learning is a daily experience and a lifetime mission.”You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of lifelong learning.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.,11,2025/4/29 周二,第三篇作文题目是：,Writing,Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying“Listening is more important than talking.”You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of listening.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.,12,2025/4/29 周二,类型：人生哲理类，话题方面均强调树立积极乐观向上、正面努力的观点的重要性，话题密切联系现实，具有一定教育启示意义。,没有考察“热点”的“环境、文化、网络”等大话题，而是“平民草根、接地气”的人生哲理类,13,2025/4/29 周二,2016.6,Writing,Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to express your thanks to one of your friends who helped you most when you were in difficulty.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.,14,2025/4/29 周二,【,作文二题目：写感谢老师的信,】,Writing,For this part,，,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to express your thanks to one of your school teachers upon entering college,。,You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words,。,15,2025/4/29 周二,【,作文三题目：写感谢家人的信,】,Writing,Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to express your thanks to your parents or any other family member upon making a memorable achievement.,You should write st least 120 words but no more than 180 words.,16,2025/4/29 周二,针对感谢信的写作要求，我们应该注意以下几点：,1.,格式要正确。与其他应用文写作一样，书信体裁需要在正文的前面加上称呼，在正文的末尾加上结束语，落款和署名。,2.,标点符号要正确。,Dear+,称谓的后面一定要用逗号，不能用冒号。还要注意英语的句号是实心的，并且涉及到书名、电影名或者作品名的，要大些，英语中没有书名号。,3.,考生需要根据题目要求完成写作。在这一部分，考生需要注意字数的要求是,120-180,字，不能少些或者超出。另外，虽然题目中并未对落款人作过多要求，但是考生还是有必要把敏感的人名、地名和学校名去掉，以防作弊嫌疑。,4.,通过三个题目的要求，我们都要明确表明我们的感激之心，表述时要目标明确，语言贴切、充分，内容言之有物，句子流畅地道。,17,2025/4/29 周二,:2016.12,第一篇：,For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay.Suppose you have two options upon graduation:one is to find a job somewhere and the other to start a business of your own.You are to make a decision.Write an essay to explain the reasons for your decision.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.,18,2025/4/29 周二,For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay.Suppose you have two options upon graduation:one is to work in a state-owned business and the other in a joint venture.You are to make a choice between the two.Write an essay to explain the reasons for your choice.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.,19,2025/4/29 周二,For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay.Suppose you have two options upon graduation:one is to work in a state-owned business and the other in a joint venture.You are to make a choice between the two.Write an essay to explain the reasons for your choice.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.,20,2025/4/29 周二,1.,这三道题目来自于,2013,年考研英语的题目，考的是大学生选择，考的是图画作文，一堆大学毕业生面临去向的选择。,2.,四级写作有四大必考题，第一个是教育文化,21,2025/4/29 周二,2017.6,第一篇：,买电脑（,sell a computer you used at college,）,Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write an advertisement on your campus website to sell a computer you used at college.Your advertisement may include its brand,specifications/features,condition and price,and your contact information.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1.,22,2025/4/29 周二,【,作文二题目,】,卖自行车（,sell a bicycle you used at college,）,23,2025/4/29 周二,【,作文三题目,】,卖书（,ell some of the course books you used at college,）,Directions:,For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write an advertisement on your campus website to sell some of the course books you used at college.Your advertisement may include a brief description of their content,their condition and price,and your contact information.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.,24,2025/4/29 周二,首先，在近些年的四级考试中，应用文考察几率并不是最高的，,2016,年考过感谢信，今年则考了广告。因此，从作文题材来讲，考生在日后的备考过程中也要复习要全面，不能只将复习重点聚焦在图画作文或者一句话作文这种短文写作上，还要同时关注应用文，而且应用文中的,书信、通知、广告、失物招领、备忘录,等都要复习。,其次，从考察内容上来讲，题目日益贴,近大学生的实际生活,，重在考察学生的实际写作水平，一些“假大空”的所谓模板句则越来越没有用武之地，因此，考生要切实提高写作水平，对于描写、记叙、说明、议论、举例等写作手法都要掌握。尤其是描写和记叙是广大考生的薄弱环节而且市面上的模板大多也是针对议论文的。例如，本次考试当中就设计到描写二手电脑和二手自行车的以及二手教材的情况。鉴于上述原因，平时加强英文写作训练就显得尤为重要。,再次，应用文的评分点和短文写作的评分点也不是完全相同。应用文的在评分时除了关注语言、结构、内容这三项主要评分标准之外，还特别关注关注格式和拼写这一评分标准，因为应用文中涉及到的专有名词可能会更多一些，这些都需要考生留意。,25,2025/4/29 周二,